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Posted: 13 years ago

ooh that was so , so , sooo beautiful , i just lovd both parts.

maneet r so cute , maan iz so naughty never lv any chance.

akh sammera ... i so much heat her. such a b**h

do cont soon,

n thnx 4 da pm

lv meena

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Posted: 13 years ago
naughty maan...i love him like this...n now even mummyji knows it all...thisis getting awesome...

but then that sumaira n co. had to butt in...mr singhania knows everything...does this mean he will try to separate them...am feeling so sad...

continue soon n thnxxx
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 24.

I'm back with double updates today..so please hit the like button on both. Some of you have reserved your comments and not written anything please leave your feedback as I love to read your thoughts.

Adi took Pinky out for a date. "Adi sir thank you for taking me out, you don't know what it means to me". Adi stammered. "Pinky to be honest I'm feeling uncomfortable as I have never taken a girl out". Pinky looked at him with so much admiration. "Adi sir men like you don't exist much anymore but your a good guy". Adi blushed. Both hit it off and got to know each other better.

Back at KM, Singhania confronted Kumkum about Geet. "Kumkum is it true that Maan likes Geet and wants to marry her?".

"Sorry I have been meaning to tell you...just been busy and you come late too..yes I'm really happy Maan chose her..she's very down to earth sweet girl and they make a nice couple". Singhania listened to his wife and began thinking. "Kumkum let me think about it". "Maan ke papa they are in love and it's not up to us to decide anymore..So please give this alliance your blessing". Singhania just listened and did not give Kumkum any kind of reply.

Back at KC Sumaira, Sasha and John were celebrating. "Thanks to uncle Singhania we will finish this cute sweet love story for good...Uncle wants me to be Maan Singh Khurana's wife". "Poor Geet...her dreams will be shattered!" mocked Sasha. "Forget that I want to see Maan's reaction as he gets his way in everything...let's see how he gets to marry Geet". All of them were gloating that Geet will be kicked out of KM.

Maan was busy making preparations for Geet's birthday. He was really excited as he knew it was the first time Geet had ever celebrated her birthday. Maan wanted to make it special for her. Adi and Pinky decided to help Maan. "Adi what do you think I should get her? I mean I have got her a ring and gave her a chain..I want it to be something she is not expecting". Adi gave his trademark laugh. "Maan you are asking the wrong person I got no experience in women's shopping". "Sir I think you should get her something with a personal touch..not the same thing everyone gets..something only you can give her and no one else like". Maan smirked he had a brainwave. Maan's mobile rang and he was called in the office by his father.

Maan went in KC and was greeted by Mr Chopra and John. His father was busy with some file. "Papa you called me, anything important?" Singhania pretending he was busy. "Yes son you will need to go to Ramghar to see the plot there for our new project..ummhhh you will have to go 6 in the morning". Maan was looking disturbed. "Papa can I not go later?". "No son we are already delaying this project and it does not look good on our company". Maan reluctantly accepted.

Geet was helping Kumkum with her household chores. Maan had entered KM..he gestured Geet to come up. *Babaji ye Maan bi na, always putting me in awkward situations*. She somehow sneaked up to Maan's bedroom. "Maan aap bi na..kiya zaroorat ti muje aise chupke se bulane ka..agar auntyji dekh leti toh.."..Maan put his finger on her lips. "Chup bilkul chup..kitna bolo gi basanti...muje bi mocha do? Main office se papa se mil kar aa raha hoon..papa ne kaha hain muje Ramghar jana hoga warna bahut nuksaan hoga". Geet smiled knowing fully well why he didn't want to go. She cupped his face. "Mere dusht danav toh pir jao...we will celebrate my birthday when you come back". Adi walked in. "But Geet this is your first birthday with him he should just decline papa. "Geet I really don't want to go but what can I do?". "Maan just go, he's your father okay respect him". Maan smiled and nodded his head that he will go.

It was 10.30pm. Geet was feeling upset that Maan will be separated from her for a few days. She began looking at the ring he had given her. She kissed the ring. "Maan please come soon". She drifted off to sleep in Maan's thoughts. Maan entered her room with only his bottoms on and his boxers band showing. He saw Geet sleeping. He touched her face lovingly.


He lowered his lips and kissed Geet slowly and moved back to see her face. She moaned in her sleep "Maan". He smiled that even in her sleep she couldn't forget him. He kissed her on her lips this time continuing the kiss to an open mouth kiss. Geet started stirring and opened her eyes shocked "Maan aap?"...he put his arms either said. "Happy birthday Geet". She looked at his shirtless chest and began getting flustered. Maan smirked at Geet getting turned on my his shirtless presence. She got up and began panicking. "Maan if anyone see's us at this time of night they will get wrong idea". Maan touched Geet's chin with his finger.

