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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 44

He was very happy as he sat in his car Sameera said

S: Maan, what's her name?

M: would you like to meet her?

S; may be

M: if you want to she studies in college, let me write the address for you

S: but how will I recognize her?

M: the moment you will se her you will know that she is the one I fell for

S: lets see, will try to meet her before leaving

M: shall I drop you

S: no, I have the producer's car, bye

M: bye

When he reached KM for lunch DM was waiting for him, the advocate has already told her that all was settled and Maan and Sameera went to some coffee house.

M: hi, DM shall we have lunch now

DM: yes, and congrats

M: thanks DM I am feeling like I am free now, no burden of that unwanted relationship

DM: you went to the coffee house with her

M: yes

DM: why?

M: come on DM we were never a good couple but we were and are good friends

DM: and what she did to you, your unborn baby?

M: DM, she also was not happy and her life too was as much hell as mine, and that child was not only mine it was also hers, and DM when I think about it, I find it correct, why to give birth to the child when you can't give it all the love, enough DM, are you not happy that she did not make a fuss of all this

DM: may be you are right

M: and to tell you DM I were never worried about her, I was worried about you, that's why I gave you those papers I could have submitted them myself also

DM; I didn't get you

M: it was you and Mr. Bakshi who were adamant for that marriage we were never meant for each other and we n\knew we cannot live together, but as the marriage decision was yours so the separation part should also be decided by you

DM: I am sorry Maan, Vicky is right I always burden my thoughts on you and you never say no

M: DM this is your right, and I am all yours, and what is this sorry, come lets have lunch, Nakul

DM: he has gone to the college, come Ram Babu will serve

M: coming

In the evening, Maan was waiting for Geet to come, he was playing with Angel, and he did not feel like going to the office so he took a day off.

As Geet entered the nursery she saw Maan playing with Angel, she smiled

G: good evening Maan, how come you are here at this hour?

M: good evening to you too Maamaa, and Papa did not go to office today

G: why?

M: papa wanted to play with me

G: Maan I am talking to you

M: yes, Maa Maa papa is also talking to you

G: ok am going then

M: hey, Geet you look pretty with that red nose

G: Maan!

M: Geet!

G: why did you not go to the office?

M: actually, wait first feed her and help her sleep she is awake since afternoon

G: that long

M: sorry, I did not let her sleep, I am in the study, shall I call for tea

G: may be you can make it

M: you are becoming naughty and demanding

G: is it?

M: just a jest, will be waiting

G: ok

Geet after settling angel went to study, he was not there she wondered where he was and just then he entered with the trolley

M: Madam your tea, and some snacks will you be seated?

G: Maan you are looking quite different today

M: because I am feeling different, please be seated

As they sat and had their tea she was amused to see him smiling so much, a smile that was reaching his eyes.

M: Geet

G: um

M: day before yesterday, the advocate came

G: yes

M: today was the final hearing of the divorce case

G (choked): yours, but the papers

M: DM submitted them

G: oh

M: won't you ask what was decided?

G: it is there on your face, you got it

M: yes, and also found my good friend back

G: good friend

M: yes, Sameera was always my friend and that's why our families never asked us, but we never could make as a couple, but now there is no restraining relationship to burden us

G: you talked to her after the judgment

M: yes, in fact we went to a coffee house, she would some day come to meet you

G: ME!

M: yes

G: what did you tell her about me?

M: nothing just that you are here and about Dev

G (annoyed, but did not say anything): it's my life Maan; you should not discuss it with your so called friends

M: I am sorry if I hurt you, but Sameera hates Dev and she warned me years ago that I should keep a check on him before he ruins some one

G: still I don't like gathering sympathy (and she left)

M: I know you are angry Geet, but when ever you will meet Sameera, you will know that she might have made my life hell but still she is a nice human being

the case was sure to effect their lives, DM is right on her side and Geet is right on her... but Maan is also right... but each right is wrong when seen from other person's side


it's bad that women hate women... they always see what they want to see... but that's the truth ... as your left cannot be my left similarly your POV can not be my POV... it can only be possible if we stand to the same side


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Edited by smj1977.shruti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
yes women hate women😭 i face it at every turn of my life wonder why I have no male enemies😆

but darling tu itne short updates mat de...okay now hit me for it but i love the sameera character...😆 also this maan is different from the maan's in IFsphere...men with compassion are difficult for creation...😆 its easy to create arrogance 😆so me still saying shru go to you know where😆
Edited by SIYAHI - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
First one to comment...I could not miss that chance...
I love this story and update is fabulous...I really liked the maturity in Maan's and Sameera's thinking...they were good friends but not good couple...because for being good couple you need to love someone so much that you can adjust with that person...two people have to compromise and come to a common ground and that can only happen when you are ready to do it...
So Maan realised his feelings for Geet? Before this I was not very clear on this but the way he talked to Sameera...maybe.
Geet still not sure...so let's see how this progresses...
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Oh no I just missed it...Siyahi's phew ...
nevertheless second...
Edited by ritzy09 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg shruti on line updated ...thanks a ton 😃
its tru only female can creat problems for females...
i m happy for maan... finally he got what he wants... now what next
will he be able to let geet know his feeling...
Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh awsum di. loved to see maan happy. i love this sameera
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was lil rong on part of maan to go on displayin abt geet an er life
its her right to say or no to sm1
atleast that is wat i feel
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part.
loved it.
hmmm, DM and geet also right like maan also right
actually everyone' p.o.v right on their place.
let's see geet's reaction when she will meet sameera.
loved maaneet moments
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
I like d way u handle sameera issue. Nd u r rite . . . . Personally i don't hate anybdy i feel hate is a very strng emotion as strong as love . . . U can't hate anybdy nd everybdy jst like dat aur waise bhi tym kiske pass . . . Lol. . .
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome...
glad to see maan all smiles...
plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice part Shruti
confused why maan told sameera every thing about geet
In one point geet is correct. he should not discuss about her personal matter with his Ex-Wife that too without her information
Edited by vrsharma - 13 years ago

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