My First FF: Pyaar Hua.. Chupke Se, Part 24, Pg 84 - Page 16

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Posted: 14 years ago
Weee. Aweesome Upd, Stuti Darling 🤗
Why are you sorry, its wooow :D *Hats off*

Upd sooon xD
and congrats for winning the title of best writer *Whop, whoop*

Love Ya. Muwaaah xx

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Posted: 14 years ago
And, and C.O.N.G.R.A.T.S for the 2nd thread ! Wooohoo 🤗
I am so proud of you ! May you have many more...

GOD bless you, Stuts :) Muwaah xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
@hina🤗 glad u liked it!!!

best writer?😕
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: stuti_naksh4eva

i m bored and missing u too😭 now i dnt know wen we can meet... coaching on head!!!!😡 mon-sat... 😡



really thats so sad yaar and now even i started work :(

and then school will start as well 😭
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Posted: 14 years ago


PART 17

Next Sunday!

(I hope u all remember that naitik had planned something special for akshi... on Sunday...)

Akshara comes wearing the dress naitik and akshara had brought last week...

In the light green(wid olive shade on it) kurta wid light work done on it... and a bandhani salwar.. wid a dupatta of this combination... akshara is looking stunning...

At around 4.15 pm... akshara comes and knocks naitik;s door...

Naitik opens the door.. and keeps staring at his girl!

He moves his hand through akshi's face and whispers... "spotless"...

Akshi snaps her finger... kya??

N; kya akshara... thodi der admire toh karne dijiye!

A; blushes... naitik... mujhe mere ghar mein enter toh hone dijiye!

N; aapka ghar???

A; kyun?? Jab tak hamari shaadi nai hoti... tab tak hum Mumbai mein hi hai na...??? aur yeh aapka hi ghar hai na?? Toh yeh mera ghar hi hua... right???

N; haan...aur shaadi k baad???

A; fir hum Udaipur chale nai jaenge kya???

N; aur agar mein kahu.. ki hum Mumbai mein hi rahenge... shaadi k baad bhi... toh???

A; cant believe her ears! Kya??? Hum.. hum shaadi k baad bhi Mumbai mein hi rahenge??? Wowww... yeh mera sapna tha.. shaadi k baad sirf pati k saath rehna!

N; kyun??? Shaadi ke baad aapko kyun akela rehna pasand hai??? Kuch khaas hota hai kya...??

(while this conversation..naitik and akshara are staring at each other... during the last sentence... naitik arrests akshi in his mesmerizing eyes...

A; naitik... aap na... dhatt!!! (blushes like anything!)

N; sachchi.. aap mujhe explain kijiye na!

A; naitik... mujhe.. mujhe nai pata!

N; nai pata?? (shocked) fir toh suhaag raat pe mujhe woh gaana gaana padega! Akshay kumar ki tarah...

Akshi is confused!

N; I dnt know WHAT TO DO.. I dnt know WHAT TO DO.. taubaaa... aage kya karuuu...

Akshara breaks the eye lock and starts laughing... she laughs sooo much!!!! She holds the stomach and laughs!🤣🤣🤣🤣

N; arrey akshara... chill... plz... aap itna mat haso!! Plzz...!

A; aap dobara kabhi nahi gaaenge! (says this while laughing!)

N; ok.. ok.. aap bas... itna mat hasiye.. mein nai gaunga!

A; ok ok...

After she stops laughing...

A; btw.. naitik.. woh special cheez kya hai???

N; aap aayiye mere saath.. dikhata hun!

A; finally... chaliye!

They reach in naitiks room... ofcourse... unlike the clean hall and other rooms... naitik's room is messy... imagine a guy living alone in the house... u cant expect even the hall to be clean... forget the bedroom!

Akshara is shocked to c the room...

N; woh sab chodiye darling.. idhar aayiye!

There he was... wid his laptop on his lap.. siting near the window... akshi sat beside him... (the place was small... so both were sitting very close!)

His laptop was on.. he opened a window... and there appeared varsha on the other side!

N; mujhe pata hai aap bhabhi ko bahut miss kar rahi hai... aap bolti nai hai... par mujhe pata hai.. ab aap inse jitni chahe baat kar sakti hai!

A; oh... wow... video call! Cool.. yeh meri special gift hai? Wow... how sweet naitik.. (forgetting that varsha is at the other end.. she gives naitik a kiss on his cheeks)...

