~Maine Pyar Kiya~FF Maaneet *Thread 1* - Page 66

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey gr8 part,,
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome so nice love da way maan made geet happy n gona to talk abt his marriage *hey babaji i cant wait 4da next update plz update soon*

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Posted: 13 years ago
simply beautiful brilliant updates
wow finally they broke the barrier
love how geet undertstand maan
his so naughty of him to say everyday i'll
be their SR so sweet of him
me loving how the story progressing
waiting eagerly next
thank yu so much for double update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb prt,well makng luv b4 weddng is justified here in their cicumstnces.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Really really really awesome:)

please update soon =D

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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 22


Hello my lovelies🤗...I'm back...Before I continue with my update just want to say thank you for hitting the like button..still a little complaint when I give double updates..some of you press like on one of them and not another so please make sure you do. And further request feedback on all updates is very much appreciated.

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I promise our suhaag raat will be special..". He assured her and she began to understand him. "Maan I feel in pain"."Well thats normal...and sorry for that". He hugged her and sighed a relief that she was well. He vowed that he needed talk to his mother about marriage.

Maan wound up his project and decided to take Geet back to Delhi. Geet felt a part of her was missing. She trusted Maan but her childhood girly dreams seemed had ended. She was very quiet all the way. Before coming home Maan asked her to be happy as her silence will raise questions. His mother will ask him why Geet is acting upset. She promised to keep a happy demeanour.

They reached KM...and found some relatives had come over to stay over for a couple of days. Maan met his parents and Geet tried her level best to act the old Geet. Geet went upstairs as she was still feeling lethargic from the events that took place in Shimla. Maan found his mother alone and went and put his head in her lap. "Kiya abaat hain mera bte ko aaj Maa ki itni yaad agai..did you miss me beta?"

"Of course Maa..Maa you love me na?" he looked at her with serious eyes. "Beta ye koi poochne ki baat hain?" He got up and took his mother's hand and kissed it. "Maa I need to talk to you..its important..you know Maa..". One of their relative came in and asked Kumkum for some medicine. She got up and Maan just shook his head. A missed opportunity.

Meanwhile Geet lay in her bed, still finding the after effects of losing her virginity painful and upsetting. Then she remembered Maan's words and nothing was important than him. She picked up her mobile and texted him- "Maan I need to ask you something". Maan was wondering why Geet had not rang her but then he heard his sms bell. He read it with a straight face and texted her back."Geet go ahead". She wrote it so many times and then deleted it. Then she knew she had to ask him. She typoed her message-"Maan how was it like..us..you know..." . This time she sent the message. Maan opened his message and smiled at the question. He went to his bedroom and rang her.

She heard her iphone ring and saw it was Maan. She nervously first looked around *Babaji shall I pick it?* Eventually she decided to pick it up. "Geet I just got your text..what exactly you wanted to know?". Geet was stuck for words, she was blushing like crazy. "Maan wo...main..main ye janana chaati ti ke...I was unconscious so I don't know what it was like the first time we..we...made love". Maan smiled at the question and sat down. "Geet to be honest it was horrible, I mean it really wasn't making love..I hated myself for doing it..you were like a log..." Geet got really upset. "It was that bad Maan?". "No but it was just necessity..the day we do make love..well you will know the difference...I didn't even look at you..just did what I needed to..but one thing I'm happy about..people after marriage find out if their wife is a virgin and I found out before and I feel lucky and special...I can't wait for us to be married..I tried to talking to maa but she is busy with the visitors..but soon I will make you mine I promise..you do trust me?"

"Haan Maan apni Jaan se bi ziyada...Maan aik aur baat you did use protection didn't you?".Maan paused "yes so don't worry". Both spoke till 1pm and went to sleep.

Maaneet entered KC..and went back to the usual business. Maan could see Geet felt still guilty at what had happened. He tried to make her take her mind of things by loading her with lots of work. Mr Singhania entered the office and saw Geet working diligently. He went up to her. "Geet...tumare baba will be proud of you..Maan always tells me how hard you work..your baba is so lucky to have a daughter like you". Geet smiled and was blown away as her uncle hardly ever talked to her. *Babaji that means uncle likes me.* He lovingly touched her cheek and left leaving a happy Geet. Maan watched that Geet had returned to normal. She went into Maan's cabin. "Maan aapke papa ne muje kiya kaha.."

