FF(Maneet):Dil mil gaye Thrd 2 Upd prt 34 pg 140 - Page 66

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mayurmaaneet

piya .. wow.. just read it one go.. sweeet.. loved all the confessions.. dialogues kaafi sweet hain. haye kahin mujhe diabetes na hojaye.. lol.. but seriously i love maaneet romance, confession dialouges.. cont sooon.. hmm ab yeh kaunsi larki hai pre cap mein..

Thanks Kareena...wo mystery girl ka khulasa jald hi hoga
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: todayzstar

Superbbb...❤️

cntnue soon..

Thanks dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you for your love and support. Here is the next part hope u will enjoy reading
love-Piya
PART 34

Maan: Geet ghar chale

Geet nods her head in approval

Maan drops Geet at her residence

Maan looks lovingly at Geet

Geet hugs Maan

Geet: Maan aapse dur jaane ka mann nahi kar raha

Maan: Mann tho mera bhi nahi kar raha Geet magar nazdikiyoon ke liye thodi bahut duri toh hume sehni hi padegi haina'

Geet: Nahi maan ab koi duri nahi hogi humare beech aap jaldi se mujhe apne ghar le jaayiye apni ardhangini banakar

Maan: ye bhi koi kehne ki baat hai aisa zaroor hoga magar usse pehle main apni geet ko kuch banthe hue dekhna chahtha hoon' meri geet pehle apni padai puri karegi'main nahi chahta ke mera pyar tumhare liye koi rukawat bane balki main ye chahtha hoon k mera pyar tumhari takat banne jiske sahare meri mishty apni saari khwahish aur tammana puri kare

Geet: Aaj apni kismat par yakeen nahi ho raha'najane maine aise kaunse ache karm kiye the k aap mujhe mil gaye'

Maan: Geet waise Savitri aunty kab wapas aa rahi hai?

Geet: Ma kal aa jayengi

Maan: Chalo achha hai 'waise bhi main soch raha tha k pinky ko request karke kuch dino tak tumhare saath rehne k liye keh du'tumhe akele rehtha dekh mera dil ghabra raha tha

Geet: iski koi zarurat nahi hai maan aur waise bhi aapke rehthe hue main akeli kaise ho sakthi hoon'mujhe jab kabhi bhi aapki zarurat hogi main aapko fauran phone kar dungi

Maan: Aur ye bannda aapki khidmat mein humesha haazir hoga

Geet: hmm'..

Maan: Geet ab raat bahut ho chuki hai tumhe aaram karlena chahiye

Geet: Good night Maan

Maan: Good night Mishty

Geet enters the house

Maan bhi chala jaata hai

Meanwhile,

Yash's house

Yash: Maan aur Geet kitne lucky hai'dono ek dusare se kitna pyar karte hai ek dusare ka kitna khayal rakthe hai'kitni sachhai hai unke rishte mein warna duniya mein aise bhi logh hai jo k dusaro k jazbaatho ka mazak udane mein bhi hishkichathe nahi'

Yash: Bahut kismatwale hothe hai wo logh jinki kismat mein sachhi mohabbat hoti hai

Same time

Meera's house

Meera: Mujhe Maan aur Geet ki help leni hogi kyunki wahi hai jo k mujhe yash ki misunderstanding solve karne mein madat kar sakthe hai'warna yash tho meri koi baat sunne k liye ready hi nahi hai'haan mujhe maan aur geet se baat karni hogi

Next Day

Geet wakes up from her sleep

She was recollecting all the sweet memories of her date which Maan had made so special

Geet(self talk): Maan ne mere liye itna kuch kiya aur maine kuch bhi nahi mujhe bhi toh kuch karna chahiye na'hmm'.kya karu

Geet: haan kehthe hai dil tak pauchne ka rasta peth se hothe gujartha hai'haan main maan k liye kuch special banathi hoon

Geet: Ek kaam karti hoon unhe lunch k liye invite karti hoon'haan ye thik rahega

Geet Maan ko phone karti hai

Maan: Good morning Mishty

Geet: Good morning Maan

Maan: Aaj subah subah apne iss gulam ki yaad kaise aayi

Geet: Ab kya kare humare gulam saahab hai hi itne aalsi ke unhe yaad dilana padtha hai k unki aawaz sunne ke liye koi kitne besabri se intezaar kar raha hai