"Geet I wanted to celebrate your birthday before going, its 12am now so thats why I came at this time". He grabbed Geet's hand and took her to the roof top. Geet saw the roof top decorated with heart shaped balloons.

She could see a beautiful romantic cake for her too. She smiled at the length Maan had gone to make her perfect so romantic.

Maan had brought her so many gifts that she was feeling overwhelmed by the whole gesture of her lover. Maan bought her perfumes such as Midnight poison, Armani code, Dolce Vita and Allure. He bought a pair of sexy killer heels, as he loved seeing her in heels.

He brought her a Gucci clutch bag and a handbag. "Geet I felt bad going without doing anything for you, it is your first birthday with me". Geet hugged Maan "Maan thank you...all the gifts are really nice..Maan you spent so much money on me".

"Miss Hoshyarpur don't think I spent money on you I'm paying you back for being my secretary..anyways there more...uh Geet...this is your bridal lengha and your matching jewellery..I wanted to see you as a bride before everyone else..on our wedding day I will be the last to see you.." Geet blushed and looked at the lengha-it was divine. The he showed her a gold sari which was backless with a knot tieing it. Maan looked nervous "Geet there is one more dress I would like to see you in". He showed her the models picture..she was dressed in strapless top and a mini skirt. Geet looked at the photo. "Maan shall I try it on?". Maan shook his head. "No Geet I can see you in it after we marry..aur vaise bi I can't control myself seeing you normally and seeing you in this hot dress..well that would be challenging for me". Geet blushed.

Maan waited for her with bated breath and she came out looking like a beautiful angel.

Maan inched intensely towards her.."Geet meri hone wali dulhan...you look extremley beautiful..meri nazar na tume lage..Geet...very soon I will marry you and fill your maang with sindoor and you will become my wife..by wearing my gift well you have made me a happy man...I can't find the right words to tell you how much I adore you Geet...". Geet got emotional and hugged Maan. She went back and changed into her normal clothes. Maan took her hand and sat on the swinging sofa.."Geet very soon we are starting our new life...Geet you have given me so much happiness..you accepted my forced friendship, then my love, then despite not wanting to you let me come close and you have blessed me with your pureness..I can't forget that ever..I love you, admire you and respect you" He lay in her lap and kissed her hand. Geet stroked his toned chest, making whirly patterns.

"Maan I should thank you for being the most romantic guy any girl can have AND for always coming shirtless infront of me...my very own Salman Khan!" Maan got up and pretended he was annoyed "Kiya kaha? Salman Khan?" Geet hugged him. "Your even hotter than him". Maan smiled and hugged her back. "So that means Geet that you find me sexy?" Maan looked at her intensely and got up and started swinging the sofa.

He kissed her when the swing came near..."Bolo na?" Geet blushed and he kissed her again. He stopped the swing and sat right next to her grabbing her by the waist. She began hyperventilating. "Geet I asked you something?" he huskily asked. "Maan..wo..aap bahut hi dhak dhak ho". She shyly hugged him and he smiled at his bride to be. Maan told her that they will be intimate now after marriage. Geet cut the cake and they fed each other.

"Geet I really don't want to leave you..I will miss you so much but I have to go..I have spoken to Maa she will arrange our wedding soon because I really can't bare the distance between us". Geet went to her bedroom and shut the glass door. Maan looked on...Geet put her hands on the glass..and Maan put her hands matching her hand..she tilted her head towards the glass and he matched her..he inched his lips towards her and she kissed him through the glass. They waited a moment and Geet pulled away shyly and shut the curtains. Maan looked on feeling emotional.

Precap; Singhania confronts Geet.

Previous: Part 23
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Edited by Mahi-Maan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i bet singhania is going to create problems for maan and geet x
hope nothing bad happens...
i loved it x

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Posted: 13 years ago
yaar pls post moree as u use to when u just started with ur firt ff i know im greedy but pls luv u ur the best keep it up im sure that maans dad is going do somthing bad pls hoping it wont be depressing pls
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 25

Maan left for his bedroom feeling really romantic and upset that he had to leave Geet. Geet was about to lay down that she saw a packet wrapped up with a note. She opened it curiously.

Geet,

I know you would get embarrassed if I gave you this so I left it for you to see it alone.