"Haan suna tumare hone wale susar ne kiya kaha..see he loves you..and the day is not far that I will ask your hand in marriage from uncle..just let him return".

Geet profusely blushed and Maan took a packet out and gave it to Geet. She opened it and found that it was a red bridal dupatta.

"Maan ye kis liye?". He came near and took the dupatta and put it on her head. "Meri hone wali dulhan ke liye". Geet blushed and held his hand. "I can imagine how stunning you will look as a bride...Geet your the most beautiful girl I have ever seen..and I can't wait the day your all mine", Geet took the dupatta off and folded it. "Maan I will keep this for the rest of my life". She kissed his cheek. He intensely looked at her "Geet bas itna sa kiss..Yaha nahin?" he pointed at his lips. She inched near and kissed his lips. "Maan in honto ko koho ab sab kuch shaadi ke baad".

Sumaira on purpose barged into Maan's cabin. Maaneet had separated by then. "Ye kiya batamizi hain..why didn't you knock?" Sumaira just looked at Geet. "Sorry I had something important to tell you I forgot". Geet walked out with the packet clutching it and smiling thinking of their wedding.

Back at KM, Kumkum was entertaining her guests for the last day. She was really busy with them. The khurana's were all sitting with their visitors. Maan sat next to Geet pretending they were playing noughts and crosses. Instead he kept writing love notes to her..like Maan loves Geet..Maan ki Geet..Geet hui Maan ki...I love you xxx. When it got late Maan got up and forgot to put the note away...instead he left it there. Maan followed Geet to the top of their house. "Geet what you doing here?"

"Nothing Maan just felt like being alone for a little while". Maan picked her up and began talking to her. "Geet you should be taking care of yourself". He kissed her on her lips. "Maan your unnecessarily worrying I'm fine".

Kumkum was tidying up and found the love notes...she was pleasantly shocked. She smiled and followed Maan where he had gone..and she wasn't surprised to find him carrying Geet into her bedroom. She smiled and started cooking a plan.

Geet was up dressed in a simple green and white shalwar kameez. She was sitting lost in Maan's thoughts. "Geet come with me...Maan is waiting for us..I need to discuss marriage with him". Geet felt really nervous as she knew Maan had not talked to her yet. Geet stood next to Kumkum knotting her dupatta. There was a line of 12 girls, all modern, wearing all western clothes and very short hair. Maan came down looking apprehensive. "Maa what is this?"

"I am searching for girls for you..didn't you say you wanted to settle down?"

"But Maa.." He approached her. "Don't worry I narrowed them down to 12...see all of then are modern and no long hair..just like you wanted...so Maan you choose and I will taLk to your papa". She looked at Geet. He sidehugged his mother. "Maa I thought long and hard..such girls don't make good wives do they? I mean look at them the way they are dressed..you know Maa I'm a bit conservative"

"But Maan you told me you wanted such a girl".

"Haan Maa, that was then, I'm mature now..I think you should choose someone you would prefer". Kumkum smiled at Maan's cleverness. "But Maan If I choose what If you don't like my choice?"

"Maa you choose and I don't like?- that NEVER WILL HAPPEN".

"Okay then Sumaira?? NO? Okay what about my lovely Geet?"

Maan kept a straight face "Uh Geet? Well Maa if you say so...you know best". Maan walked out and turned to blow a kiss at his mother "Maa your the best". Kumkum took her bangles off and put them on Geet. "bahut shararti ho tum dono..itne din tum dono mujse chupate rahe aur muje pata bi nahin chala...Geet tum mere dusht danav Maan ki Geet bano gi? Bahut jald main tum dono ki shaadi karva du gi" she hugged Geet and kissed her forehead. Before leaving she said "Geet ye lo..tum dono ki amaanat". Geet looked at it, it was the love notes they had written to each other. Geet looked down and blushed.

