Dhadkan-Sujal-Kashish - Page 8

jasmine dear what a cool part... really very nice & intresting... 👏 dear good that tia is out from the jail , kashish is out of the mental hospital , 😊 but then how is sujal he met with an accident phir uski koi khabar nahi 😭 😭 😭 hope he is fine.... 😉 & now atlast where is the culprit swayam.. 🤢 & in what circumstances did tia kill piyush.. waise bhi tia ne ek achcha kaam kiya hain... 😆
please post the next part soon...i'll be waiting... 😛

Part-23...Kusum:Kashish looks down. Kusum:sujal had a
severe accident after we lost Tia.He was paralysed 4
many yrs.
K is shocked:then?now?
Ku:now he has recovered from it.
K is relieved. Ku:his friend's wife…1 widow is living
there 2 look after him.charu
K is shocked:charu?
K remembers meeting akshat-charu in the holi party.K
thinks:Akshat is dead?poor guy

K:why did u kill piyush?
Tia starts crying. K:was'nt he loving?
T:yes.but his luv was disgusting.he was too
possessive.he cud'nt even stand me seeing dadi-dada.he
did'nt even tolerate saakshi dadi's affection 2wards
me.he hated me having friends.bcoz he thot that wil make
him lose me.so I did'nt hav friends at all.i was always
alone.my only relief was sujal papa.i did'nt hav any
connection with papa 4 yrs.later I got papa's letter.i
came 2 no about his accident,paralyses & recovery. i
told him 2 send letters only 2 college.thus I was
relieved with his leters I got once in a
while.later….dad's friend & his son the rock star
Ranveer came 2 our house while dad was'nt there.i was
seeing ranveer 4 the 1st time.he sang.that time dad came
& shouted at them.he threw them away.dad's friend
tolerated it as he respects dad a lot & he had an
inferiority complex as he's from a middleclass family.i
felt sad.so I went 2 ranveer's house.

Tia tells Ranveer:sorry 4 my dad's behaviour.
R:I tolerated ur dad's behaviour only 4 my dad.
R was very angry..R:I pity u 4 living with such a
horrible dad.
T felt sad:plz tell that u 4gave us
R:ok,I 4giv u only bcoz u r a nice girl.
T smiles.but R was serious.later when T went,R smiles.

Kashish:thus u both fell in luv?
T:no,we came really gud friends.later we started luving
each other.but as I scared dad was against it.he even
sent ppl 2 kill ranveer.luckily he got escaped.i cud'nt
tolerate it.later saakshi dadi became really sick.b4
dying,she told me 2 truths….my mom was forced 2 b in the
mental asylum bcoz of dad & sujal papa paralyisis is
caused by the accident created by the lorry driver who
was sent by dad.
K is shocked. Tia cries:I cud'nt tolerate anymore.i felt
that I'm in a hell.i was living there with heavy
fear.dad tried 2 lock me inside a room 4 days.e did'nt
bother about my sufferings.he was that selfish.i tried 2
escape from that house.but dad caught me.

Tia:leave me dad.i hate u.i luv only sujal papa who
adopted me.i'm going there
Piyus:I won't allow u 2 b with sujal;who snatched my beloved
& daughter.
T:beloved?my mom was never urs.she was always my papa's.


T:he tried forcefully 2 push me inside a room.in that
struggle, I pushed him.his head hit the wall & he fell
dead.
T keeps crying.K sheds tears:that devil made my daughter
suffer so much..

The police officer who is in charge of this case is
Omkar nath.Ranveer goes 2 see him:sir,I want 2 reveal a
truth that I'm the killer of Piyush.

waiting for the next part. Pls post it soon. Just read ur story in one go

jasmine gud gng... 👏
plz update soon.... 😊

jasmine dear really a very nice part.. coollllllllllllllllllll.... very good.... 👏 wah wah par yeh kya akshat ko kya ho gaya..& charu taking care of sujal..🤢 sujal is paralysed....... 😭 i want to kill that piyush 😡 😡 😡 but tia has already done that now i can't kill his bhoot... 😆
so ranveer is tia's love & he is akshat & charu's son good... 😃
please ab saari problems khatam kardo.. sujal ko ek dum theek kar do aur end mein sujal-kashish ko ek kardo....... 😉
continue soon........... 😃 😛 😊

Part-24....omkar:then Tia?
Ranveer:she is innocent.
O:who r u?u r the rockstar Ranveer.rite?why shud u kill
piyushcant u liv with music?I think u don't need 2
kill a rich man 4the money 2 liv.then why did u kill?do
u no tia & piyushpersonally?
R:yes.i'm piyush uncle's friend's son.
O:ok,who is Tia 2 u?
R:I luv her
O:1 way luv or she too loves u?
R:we both luvd each other
O:does'nt it mean that u r lying 2 me 2 save ur beloved
?
R:no,I'm telling the truth.i only killed him.
O:ok,now u go.we'l decide who the killer is
R:plz sir,put me in jail
O shouts:but u just go,man
R goes.