Tumara Maan xx

Geet opened and found pretty lacy lingerie in black, maroon and mint. She was shocked and her heart began thumping. Her mobile rang, she picked it up. "Geet did you see my last present?"..Geet felt breathless. "Yes" she replied shyly. "uh..I hope you like it". "Maan...how did you know my size?" she asked timidly. Maan smirked.."Geet when we went shimla and I took off your clothes I found out your size then..". "Maan thats not right you know everything about me thats personal".

"Geet when you love someone you want to know everything about them...EVERYTHING". Geet went crimson red. "Geet have I made you shy? Haiii thats what I love about you...sharmate hue tum bahut achi lagti ho..anyway I'm sure you will look sexy in them.." Maan teased her for a further few minutes and Geet blushed.

Maan left in the morning and Geet was the only person that was up. She sadly bid him farewell. Kumkum got her a really nice pink sari and she wore it on her birthday. She came on the breakfast table and Singhania looked at her. "Geet I have nothing against you but why have you trapped my innocent boy...I let you stay here and you took unfair advantage by trapping Maan in your love..is this how you pay me?". Geet looked on tearfully. "Maan ke papa its not like that..she really loves him and he loves her...". "Kumkum listen I arranged Maan's marriage with Sumaira and she's ruined our dreams...I cannot marry Maan to her...I have decided this girl cannot marry Maan and she has to get out of his life as soon as possible". Geet began sobbing and Singhania ordered her bags to be packed...Geet wrote a note to Maan to forget her and she left his presents including her lengha and lingerie. She took her bag and was about to leave that she began to feel dizzy and fainted.

Singhania and Kumkum panicked and called the doctor. The doctor came out after checking Geet. "Mr Singhania Geet is under three weeks pregnant..due to stress and a sudden shock she had fainted". Singhania looked on shocked and Kumkum was devastated. "Kumkum hum Karan ko kya jawaab dege ke hum ne uss ki beti ka ye khiyaal rakha? Geet was our responsibility and we have let him down".

Singhania called Maan home the same day. Adi rang Maan and told him about what had happened and that Geet was pregnant. He came back as soon as he heard. Maan entered the KM and went to his parents. "Maan I never thought I would see this day...I mean you slept with that girl and made her pregnant..you know her father will be devastated hearing this...I mean why didn't you use protection..Maan your very smart so how did you make this mistake?". Maan sat there explaining what had happened in Shimla and his parents understood. "Maan we have to do your wedding soon..like next week..otherwise Karan will find out and I don't want my friend's honour being questioned..so I will ring him later and pretend I had a heart attack and wanted my son's wedding as soon as possible..so we will do the wedding without him". Maan hugged his father and Kumkum hugged Singhnia on doing the right thing.

Maan went to Geet feeling really sorry for her. He could tell she had been crying. She saw Maan and hugged him and began sobbing on his shoulder. "Maan you said you used protection and how did i become pregnant?"..Geet smoothed her hair away. "Geet I didn't I didn't want you worrying about it.."..Geet began panicking "Maan what must everyone think of us..me? My baba will get shamed". Maan calmed Geet down and told him what his father wanted to do. Maan wiped Geet's tears. "Geet aaj ke baad main ansoo nahin dekhna chahta..aur ab tume apna khiyaal rakhna hoga..humare baby ke liye hmmm? ". She smiled and Kumkum came to give her boiled milk with saffron. "Beta Maan ne hume sab kuch bata diya hain..iss main aap dono ki galti nahin ti halaat hi kuch aise hogai teh..bahut jald hum shaadi karne wale dhoom dhaam se...aur rona bund karo mera pote par asar par raha hain". Maan smiled and Geet felt slightly at peace.

Singhania called Mr Chopra to discuss breaking off Sumaira alliance they had been discussing. "Chopra saab I don't know how to say this but I cannot marry my son to Sumaira..as he loves someone else-Geet. You will understand it's not easy to force children these days and you know how strong headed Maan is. Chopra saab Maan is my only son that god gave us after many years of praying and fasting so I cannot make him unhappy. He's all I have got and his happiness is paramount to me". Chopra did not like what he heard but agreed with Singhnia and promised it would not effect their friendship.

The next day Kumkum gave the order of the cards and got them printed. She called the jewellers home and began selecting Geet's wedding jewellery. Maan selected her Mangulsutra. Geet sat there feeling upset as her father was not there. Kumkum told them that they had rang her father and he was really happy with the alliance and gave them his blessings. All the preparations and decorations Adi and Pinky were arranging.

Maan took Geet shopping for his and her clothes. Geet began feeling a bit better now that her future seemed secure. She was worried about Maan's papa."Maan your papa is happy isn't he?"

