Guys, please... Pt1-8/Pg3-4 (06/08/11)

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ramita94

@ramita94

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

Hey I haven't read ur FF yet but will soon plz add me to ur PM List and I will add u as a friend of IF 😊

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Deepi20

@Deepi20

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#32

Awesome short FF! I'm so glad that you posted it all in one shot because it was awesome to read it all at once, I didn't want to stop reading because it was so good! I really liked Piya's character in your FF, as she was portrayed as very strong and she didn't do a lot of crying and running after Abhay for answers on why he did this to her and so on. In short, she didn't go all clingy on him! She just sort of moved on and ignored Abhay after he dumped her. I'm glad Piya forgave Abhay and I loved the ending! Hopefully, we get to read more FFs from you in the future! And super awesome job with this FF! Your an excellent writer! 👏

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sonia

@-Sonia-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Superb..mini ff..
It was just fantastic, fabulous...i just loved each n every line like ...ur way of writing making me crazy!!...u r just perfect wid ur writing skills..
The way u have define their love, their passion was so lovely ... it is just beyond words to explain... .beautifully written ...

I am glad that abhay n pia at last admitted their love for each other and have also managed to clear their misunderstandings...
It was surely a very very happy ending.
I'll love it if u write a another sequel to ur ff...it will be awesome..i'm sure...u r a brilliant writer...
Thank u for such a beautiful ff..
Tc