Maan rang her from the office. "Geet I'm so silly I didn't even take you with me because of what Maa did..Maa just rang me about our marriage...toh pir kiya khiyaal hain?" he asked in low husky voice. "Khiyaal? Khiyaal ye hain ke shaadi toh ab karni pare gi na?". She shyly said. "Geet I heard it is the season of marriage..to be honest I can't wait to have you in my arms and in my bedroom as my wife...so let's become one now". She hyperventilated thinking of their marriage and stayed silent listening to Maan's romantic banter. "Aur vaise Geet my secretary you should be in the office now..come and we will go out at lunch..need to talk to you about our wedding".


[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=32tNhs2Vk8U[/YOUTUBE]

Precap; Maan is acting showing Geet what will happen in their suhaag raat..and Sumaira looks on.☺️😲

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Edited by Mahi-Maan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
YAY!!!!! I HAVE BEEN WAITING...NOW AM REALLY EXCITED😍

SO FAR...IT'S GREAT...GEET IS SO INNOCENT...LOVE IT...😆😆
Edited by maaneetfanatic - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
😕😕Really?? When did maan use protection...or were we suppose to assume he did...oh no..is there another shocker for us...and geet gets preggy😲 Can't w8 to read more😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
I ABSOLUTELY ADORED THE RECENT UPDATE...JUST WOW👏 I'M SO HAPPY TO SEE THEIR LOVE BLOSSOMING😳 IT'S SO CUTE AND ROMANTIC😉 AND WOW..MAAN'S DAD SPOKE TO GEET FOR THE 1ST TIME😲 THE DUPATTA PART MADE ME GO TO CLOUD NINE😍 SO CUTE AND LOVEY DOVEY😆😆 AND UH OH..MAMA NE PAKAD LIYA CHUPE RUSTUM KO..😆😆 BUT I KNOW SHE IS GOING TO BE AN ASSISTANT TO THEIR LOVE LIFE..CAN'T W8 TO SEE WHAT SHE COOKS UP😆😆 AWESOME UPDATE YAAR...DBL UPDATE TODAY OR NO??😉



OOOHHH WOW WHAT A PLAN KUMKUM...LOVE HER🤗 YAY AT LEAST SHE AGREED NOW!!! NOW AB PAPA KI BARI😲

OOOYEEE YEH KABAB MEIN HAADI KAHA SE AH GAYI...PRECAP LOOKS AWESOME😛
Edited by maaneetfanatic - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 23


Geet came into the office and saw Adi telling Pinky off. She intervened. "Adi be nice to Pinky..your like my brother so I'm asking you to give this sweet girl a chance..she likes you so see if you like her". Pinky blushed and Adi nodded her head that he will take her out on a date. Maan saw Geet coming towards his cabin...she was blushing and she had a glow to her face.

"Maan dekho toh Auntyji ne muje ye kangan diye shagun ke thor par.." Maan smiled seeing her so happy. He got up and gave her his hand. "Geet chalo". He took her out and much to everyone's amazement they went out like a couple. Geet felt shy but she was excited that Maan was showing her off in public. They went to Costa Coffee shop. Maan started talking "Geet our relationship started with friendship but now it is one of love..do you remember the times we came here and deepened our relationship? Geet we are getting married now and I want you to know that I will try my best to keep you happy". Geet had tears in her eyes. "Geet I have got you something and you have to accept it". He took out a box. She opened it with a smile. It was a heart shaped diamond platinum ring.

"Maan I will only accept it if you put it on me". Maan slowly put it on her and kissed her hand. She hugged him and kissed the corner of his mouth. At the office everyone told her that the boss is defnitley having an affair with Geet. Sumaira's blood was boiling. She rang her father. "Papa humara shak sai nikla Maan is seeing Geet..but I'm not 100% but all the staff are saying they went hand in hand at Lunch time". "Acha beta keep an eye on them, we cannot tell Singhania till we have solid proof".

Maan came back and went out to attend meetings. His staff stayed till 7pm and left for home. Adi asked Geet if she wants to go home. "Nahin Adi Maan will come back as he has to collect some file..plus I need to finish this". Geet waited but fell asleep on her chair. Maan walked in and Sumaira followed him in. He came in Geet's cabin and found her asleep. Her hair had fallen on her face. He removed the strand and whispered in her ear "Geet get up". He began nibbling her ear, she got up instantly.