Maan: Achha ji intezaar toh hum kar rahe the'waise aalsi naam tumhe kafi suit karta hai geet'nice name

Geet: Aapne mujhe 'mujhe aalsi kaha'

Maan: Geet ab kya kare main tumse pyar karta hoon iska ye matlab toh nahi hai na k main tumse jhooth kahu'aur waise bhi geet sach chahe kitna bhi kadwa kyun na ho samajdaari issi mein hai k hum usse accept kar le

Geet: Aapki toh khair nahi ' aur waise aap mujhe aalsi kyun keh rahe hai

Maan: Geet tumhe yaad diladu k aaj tum radio station mein jane k liye late ho chuki ho' aur tumhari aawaz se yahi lag raha hai k tum abhi abhi neend se jaagi ho

Geet: Ye sab aap ki wajah se hua hai

Maan: Ab ismein meri kya galti hai'o achha toh tum mere sapno mein khoyi hui thi waise issmein tumhari koi galti nahi hai Maan Singh khurana ka jaadu hi kuch aisa hai

Geet :Bade chale jaadugar banne'aapke ye paitre mujh par nahi chalnewale

Maan: maine kab kaha ke ye paitre maine tumpar aazmaaye hai

Geet: Kya? Aapke kehne ka kya matlab hai'aapne ye sab kisi aur ladki par aazmaaye the'ab aap mere saamne aayiye aapki toh khair nahi

Maan: Geet main toh mazak kar raha tha'aur waise bhi meri zindagi mein tumhari jagah koi aur le hi nahi saktha

Geet: Hmm' bus bus ab aur pyari baato se mujhe behlane ki koshish mat kijiye 'maine aapko lunch par invite karne k liye call kiya tha

Maan: Lunch lekin Geet aaj kya tum wakai radio station nahi jaa rahi

Geet: Maan wo main aapko batana bhool gayi 'jab yash kuch dino k liye bahar chala gaya tha tab uske jo additional programs the usse maine samala tha issliye ab kuch dino tak yash akele hi humara program samalega aur waise bhi mere exams paas aa rahe hai toh maine leave application de di diya tha aur wo manzoor ho gaya 'matlab aaj actually meri chutthi hai

Maan: ok ye tho achhi baat hai 'toh thik hai main aaj lunch par tumhare ghar pauch jaaunga

Geet: Main aapka intezaar karungi Maan

Maan: Love u Misthy

Geet: love u Maan

Call ends

Geet: Maan ko lunch k liye invite tho kardiya magar main unke liye kya banau aur waise bhi mujhe toh khana banana aata hi nahi

Geet: Haan unke liye parathe banathi hoon'atleast try tho kar hi sakthi hoon naa'

Geet gets a recipe book and starts her cooking preparations

Maan: Geet ko surprise detha hoon uske ghar jaakar

Maan: Adi aaj office ka saara kaam tum samal lena mujhe kuch important kaam hai aaj main office dubara nahi aayunga ok

Adi: Ji Sir

Geet's house

Yash Geet ko phone karta hai

Geet: Hi Yash

Yash: Hi Geet so enjoying your holidays haan

Geet: Kyun nazar laga raha hai yaar'kya hua Radio station mein koi problem tho nahi ho gayi

Yash: Nahi geet aisi koi baat nahi hai'maine tumhe iss liye call kiya k apne party ki jo CD thina wo aa gayi hai tujhe chahiye toh main kisi k haatho se wo bhijwa detha hoon

Geet: oh wow Yash... haan jaldi se bhijwa de

Yash: Thik hai Geet Lucky ko tere ghar k paas kuch kaam hai wo jaate jaate tujjhe CD de dega

Geet: Thanks Yash

Yash: Ok toh main phone rakhtha hoon program ko aage badana hai

Geet: Bye

PRECAP: Aata romance😳😳😳

PRECAP: Geet: "Maan ussdin maine jo aapke liye banaya tha wo pakode nahi balki gulab jamun the"😆😆😆

PRECAP: Maan: "Geet ye ladki aur koi nahi balki'.."😲😲😲

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Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
well kya kahe maaneet after confession kuch zyada hi romantic ho gaye hain...
aur to aur their nok jhok is just like a hubby-wifey...
waiting for atta romance for the past 3 updates yaar...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

love is in the air ... continue soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update...cont soon...precapes r nice...thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely part
i think that girl is meera
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow cute n nice update..
precap looks gr8.. continue soon

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