MN * YOU & ME - It's MAGIC. Part 18 - Pg 88. - Page 35

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As always...it's so beautiful Kinza !!😍😍

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fantastic part kinzuuu...!!!
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Oh dear wao Nupur was wearing my favorite color i am 100 % sure she was looking awesome
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Hey Fantasia (from other comments I realized ur name is Mahak), i loveddd the recent two chapters. Im lovinggg the transition, nupur is realizing that mayank is opinionated and his temper flares pretty fast but I love how she didnt let him speak about his bhabhi by covering his mouth. She'd the kind of girl to keep the family together. Loveddd the chapter to bits. I wake up every morning to this update, no wonder that I wake up at 7 on summer mornings even though I sleep at 1 or 2 am. Atleast thanks to your wonderful updates im forced to wake up. I am sooo looking forward to more MAGICAL moments that mayur will share. An arranged marriage is about making a lot of compromises and I love how nupur knows that mayank is not a perfect human being, but he's perfect for her. LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVEEED IT ! 👏continue sooon mahak
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Chapter # 11

"mujhe nahi jana!!",

Nupur declared it in the stiffest possible voice and snuggled in the blanket while mayank, who was standing by the bed side, was just left staring at her.

This was the first time she actually refused for something, "are you sure", mayank asked, sensing things are not normal.

"yes, I am sure!", this time the stiffness was doubled and frowning and surprised he sighed, "okay, as you wish", he said.

"so are you going to sleep now?", he asked again and the answer was a nod combined with a , "yes, good night!",

Mayank was amazed at this sudden calm nupur, according to him she was bubbly and sweet to be around and he loved her that way, although he loved her blush, but he loved when she talked confidently and answered back, but since evening she was just quiet.

"alright then, good night, I'll just be in the study", he shrugged his shoulders and went out. "maybe she needs to stay alone", he thought and opened his book.

It was normal for people to stay alone, and according to him it was nothing to freak out about. It was just normal.

**

As mayank went out of the room, nupur came out of the blanket and started crying.

"Now what?", she huffed wiping tears, "you asked him to leave so he left, now what do you want?", her rational side was questioning. "he should have stayed, and hugged me and asked what was the problem", her heart answered back crying and mind broke in a giggle, "will you kindly step out of your fantasies!, he did ask a lot of times and you didn't bother opening your mouth, he even said for a drive to make your mood better but you ignored and now finally when he left you have started complaining!"

"I am not complaining, .. I just .. urgh .. I just need a hug, I feel so low", she snuggled back in the blanket and started crying.

"if you want it, then go ask for it!, he isn't a mind reader that he could understand",

Finally the mind issued the warning, and leaving the tantrums of her heart behind, she got out of the bed.

**

Mayank was almost at the end of the book, thoroughly enjoying the vivid writing and shocking facts, when he felt someone was standing at the study door.

"nupur!, you were about to sleep!", he asked, gasping inwardly but nupur didn't answer just stood there with puffy cheeks.

"kiya hua?, what are u staring?", he asked still sitting on the chair, observing her and she just walked towards him, "ap mujhe akela chor kyun a gaye yahan?", she pouted and mayank closed his book sighing, "kindly zehan pe thora zor daleye Mrs Sharma, you said you wanted to sleep, so I just left!"

"but I didn't want to sleep", she pouted and mayank stared at her blankly, "but you said that you want to sleep".

"haan but I didn't mean it that way", she said in a weak voice, this time tears shining and mayank got up from his chair, "ab is main rone wali kiya baat hai nupur, please I am not at fault, you said you want to sleep so I left you alone, how would I come to know that you didn't mean that way", he sighed, completely clueless over what was happening.

"haan , per ab tu main bata rahi hon na k I don't want to sleep", she wiped her tears and mayank smiled at that adorable sight, "acha tu what do you want then?", he asked , wiping her tears,

"I need a hug", she almost murmured and mayank was lost, "what?, come again!", he was amazed and she cried even more, "I need a hug!", she shouted and mayank's heart filled with affection, "awww, tu is main kiya problem hai", he pulled her in a tight hug, and nupur closed her eyes in his embrace.

It was so strong and tight and she felt herself losing in that pair of arms, she held his shirt tight in her fists and hugged back, while he was softly stroking her hair, "waise if you want then I can give you much more than a hug", he whispered placing a soft kiss on her ear and she groaned, "I don't want anything more than a hug", she snuggled more and taking a step back, mayank sat on the chair and pulled her in his lap and she snuggled again.

After a while, when he was stroking her hair, he finally decided to tease nupur

, "umm, nupur, wasie why all of a sudden these mood swings?", he asked normally and nupur just kept mum, "tum pregnant tu nahi ho?', his voice was so plain that nupur raised her head and looked at him dumbfounded, "nahi!!", she said, suddenly her blood rising and she hid her face in his shoulders, "acha pregnancy nahi hai tu phir are you PMSing?',

His voice was again normal and nupur raised her head, this time shocked beyond limits.