Sumaira watched from a distance. Maan hugged her and took her dupatta off. "Maan what you doing..agar kisi ne dekh liya toh?"

"Chup bilkul chup" he put his finger on her lip.

She stood there silently. "Geet ever since our marriage talks have began I all day dream about our suhaag raat...". He spread her dupatta and put it over her face. "Our bedroom decorated with red and white roses...you sitting on the sej...looking edible as a bride..". "Maan" she tried to stop him. "Uh-uh let me finish...me coming near you while you sit there shyly..waiting for me". He put his forehead over her covered forehead. "I lift your ghoonghat to see my beautiful dulhan all adorned with heavy jewlellery..Geet you better wear a bridal nose ring..I always imagine you with that". "Maan" she interrupted. "Ssshhh Geet..." he lifted her ghoongaht while Geet was hyperventilating. "I lift your chin to make you lift your lowered lashes...and you look at me shyly"...he began pretending he was taking her jewellery "Geet I will remove your maang tikka first and kiss your forehead..then help you take your nose ring.. then your earrings, your necklace and your bangles...i will leave your payals as I want to hear the sound when we make love". He pulled her by the waist and began kissing her eyes, her cheeks, her nibbled and licked her ears...she moaned "Maan please stop"...Maan came and faced her and said intensely. "And if you stop me I will twist your hand behind you and"..he began kissing her passionately...she tried to resist but it was no use he was too powerful...he began touching her breasts and giving her kisses on her neck..she began getting aroused by his musky aftershave and his stubble grazing against her. She moaned and gave in to him. "Geet I'm going to tear your clothes apart and make love to you all night...are you with me"? he said huskily. She managed to say "Yes". He pinned her to the wall and began giving her French kisses..his tongue was intimately playing around with her. Geet put her hands under his shirt and started stroking his chest and back.

He turned her around and hugged her from the back. "Geet our suhaag raat will be hot...this is just a trailer...and anyway..be ready for Maan Singh Khurana as I'm very hot blooded". Geet blushed.

Sumaira looked on shocked- Maaneet had become so close and they did not even realise! She left before they noticed she was spying.

The next day Singhania called Mr Chopra and asked Sumaira hand in marriage for Maan. "Singhania saab have you asked Bhabi and Maan?".

"Mr Chopra Maan is my son and he never does anything I don't approve of and Kumkum well she likes Sumaira". John walked in. "Uncle no she likes Geet..she has chosen Geet as her daughter in law".

"Singhania saab a lot has been happening in your house..that girl has got some hold over Maan..god know what magic she has done on him..you know Maan he never was into girls..". Singhania looked confused and then got angry. "Uncle did you know that he has given her your gold chain that you gave to Maan..and recently he bought diamond ring worth a million rupees..I mean she is golddigger". Singhania was not too happy as he lived in high society and marrying someone like Geet will be against his status quo. He vowed to get rid of her.

Maaneet were in the porch with handsome. Geet kissed Handsome. "Lucky kabootar..I have to force some people to give me kisses and here he gets them free..par Geet shaadi ke baad koi nakra nahin samji tum". Geet shook her head "Maan shaadi ke baad aap badal mat jana". Maan came and took her hand. "Geet after our wedding I will have full licence to do whatever I want..then you can ask me how was it like making love to you..and I will tell you and show you in detail". He gave her bedroom eyes.

"What about protection?"

"Protection? No protection..I want 10 children in fact I want as many baby Khurana's as we can..I can afford having as many as I want". "But Maan how will I cope?"

"I don't know about that..uh thats your problem". She looked at him shocked. "Geet I was joking but I do want babies and for babies we have to.." She nudged him. "Maan..stop being naughty.."

"Baby I haven't even started being naughty yet...let our suhaag raat come and you will know how naughty MSK can get". She blushed and he hugged her. Both looked at the sky thinking when that day will come when their desires will come into being.


[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r4g9zKRe-Is[/YOUTUBE]

Precap; Maan celebrates Geet's birthday.

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Next: Part 24

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Edited by Mahi-Maan - 13 years ago

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