V; ahem ahem...

A; comes back normal.. blushes...

V; yeh kya hai akshara??? (mock anger)

A; varsha... woh.. im sorry!
V; mere saamne hi itna freely karte ho.. toh mere bigaer toh kya kuch nai kiya hoga aap dono ne!

A; varshaaa!!! (blushes)

V; dekho toh naitikji.. kitna Sharma rahi hai! My god! Kya jaadoo kiya hai aapne ispe...

A; (shows varsha wide eyes)

V; achcha baba,.. sorry... bol.. kaisi hai tu? Naitikji kuch khilate nai hai kya? Patli lag rahi hai tu mujhe!

N; kya? Yeh moti thi??

V; haan naitikji.. aapne iski photos nai dekhi thi kya?? Bhaes thi meri akshara.. bhaes!

N; "aapki" akshara???

V; haan... par ab toh aapki ho chuki hai yeh!

A; varshaa!!!

V; 😆

N; 😆

A; 😲😲udao udao.. aur mazaak udao! mein koi bhaes nai thi!

N; akshara... mazaak kar rahe the... aap bhaes ho ya lakdi... mujhe koi farak nai padta! Aap mere liye meri akshara hai!

A; stares at naitik... both lost in their own sweet world!

V; haye haye... kitne romantic hai naitikji... akshara.. tujhe zyada pareshan toh nai karte na?

A; zyada😲??? Zyada bahut chhota word hai...😈 kitna tang karte hai mujhe! Mein udhar aaungi na... toh mein dado se kehkar inhe dat khilaungi!

V; naitikji.. aapne akshara ko pareshan kiya na.. toh aap dekh lena...

N; par bhabhi...

V; par var kuch nai! Akshara aapki zimmedari hai! Uska dhyaan rakhna..

A; ji bhabhi!

V; achcha.. ab mein rakhti hun! Bye...

N&A; bye!

After the video call ends.. akshi laughs! And runs.. naitik keeps the laptop aside.. and runs behind her..

N; (while running) achcha.. mein aapko pareshan karta hun??? Haan?? Mein aapko kuch zyada hi pareshan karta hun..😡

A; (while running) haan... aap bahut pareshan karte hai🤣!!!

Wen he catches her...

N; aapko kya malum mein aur kitna pareshan kar sakta hun.. zara paas toh aaiye.. batata hun😈!

A; naitik... naitik.. naitik nai.. sorry... 😳😳

N; mein pareshan karta hu😈?

A; nai.. aap mujhe kaise pareshan kar sakte hai??? Aap toh mere sweet sweet naitik hai na😳! Aap kaise pareshan karenge mujhe😳!

N; kaise karunga?? Aapko dikhata hun mein😃..

A; nai nai... chalega.. mujhe nai janna! Plz.. chhod dijiye na!😳

Naitik leaves her...

They both spend the further day laughing and talking and eye-locking!😳😳😳

TO BE CONTINUED..

Hope u like the part!

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Love, Stuti


Edited by stuti_naksh4eva - 14 years ago
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hey chotu... first of all awesome n very sweet part...
omg imagining naitik singing that song is really very hilarious... even I too laughed... thank god he is not going to sing again... but it is really funny... but he dont know what to do on SR??? 😉😳😆😆😆😆😆...

n varsha teasing is very good... aksha moti... rofl.. 😆😆😆... n then naitik running behind akshara n saying pareshan... its really too good... I loved it...

wonderful part chotu... update the next part also soon... I'll be waiitng...
Edited by saru.g - 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: saru.g

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hey chotu... first of all awesome n very sweet part...
omg imagining naitik singing that song is really very hilarious... even I too laughed... thank god he is not going to sing again... but it is really funny... but he dont know what to do on SR??? 😆...

n varsha teasing is very good... aksha moti... rofl.. 😆😆😆... n then naitik running behind akshara n saying pareshan... its really too good... I loved it...

wonderful part chotu... update the next part also soon... I'll be waiitng...

i was also laughing at this part!!! it was a light hearted part. i didnt want to make it serious kinds!

glad u liked it🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

nice update chotu...i have to imagine naitik's voice..😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
congrats on the new thread
amazing updates
cont soon
tanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Naz_Angel

nice update chotu...i have to imagine naitik's voice..😆

rofl!! yup.. u have too!!

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