"kya?", she didn't know what more to ask, while mayank suppressed his smile, "I just asked are you PMSing?, I heard us main bhi mood swings hotey hain",he smiled innocently and feeling her throat dry, she just stared back.

She was extremely awkward with all these sorts of talks, and she never even talked about all this to gunjan and here her husband was asking all this, why doesn't just hagrid comes and take me away to Hogwarts now!.

"mujhe nahi pata!',she just jumped off his lap and started walking out of the room and mayank followed her immediately, "acah acha sorry, nahi baat karte is bare main", mayank was following her as she stormed out of the study.

She entered the room and again hid inside the blanket and giggling mayank slid beside her and pulled her close, "kiya nupur?, I didn't know you are so shy to talk about all this, okay fine, I'll not mention it next time, bus aisey hi samjh jaon ga", he again smiled sweetly and nupur wanted to dig a hole and crawl into it.

"would you please be quiet and hug me", she glared at her and nodding mayank hugged her even more tight and nupur closed her eyes, with cheeks still red and mayank still in awe of her cuteness.

**

"all of you are complete idiots!",

A week later, this was how one morning nupur was jolted out of sleep. She opened her eyes to find that mayank was by her side and, his face showing what she feared the most ' anger - and the cell phone to his ears.

"I was not at Mars that I couldn't be informed!!", he said again and scared nupur removed his grip over her waist, and moved away.

"no thank you so much, I'll handle it on my own, half an hour, and I need every single file on my table otherwise you all are fired!, he disconnected the phone and pressed the button with so much force that nupur thought his thumb will protrude out from the other side of the phone.

"good morning", nupur said softly as he was about to get down the bed.

Mayank turned towards her, "yeah , morning", he got down the bed and opened the dresser.

. "main kapre nikal deti hon, you go for the shower", she came by her side and plainly nodding he headed to the washroom,

"breakfast kia karo gey ap?", she asked, although getting scared that he may not again scold, but they had a cooking session and mayank had allowed nupur to cook only when she wanted, and this was one of those events when she wanted to cook , by heart,

"just a cup of coffee",

he replied closing the door and nupur quickly, digged the dresser for clothes and placing them properly over the bed, she rushed to kitchen for coffee

**

"Why the hell are YOU scared!", she huffed switching on the coffee machine, "he wasn't scolding you, he was angry on his staff", she took a deep breath to calm things down, "and why did he had to drink coffee, I don't even know which type of coffee does he likes", she frowned putting the coffee beans in the machine.

She was confused, but then decided to make the coffee just like her dad liked, hopefully he will like too.

"aur ab cheeni", she was about to frown when mayank's voice interrupted, "nupur meri coffee?"

He was standing at the kitchen door, engrossed in wearing his wrist watch and nupur just stared, why on earth does he has to look so handsome all the time!.

"nupurr!!", he waved his hand and nupur fumbled, "haan ready hai, bus sugar?"

"two spoons", he said quickly and went out of the kitchen and quickly adding the required amount of sugar she came out seeing him frown again,

"to hell with you dhruv!, you just get out of my cabin right now, I'll come and find myself', he took the cup from her hands and nupur stepped back, while disconnecting the phone, he quickly started to gulp down,

"itni garm ..", nupur gasped and he placed the half ' empty cup away, and was on his way to the door when nupur rushed behind him again, "ap wapis..", she left the words in between because he turned frowning, "abhi mujhe ja tu leney do nupur!", he replied irritated and went away, while nupur took a deep breath, just making sure the tears don't flow out of her eyes.

Today was the first day he left for office after marriage and didn't even say a good bye.

**

Nupur tried to distract herself with different sorts of things but her mind wasn't moving on from mayank., and she didn't even expect it to move on. A number of times she thought of calling him, but the dropped the thought, a bit because she was hurt the way he didn't even say a good bye and a bit of scared that he will scold.

She went to mom and did spent time with pooja bhabhi and her kids, she avoided going to ashi bhabhi's home. Calling gunjan was out of option because she would sense the amiss tone in a second and then explaining her something she herself wasn't able to understand was impossible.

Finally the darkness took over and it was evening, which meant that mayank will be home any moment. She cooked the dinner, by her own wish and then changed and dressed herself in a simple pink night spaghetti strap night dress and wore the gown over.

The clock started to move and nupur kept her cell phone in front of her, expecting a call or a message.

It was about 12.30, when nupur's eyelids were getting heavy that she heard his car horn. Gaining all senses immediately, she rushed to the door and opened it to welcome mayank, but before she could open, she saw the lock twist on it's own

He is opening it from his own key!

Seeing the lock open nupur stepped back and he opened the door, amazed to find her awake, "tum ab tak jag rahi ho?', he straightaway threw the question and a hope that maybe he'll say something about coming home was shattered.

