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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update waiting to see how geet helps maan from all this mess.
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh no what a twist :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing twist in story
do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
i hope da truth cum out
plzz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice...

thoda confusion hai mujhe...but i guess...it will clear up by next part...

i hope geet will b able to save him...in fact every1 knows that maan loves geet...a lot...

continue soon..

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very very interesting update.
Looks like Inspector Sonny knows the khuranas very well.
Loved Geet standing strong and defending and trying to protect Maan
Hope the camera was on.
There are so many questions right now but guess they will be
cleared up as the story progresses.
The ending really sounded very interesting
I feel Sam and Sonny are acquainted.
If he already knows Sam well the problem might be solved soon
Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 34

Then he turned to Sameera and approached her, as Sameera raised her face that was hidden Sonny was surprised

I: oh, interesting, Sam baby, no doubt that you called the police first instead of calling your B***** brother.

Sameera was shocked to see that Sonny was the Inspector, she not even in her dreams thought that he would have ended up being a police officer.

She did not as much as utter a word, Sonny approached her and lifted her chin with his baton {stick that policeman use} she closed her eyes in fear, he laughed

I: Ms. Sameera Kapoor, so this Maan who is lying there UNCONCIOUS raped you, tell me Sam baby was it your first time

Sam looked at him with shock, did he know that nothing happened

I: I was thinking that there are no signs of loosing virginity, but seeing you I don't have any doubt, you lost yours years back, tell me babe did he really force you or was it the other way round like you pouncing on him

The three Khurana's and Yash were listening to the way Inspector Sonny was talking to Sameera, but as none of them liked her much and the fact that she accused Maan, did not interfere.

I: speak up babe, hey Khurana, you are lucky that it is this Witch who called us, you can call your lawyer, and Sam baby, if I find that what you said was not true I will see that you rot in prison, for two things; first lying and second giving me false hope that I could punish these Khurana's.

Sameera cursed her stars, she has from the beginning had an intuition that something will definitely go wrong, she just hoped she would have called her bro instead of police; she cursed Sasha for suggesting to call the authorities first.

Just then Sasha entered the cabin in her all rehearsed mode, she ran and hugged Sameera and asked about what happened

Inspector Sonny interfered

I: who are you?

S: I am Sasha

I: Sasha who?

S: I work here

I: you come daily at this hour

S: what do you mean?

I: I mean, do you daily come at 7 in the morning

S: no

I: then how come you are early today

S (she was not prepared for this): actually' wo'. I '. I had some work to complete today; yes I have some work that's why I came in early

I: ok, but I am not convinced, sit there and don't come near either of the two, get back (barked)

Sasha immediately moved back

The lady constables came and Sameera was taken, Sonny winked at lady and she got it, she examined her in front of every one, Sameera was quite uncomfortable, Sasha came forward and tried to stop them

S: you can not examine her like this, it's a doctor's job, and like this in front of everyone you are touching her at places

I: at places, oh Mrs. Rai don't touch her she may get aroused

Sasha was shocked by the comment Sameera was feeling very low, just then the Khurana lawyer entered, Sasha thought about calling the Kapoor's but Sonny noticed her taking out her cell, he smirked and called her

I: hey Sasha ji, don't even try to call for help, you missed that opportunity, we will call the Kapoor's once we are done with her and you

S: me, what I have done

I: as Dev here told, it was you who sent Maan's car back last night and asked the guard to lock the office

S: no

I: we have witnesses, you too can be arrested because you could be supporting either of the two, you could have done so because Maan told you to do so, in that case you are a partner in crime with Maan; and you could have done this for Sam so that she can pounce on him, in that case you are her partner, in either case you are a criminal, Mrs. Rai arrest her.

Sameera was also taken for the medical and Maan was lifted and taken to the police station, today in the court Khurana's will apply for bail.

so girls this was for today

hope you liked it

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part 35


Edited by smj1977.shruti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
o.. m... g..eee...
didnt expect sonny would be that much positive...
cant blame him 4 that rude attitude toward sam..

will u plz update regarding maan n geet's pov... let them gain their sense sooonnn...
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Posted: 13 years ago
i thought sonny is -ve ... lets wait and see wats in store

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