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Posted: 13 years ago
maneet na know when
a person is watching them
excited for engagement
hope all goes well
all n all
lovely updates

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice n sweet update...nt is quite intelligent...
i like dis maan...
continue...
chao
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update 😃
luvd der romance rellii cute
buh i fink sumfins gna appen plzz cont soon x
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 32

By 6:30 he was back, he took his seat and called Geet on her cell,

G: Maan how was the meeting?

M: no hello no hi and straight away questions

G: MAAN

M: ok, the meetings were rocking, and tell me have you packed

G: yes, we will leave in 30 mins

M: why the hell are you ladies coming by train?

G: because tai ji said road journey is tiring and in train we will reach Delhi and also sleep, so this will save time

M: when are you due here?

G: 5:45 am, by Jammu Express

M: ok I will come

G: no, Dev Bhai and Yash Jiju are coming

M: Geet, please

G: no means no, ok how long are you there in the office

M: may be an hour

G: um

M: bye

G: bye, see you in the morning, TC

M: you too, and close the compartment door, its 1 ac

G: yes sweet heart

M; what did you say?

G: nothing, hey someone's calling me, bye

M; bye

At 6:55pm Sameera came in with the coffee, and placed it on the table, he nodded and she left, he took a sip 'yuck it's bitter' then he pulled a sugar cube box and dropped a cube in it and placed it to let the cubes dissolve.

After 2 hours he was done with the file work and drank the remaining now cold coffee and switched off the camera, he was about to leave when Sameera came in

M: Sameera you are still here

S: Maan actually I wanted to talk to you

M: sit

S: can we sit on the sofa

M: ok, go ahead

Maan sat on the 3 seater and Sameera on the single seater sofa, Maan felt little dizziness and a slight headache and after few seconds he fainted.

At KM 6:15am

Handa's were settling in the building where Geet and Rajji had stayed, Geet sneaked in KM to meet Maan, she was surprised that he was not there to meet her, she went to his room but he was not there, she smiled and came out to collide with NT, she was like what shall I do now

G: hello Bhabhi

NT: is he still sleeping?

G; he is not there

NT; may be gone to meet you, he came late last night

G: late but he said he will be back by 9 or so

NT: o oh, it looks you two talk a lot on phone, but at about 9 Sameera called that he had an urgent meeting with the clients so he will be late

G: he did not call strange, he never asks anyone to inform here, he always does that himself

NT: may be the client was sitting with him

G: are you sure he is back?

NT: yes, his car is there in the parking

G: the driver

NT: he too is there

Geet rushed out and asked the driver

G: Maan sir, came back at what hour?

D: he did not come, he send me

G: he said this to you

D: no Sasha Madam asked me to leave saying Maan Sir has gone out with a client, she also had the security lock the building, so I came back

G: what?

Meanwhile a police constable came in informing that Maan has to be arrested, and the Inspector has got a call from KC some random girl was saying that she has been raped by Maan, and the two are still in the office.

Geet was shocked, she knew something was wrong, but that wrong she had no idea

so girls this was for today

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Edited by smj1977.shruti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
woww me first
will be back

awesome update
yeh sammera bi na she is good for nothing
sleeping tablets de di maan ko stupid ladki
aur rape ka case dal di
camera switch off bhi kar diya
ab kya kargi geet
thank you for early update
Edited by nan_10 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awsome yaar !! i loved it !!!
i know this sam is good for nothing ..
i hope geet has some arrangement made before ... any cameras unknown to maan ??
update soon didi ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update geet would save maan i think by the camera it would have been recorded
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Posted: 13 years ago
me loving the twist
i hope one camera working
& geet got the feeling something
is wrong
i'm sure she i'll clear maan & send
sam to tumbulk 2
cont soonnn
Edited by simi91 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update! My comment is in your PM Inbox :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh ye kya hogaya.sameera ki bachi maar khayegi geet se

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