"umm, haan .. wo ap ne dinner kar liya hai?', she asked, in spite of threatening tears, "haan kar liya hai" he sighed and went to the bedroom and nupur didn't know whether to follow him or not.

'nupuur!!"

Just then he called her and she rushed to the room, "gi .", she said slowly

"I can't find the charger of my cell phone", he said fiddling in her drawers, "wo cupboard main hai", she took it out and handed him while she again came out of the room .

She was placing all the food in the fridge and wiping fresh tears.

Nothing has happened!, she made a feeble attempt to console herself but this time her heart was in a much more stronger position then her mind.

"bohat kuch hua hai, he is behaving so insensitive and so ..

"nupurr!!"

Yet again his voice interrupted and quickly wiping tears she rushed to the room and he was in bed, "you are done with your work in the kitchen?', he asked in a sleepy tone.

"nahi, bus 5 minute",

"jaldi khatm kar key aao", he said and closed his eyes again while she went back and finished the last bit of work,

She couldn't understand his tone, was it naughty, no it was not naughty, it was tried, then why ..

Shrugging off these thoughts, she entered the room back and the moment she slid in the cover, she was pulled close.

Ap kyun bula rahe they mujhe?", she asked slowly, making herself comfortable in his arms,

"neend nahi a rahi thi, tumhari adaat par gayi hai, and trust me I am not liking this dependence", he almost murmured and in a matter of a second she felt his breathing turn deep while nupur felt her heart shattering in pieces.

Adaat par gayi hai? .. not liking this dependence?'


Chapter 12 - Page 57

Edited by Fantasia. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sorry i unres dis l8
It was a fabulous update !! 😳
I love how nupz has became bold 😃
I wonder whats bothering mayank so much🤔😲
Update soon !! 😳
Edited by ArTizAngel - 14 years ago
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damn!! i compltely forgot i had to unres a post!!! 😕 this happens when u try to make me say everything on msgs kinzuu!!!! 😆

ok coming to the part!!!!!

i loved it the best uptil now!! inspite of the rpoblms they are facing, this part showed teh insides of teh characters!! i lovee the reflecting Nupur becasue this is something i never got a chance to knw fully abt! inspite of all my bragging abt how well i knw Nupur!!!!1 <3

thn comes the pmsing adn pregnant part!!!!!! 😆 OMG!! kinzuuu!! this wanst teh way we discussed but this was even better!!!! hayeee! kya baat hai Mayank jiju ke haina??? 😉

loved the passion the two shares !!!!!

as for the tensions surfacing between thm! i guess its normal in a newly married couple! they both have to accept eqach otehr and tht will taek time, but i love Nupr and Mayank's ways with each otehr!! they are so made for each other types!! <3

yeah and teh last line didnt bother me at all!! inspite of al Nupru's understandable fears ii guess Mayank is not the kind of guy who wont resist change in his life style!!! but the change is coming in shape of his wife, and i guess teh gesture was so cute!! he is getting used to her!! awww... 😍


such a perfect part kinzuuu!!!! loved it sooo much!!!!!!!!! ❤️

Edited by mulan. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update... 👏👏👏
so sab jaldi jaldi beet raha hain...😊
arey ye log HONEYMOON kyun nehi gaye?????😕😔😕
awww Nupur is so sensitive she need a hug n Mayank gave her sooo sweet...😳😉😳

uff ye itna kyun darti hain Mayank ne usse thori na danta...
aur ye Mayank ko kya ho gaya hain...😡😲😡
koi apne newly wife ke sath ase behave karta hain bhala...😡
woh to kitna romantic tha bt uske gusse ke samne sara romance pata nehi kaha gayab ho gaya...😕😔😕

tumhari adat par gayi hain n trust me I am not liking this dependence😲😲😲

goddd hw cud he can say dat he wasnt liking all dese????????😡😡😡
pagal hain kya SADU kahika...😡
ek to pura din Nupur se pyar se baat nehi ki upar jara sa accha bolna shuru karke hi mood kharab kar diya...😡😡😡

pata nehi kya hoga Nupur ka...😭😕
i jst hope ke Mr.ROMANTIC Sharma phir se wapas a jaye...😉
coz i dont like dis sadu...😡😭

love u lodsss🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago
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gosh what i was scared of happened after all...i feel so bad for nupur and i can completely relate to her character...the not being able to tell people your feelings and having mind-heart battles in your own head

im upset with mayank here...i hope this dependence/habit turns into a want/desire to be with her...i feel so bad for nupur that she's already feeling neglect so early on in the marriage...if its happening so early on, what will happen later on?

come on he shouldnt have to be reminded every time about what he should do...but i guess its the adjustment period and they dont fully understand each other...well nupur seems to understand him well but mayank?

well boys will always be boys...they love to think all feelings are result of uncontrollable hormones...ughhh

anyways nice update...may mayank grow some sensitivity in the next update

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