Another police:sir,according 2 the postmortam report,the
murder happened at 1am.but tia says it happened at 12.it
can mean that ranveer had cum at 1 to kill piyush
O:but why? He:piyush is supposed 2b stubborn.he
might've stood against their marrIAGE.SO HE KILLED
HIM.in this age,which lover is going 2 take such a big
blame on him 4 his gf?
O:ya,but can a stubborn young killer admit his crime so
easily?

Ranveer's dad meets Tia:Ranveer is mad about u.bcoz of
that he told the police that he is the real killer.i no
that he's not the killer.he lied 2 save u.plz don't put
him in the jail.i beg u
He cries.Tia weeps:I did'nt no about it uncle.
Tia calls up Ranveer:why did u lie 2 the police that u
killed dad.is it 4 me?why don't u think about ur dad who
loves u so much.what'l b his condition if u go 2 jail?
R becomes upset & he cuts the ph.

Omkar Nath gets a spectacles from piyush's house.O calls
Abhay 2 the police station 2 no whether its his'.Kusum
cries bcoz that shows that the police suspects him.
A:its not mine.
O:but I doubt whether u killed piyush as he has
insulted u many times 4 seeing tia.
A:noooooo

Tia tells kashish:why don't we go 2 see sujal papa?
K:no,u go.
T:don't u feel like seeing him?
K:but I cant face him
T:but papa wants 2 meet u eagerly.i no that
K's eyes r full of tears.
Tia-kashish go 2 sujal's house.Tia enters the house.Esha
cums:who r u?
T:dadi,I'm tia E is surprised:tia? E hugs her.
T:there is another person too with me.
K cums. E looks carefully.she's surprised:kashsh?
E hugs K. T:where is papa? E cries.

WHY IS ESHA CRYING?

jasmine another great part keep it going

jasmine a very nice part.. ur story is getting more & more intresting with the each part ur writing.. i'am just liking ur story very much.. 👏 u know i have a doubt who has killed piyush... par mujhe nahi lagtha yeh kaam tia aur ranveer mein se kissine kiya hain... 😃 but jisne bhi yeh kaam kiya hain usse tho award milna chahiye....... 😆 hmmm so why is esha crying , sujal kahaan gaya.... 😭 u know what i think esha is crying because piyush ko maraa hain humare hero sujal ne.. kyun am'i right ??? 😆
please continue soon....... 😊

Part-25...Esha:Sujal fainted last week.since 1 week,he is
unconcious.charu is there in the hospital.i came here 2
take certain things 2 the hospital.
Kashish-Tia r shocked.they cry.they go 2 the hospital.K
sees charu.C smiles:kashish….
Dr cums:there is a happy news,sujal is out of danger
All r happy.Esha:when kashish came,sujal became ok.that's
the effect of true luv
K's eyes rose.T smiles. T:Dr,can we see him?
Dr:only 1 person now.
T:mama,u go
K:no,u go T:this time,u must go E:tia is
true.kashish has 2 go now
K goes.K sits near S who is sleeping.K looks at him.She
remembers their earlier days.song:dil ne{dhadkan}.K 's
tears fall on S.K wipes her tears & go out.
K:Tia,we'll go Charu:kashish,bcoz of my presense u
shud'nt go.after akshat went sujal showed mercy by giving me
shelter. Nothing else.ur position in sujal's heart is the
same.i've never tried 2 get it.i'm going 2 another
place.not bcoz of ur arrival.i'd decided it earlier.i
waited till now,bcoz of sujal's health.now he's ok.i can
go.my son wil b waiting 4 me.
T smiles. K's eyes r full of tears.she goes.T goes after
her.

Sujal opens his eyes.E smiles with tears:sujal beta,u r ok
now?
S:yes.i dunno why I felt that kashish is near me
E smiles:u r right sujal.kashish had cum 2 see u
S is surprised:what?really?
E:yes,tia also came with her
S smiles. E:kashish escaped from the mental asylum.Tia has
grown up & looks pretty.
S:tia had sent me her photos.but kashish…I miss her a lot.

E:kashish wil b back 2 ur life.
S smiles.

Sujal is discharged.Charu goes & stays in her son's
house.
S is sitting & dreaming. E:what r u dreaming?
S:I'm thinking about our future life with kashish &
tia.they'l b always with me
E becomes upset:kashish wil b there with u.but tia…
S:but why?tell me mama. E's eyes r full of tears:Tia
is going 2 get punishment from the court.she killed her
dad piyush
S is shocked:no!

OMkar calls Abhay,kusum,kashish,Tia,Ranveer 2 the station.
O:sumhow we felt that Tia is not the real killer eventho
she admitted that she's the killer. Postmortam report
strengthened our belief. we suspeacted many ppl
including Ranveer,abhay..now I'm going 2 reveal the who
the killer is.
All r eager 2 no who the real killer is.

great part jasmine. Bring sujal and kashish together soon