"Of course! My happiness is his happiness..I told you Geet don't worry we are getting married now and don't be depressed our baby will be feeling it".

Maaneet came back home, after shopping for all their wedding outfits. Kumkum showed them there wedding card that was to be sent out. They were shocked within a day Kumkum had sorted so much out. "Maan I have told our relatives and friends about your wedding, tomorrow sangeet's starting and two day times it's your mehndi and the following day it's your wedding". Maan smiled at Geet and she blushed.

Chopra told Sumaira and she smashed her mirror. "Papa I will not tolerate this insult...how dare they refuse my rishta for that cheap looking girl Geet". John consoled her. "Sumaira we will destroy them but with a sweet knife, we will act like the Khurana's friends and ruin them..just be patient". She calmed down and Chopra hugged his distraught daughter.

Kumkum told Maaneet to stay away from each other till their wedding. Maan felt helpless as he wanted to be near Geet and his baby. He rang her in the middle of the night. "Geet how are you and our baby?" "We are fine Maan..just missing you". Maan sighed "Geet I wish I could be near you both but we only got 4 days to wait and you both will be in my arms in MY bed". Geet blushed. "Aur vaise I was thinking ke how how it will be making love to you for the first time on our suhaag raat with our baby witnessing it". "Maan!!!" she hyperventilated. "I mean seriously I find it a turn on..see our suhaag raat will be special...our baby's papa making love to his hot mummy". Geet shyly buried her face in her pillow. "Maan before you get carried away I'm putting the phone down". "Acha acha before going give me a kiss". Geet kissed her phone and he kissed her back.


[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yLqDLz9H-Zw[/YOUTUBE]


Precap; countdown to Maaneet's wedding😳

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Next: Part 26


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Edited by Mahi-Maan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
She's Pregnant!! 😲😲
PREGNANT!! 👍🏼
Jeez .. Didn't Expect That x 😕
That's A Suprise ...
I'm Shocked... 😲
😲Hate Maan's Dad ...
How Dare He Kick Geet Out... 😡😡
I Bet He's Going To Hate Geet .. 😭
I'm Hating Chopra Already..
Get Rid Of Samaira Please ... 😡😡
Run Her Over Or Something Just Keep Her Away From Geet 😔
I Don't Think Maan's Dad Is Happy With This Rishtaa ...
I Loved The End Bit ..
Whatever You Do Mahi Don't Let Samaira Find Out Bout Geet's Pregnancy x

xx
Edited by Nazmaa - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanxx darling for cleaning the mess now i can leave to work in peace😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART 24 WAS FABULOUS😉 HE GOT HER SO MANY PRESENTS😲 MAAN WAS SO ROMANTIC AND THE PERFECT HUBBY😳 I LOVED THE UPDATE!!!!


AND TO TELL U THE TRUTH I CAN'T W8 FOR THEM TO BE MARRIED EITHER...I'M SO EXCITED..THAT I'M GETTING GOOSEBUMPS THINKING ABOUT IT😆😆

AUR PAPA JI...PLZ GIVE IN AND SAY YES FOR YOUR SON'S HAPPINESS!!!

OKAY GOING TO READ NEXT PART😉 BUT U KNOW WHAT...I REALLY THOUGHT MAAN BEING SO NAUGHTY AND ALL WOULD GIVE GEET ANOTHER PRESENT..LIKE LINGERIE OR SOMETHING😳😳 BUT KHER MAYBE ON THE WEDDING NIGHT HE MIGHT😆😆
Edited by maaneetfanatic - 13 years ago
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OMG PART 25...EVEN THOUGH IT'S NOT DONE YET...I KNEW IT...I KNEW IT...I KNEW IT!!!

1. MAAN WOULD BUY HER SEXY LINGERIE😳

AND

2. GEET WOULD GET PREGNANT 😲

BUT I'M GLAD THAT THE SITUATION IS UNDER-CONTROL...I MEAN FINALLY AFTER KICKING BECHARI GEET OUT😡😡😡😡 MAAN'S PAPA AGREED😃

AND NOW THE WEDDING...WOW SO EXCITING😉

I'M REALLY LIKING HOW U R TAKING THIS STORY AND MOVING IT FORWARD...JUST LOVIN IT😛😉

AND ABHI SE MAAN IS ACTING LIKE A GOOD "TO BE PAPA"...SO CUTE😍

I HOPE KI FUTURE MEIN BECAUSE OF THIS PRE-MARITAL SEX/PREGNANCY SE VAJE SE KOI PROBLEM NA HO..MAANEET KE BEECH MEIN😲


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