Yeh Kya Ho Raha Hain? **Part 6 - Pg. 14**

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Posted: 19 years ago
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it was great 👏
pls continue soon 😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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its good i like ur title . 😳
plz continue. 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey guys thanks 4 the support!
By the way 2 of eijoo's sisters will be in the fic today but since i don't remember their name they r going to be 1 and 2 - sorry bout that! 😳

Here we go...
The next day...
K's 2 sis come into k n n's room

1: bhaiya kya hum bhabhi ko le jaa sakte aaj ke liye?
K smiles: tumhari bhabhi hain jaha le jaana hain le kar jao, jo kar na hain karo - smiles
2: really? kuch bhi kare un ko?
K: ha(yes)
1 n 2: thanks bhai!
K smiles n leaves for the office

n comes into the room souple minnutes ater k leaves
n asks her nanands: kya ho raho hain?
1: kuch nahin bhabhi hum apko lene aye hain
2: ha chaliye
n: par kaha?
1: shopping n for a make over for all of us!
2: u don't mind right?
1: you see since u r going on a trip so we thought we will change ur style n look to match their style so you can enjoy to the fullest!
N smiles thinks: yeh dono achi hain aur sach bhi kehe rahi hain! - she also wanted to go shopping for new clothes after she heard about hers n kunal's trip so she wouldn't attract attention where ever she goes - like she usually does u know with the accidents n all, she thought this might help it! ( 😆 😉 )

n says: ha magar kunal?
1: don't worry we talked to him n he said we get to hang out w/ u all day today!
N: really? ok then lets go!

---the 3 of them leave----

Precap: what does nimmo look like after the day of shopping n makeover - better or worst?
Does kunal like the change?
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great job! can't wait to know what kunal's reaction is!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 👏 👏
great job please make her look better 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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cant wait hurry up ! when is the next !
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesum
cant wait ne longer 4 de nxt part 😉
continue soon 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey guys sorry for the delay

can some plz tell me the names of kunal's sisters so i don't have to refer to them as 1 & 2
thanks

kunal comes home from office and is really tired because he had to get many things ready for the time he was going to be missing from work.
K thinks: yeh nimmo ko kya hua - kahan gayi hain? (worried like a husband 😳 - u think?)
K calls KK n asks: kk nimmo kaha gayi?
KK: kyun sir?
K trying to not sound concerned: nahi aise hi, sube se nahi dekha hain use is liye?
KK: 😕 😳 😊 sir woh aapki beheno(sisters) ke sat bahar gayi hain
K: oo, thank you kk
KK: no problem sir - good night
K: good night
K thinks: ajayengi - lekin me uske ke liye kyun pareshan ho raha hu? - shakes the thought away and yawns - ha neend aya rahi hain - chalo so jate hain
kunu falls asleep on the bed

the three ladies come home at night

N: thank you 1 and 2 i had a lot of fun! and i really did like all the clothes n makeover that we got
1: is me thanks kehe ne ki kya baat hain bhabhi ab to hum friends aur behen bhi ban gaye hain kyun?
2 and N: defintely
2: bhabhi aap naye kapde aur hair cut ke saat pehele se bhi jaada achi lag rahi hain
N: thank you lekin ye saab tum dono ki bina nahi ho pata
1 n 2: bhabhi aap bhi naa
1: u know i really want to see bhai's(kunal) expression when he sees you
2: yea me too
N awkwardly: hope he likes it

the three talk for a couple minutes, say goodnight, n go to their rooms

N turns on the lights, sees that kunal is sleeping and turns the lights off
then she puts all her bags of shopping near her suitcase - goes to change in the bathroom comes back falls asleep on the sofa

----in the middle of the night---

kunal wakes up and looks towards the sofa
there he sees a figure lying down smiles to himself that nimmo came home and goes back to sleep

----in the morning----

nimmo wakes up first gets ready and is packing kunals and nimmos bags

N: kunal wake up!!!
K with closed eyes: kya hua nimmo kyun chila rahi ho
N: ootho kunal yaad hain aaj hum -sarcastically- honeymooon par jana hain
K: ha ha yaad hain
N is behind a wardrobe door so k can't see her
K goes into the bathroom

K comes out after getting ready - n is again behind the wardrobe door - k says: good morning
n closes the door n says good morning while smiling
K looks up n sees nimmo with her layered hair a little bit above her elbow, with minimum makeup on that only enhances her beauty, she is wearing jeans that fit her well and a brown shirt(no kurtis!), also she is wearing minimum jewlry (not a dozen bangles on each hand! - i didn't like that at all on her)
jewlry includes her wedding ring, a simple bracelet, and simple earrings

Precap: kunals mouth is open in shock
n asks him kya hua?
k stumbles for words


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Posted: 19 years ago
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also guys sorry if it was too long!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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no it was so cute ... 😛 😛
plz continue dis .. 😉 😉
we cant wait anymore .. 😳 😳


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