Maaneet FF ~ Kasak THREAD 2 ~ Pt 55 Pg134 - Page 69

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Posted: 13 years ago

superb 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

fantastic... mindblowing..
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update Mahimak...

it was truly a best update...
waiting for there wedding restlessly..
continue soon...:)


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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi,

Amazing ff. Really good concept pl add me on your pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Kriyanshlover

Hi,

Amazing ff. Really good concept pl add me on your pm list


Thanks a lot dear.. added u
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART 53

Maan.. she couldn't say more..
She hugged him holding him closer to her.. I love u
I love u too jaan..

She laid down on her bed, & dozzed off with his dreams, until she felt a strong grip around her waist. She moaned.. maan..
Then said still sleepy.. Oh ho babaji.. kitne sapne dikhayoge.. asli me wo kam tang karte hain jo ab sapno me bhi.. umm
She felt his breath fanning on her neck. She opened her eyes terrified. His strong grip grew even more stronger along her waist, now hurting her. She could smell, he was drunk. She inched her nose closer to him & immidiately pulled back. She put her hand on her nose..
Maan.. chi chi.. u r drunk.. maan hato yahan se..
He was nowhere in his senses. He ran his hands through her hair & held her scalp, pulling her closer to him. He put his fingers on her lips..chup bilkul chup.. & then replaced his finger by his lips. She protested, but he was farway strong for her. She parted her lips..Maan.. u r drunk.. plz hato yahan se.. she said in his lips. But he entered her mouth meeting her tongue. He was nowhere himself today. The kiss grew deeper & deeper, until he finally left her feeling breathless & just dozzed off.. even he didn't knew when. She closed her eyes out of tiredness & dozzed off.

Next Morning

She got up feeling awkward. She saw him & caressed his cheeks lovingly. But then she realized what he did last night. She started pushing him.. maan hato na..
Jaan.. plz thodi der aur sone do.. He held her hands & placed them on his chest. She somehow managed to push him away & made her way to the washroom.

He got up with a heavy head few hrs later. She came into the room with lemon juice.
Jaan.. mai yahan kaise..
She twisted her lips & kept the glass on the table.. yeh pee lena..
Par jaan.. yeh kyun.. aur batao na..mai yahan kaise aaya
She made her way out of the room.. arre jaan.. ruko tho..

She passed by Anni's room & also saw arjun & arohi there. Yeh dono yahan kya kar rahe hain.. she wondered..
She took a step forward to go inside but decided to hear their conversation.. chupke chupke
Arjun- Anni tune wahi kiya na jo maine kaha tha..
Anni- Haan arjun.. but yeh tho batao na ki wo drink kis liye tha.. aur aapne yeh kyun kaha ki bhai ko pata na chale..
Arohi- Guys.. koi mujhe bhi kuch batayega.. arjun.. kya ho raha hai ye.. kaun sa drink yaar..
Arjun- Arru tumhe baad me batayunga.. Tho anni maan ne wo drink pee li na..
Anni- haan.. but aapko pata hai wo drink peekar.. he was behaving so weird.. ek min ek min.. kahin wo.. chgi chi.. arjun tumne bhai ko sharab pila di..
Arjun- Wo..
Arohi- Sharab.. arjun..
Arjun- Wo tho bas mai use tang kar raha tha.. arohi tumhe yaad hai usne bhi mujhe tang kiya tha tho maine socha mai bhi kar leta hun.. ab dekhna abhi tak wo weird hi behave kar raha hoga.. he is not at all habitual of drinking.. saale ne mujhe zabardasti pilayi thi na..
Arohi- Uff.. arjun mai tumhare aur maan jiju ki in bachkani harkathon se thak gayi hun.. agar geet ko pata chalege na tho tum tho gaye..

Geet's mouth was wide open. She moved inside the room.
Jiju yeh sab aapne kiya..
Arjun stammered.. kya kya geet
Oh ho ab itne bhole mat baniye.. aapki wajah se meri neend bhi kharab huyi.. kitna pareshan kiya unhone mujhe..
Arjun & Arohi almost laughed at her innocence.. Arohi murmered to Arjun' Ise sharam nahi aati sab ke samne..
Arjun- waise geet kya kiya maan ne..
Wo maan.. She suddenly realized what all she was speaking. Aap log meri leg pulling band karo aur jiju aapne yeh sahi nahi kiya.. aapki wajah se mai faltu me unse naraz ho gayi..
Arjun- Geet wo tho bas mai.. mazak
Chaddo ab..

She silently peeped into the room. Shukar hai yahan nahi hain..
She quickly took the glass & took a step forward when he held her back. She dropped the glass on the ground out of her shivers.
maan chodiye na..
He pulled her closer to him. She fell on his chest with a jerk & they both fell on the bed. He rolled her & now he was on top of her. She just kept gaping at him.
Maan chodiye na plz
Jaan pehle yeh batyo why were u angry on me..
Reality struck her.. she realized mujhe tho inse baat nahi karni.. nahi nahi wo tho jiju ne kiya na.. maan ki kya galti..
Jaan kahan kho gayin..
Wo.. mai.. maan
Jaan batayo na kyun naraz ho..
Maan aapko yaad bhi hai kal aapne kya kiya.. arjun jiju ne aapko sharab pila di aur aap yahan aa gaye.. mujhe tang karne ke liye.. sari raat aapne mujhe sone bhi nahi diya.. She complained making a baby face.
He smirked.. acha..
Sharam tho aati nahi hai na aapko..
He nodded his head & inched closer to her. His breath fell on her making her shiver.
Maan ab plz chodiye na..
Naa..
Geet became concious when she heard someone approaching them.
Maan plz chodo na.. dekho koi aa raha hai..
Ek shart pe..
Kya..
Wo mai tumhe baad me batayunga.. pehle promise karo tum meri baat manogi..
Acha theek hai.. ab tho chodo na..

He left her. She quickly straightened herself.
Dadimaa knocked the door.
Arre dadimaa ayiye na..
Dadimaa- Maan geet aap log abhi tak neeche nahi aaye.. bete breakfast ready hai.. chaliye jaldi se aa jayiye..
Ji dadimaa aap chaliye ham bas aate hain..
Dadimaa- Theek hai beta jaldi ayiye..

PRECAP
Maan ki shart 😉😉

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Edited by mahimak - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
yaar u r even worse than me for cliff hanger
now i am wondering what that shart would be
cant wait jaldi se update karo
u loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update! Can't wait to read about Maan's shart!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anshra

yaar u r even worse than me for cliff hanger

now i am wondering what that shart would be
cant wait jaldi se update karo
u loved it


Naa naa.. u r worser.. pata hai kabse mai MIK & DIL ka intzar kar rahi hun.. I can't wait yaar.. spl DIL.. plz u also update quickly.. DIL ka cliff hanger tho.. uff.. how do u expect me to wait.. nahi nahi.. I just can't wait.. plz jaldoi update karna..
& thanks a lot..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Niceee part!
i likeee!
cont soon
thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update. omg maan slept with geet but still maintained him not to do much. love the way he kissed geet and arjun's plan was nice. maan is asking for sharat to geet. i wonder what it will be.

pls update soon and thanks for pm yaar.

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