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Posted: 14 years ago
Great update! Can't wait for the party! Thanks for the PM
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Nice story...likng the way its going...so both Maan n Geet are in college...n already thinking of each other...lets see what happens when they meet in the party...pls PM me when u update... 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
continue soon , waiting eagerly😊
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pls include me n ur pm list. i wd like to read ur updates. its very nice.


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Originally posted by: esha143

Nice story...likng the way its going...so both Maan n Geet are in college...n already thinking of each other...lets see what happens when they meet in the party...pls PM me when u update... 😃


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Posted: 14 years ago
PART 3

Dadimaa & maan left for handa haveli. He was really not interested in all this.. he was just going bcoz of dadimaa.. bcoz he can't say a no to her. He had never been in such parties.. actually no party. He really don't like partying. Since he lost his parents, he had always seen with his books.. studying. He had completely changed after the death of his parents. Although his parants had died just 4 or 5 yrs ago.. but their is so much difference that has come into him. Yah.. he used to be cheerful.. partying around. But when his parents died he was left in a state of depression. How has dadimaa consoled him.. only she knows. And that is the reason he can't say a no to her. He don't have anyone in his life except his dadimaa.

Geet was getting ready. She wore a white sari. She was trying to wear it correctly bcoz this was the first time she was wearing a sari. After she was done she just sat near the window, taking in the fresh air. It was pleasant outside. Air was blowing smoothly, shaking the leaves of the trees. She cud see the flowers swaying with the air. A smile formed on her lips. She didn't knew what.. but there was something that this wind was saying to her. There was something that she cud feel so comfortable. But suddenly her heart beat was raising.. it was not beating at the normal rate. She just couldn't figure out what was happening to her. Since morning she is lost in her thoughts thinking abt that stranger.. or was he not a stranger to her. Why his eyes looked familiar to her.. as if she knows them from years. She was really unaware of these strange emotions emerging in her. Why was she feeling connected to those eyes.. why did she actually admired the way he was staring at her.. as if she belonged only to those eyes. Geet ye tu kya soch rahi hai.. pata nahi kya ho raha hai mujhe babaji.. I don't want to think abt all this but still I'm not able to concentrate on anything but those eyes.. why.. why babaji.

She was snapped out of her thouths listning to the knock on the door.. Geet chal na.. how much time will u take.
Aayi veerji..

She descended the stairs still lost in her thoughts. Brij shaked her & murmured to her.. Geet dad ko wish nahi karna kya.. kahan khoyi hui hai..
nahi wo.. haan chalo lets wish..

She came near her dad & hugged him. All the lights were closed. Happy b'day dad.. she softly whispered. All the lights opened, & the sounds of clappings echoed in the hall. He kissed her on her forehead.. thanku beta..

Suddenly her eyes fell on those eyes.. she felt her heart beat raising.. her heart thudding so high that she felt it will burst out any moment. She walked towards him just thought to take a glimpse of him.. chupke chupke. But instead she bumped into him. Before she cud fall he held her from her waist. She looked into his eyes which were staring at her. She closed her eyes tight. The moment he looked at her.. an unknown feeling emerged in him. She closed her eyes even more tighter as his grip tightened. His hand raised to caress her cheeks. His touch burned her. the warmth of his hands was so soothing. The moment she felt his touch, she felt an unknown emotion inside her. She felt as if this was what she was longing for. All her uneasiness disappeared in that one touch. She could feel compassion.. affection.. an unknown attachment in his touch.

A gentle brush of his fingers,
Sending shivers down my spine.
In the love I see in his eyes,
Is a love that equals mine.

He greets me with a smile,
And leaves me with a smile.
If he were to ever leave me,
I couldn't imagine what I'd miss.

Maybe it's his touch,
Or the way he makes me feel.
But whatever it is,
I'm head over heels.

But she was snapped out as he left her. She managed to maintain her balance. He ran his fingers through his hair & before she cud get a glimpse of him he was gone. He babaji.. yeh kaisa ehsaas tha.. why m I feeling like I know him.. like he is just for me.. I m just for him.. why did his touch burnt me like this. What is this happening to me..

She laid down on her bed after the party was over trying to sleep.. but she just couldn't. She got up & sat next to the window. She didn't got to know when she dozed off thinking abt him.. fighting with her emotions.. trying to understand them.. but she failed.. she failed to understand self.. wo apne jasbaaton ko samjna chahti thi.. janna chahti thi ki wo hain kya.. lekin wo haar gayi khud ko hi samaj pane me..

She got up the next morning to find herself next to the window. She saw the time.. Oh no.. I'm late
She gathered her cloths & rushed to the washroom. She quickly took a bath & chose her usual cloths to wear. Her jeans & her loose top. She quickly rushed to her college. While she entered the college.. she paused.. geet aaj sambhal ke chal.. kahin phir se takkar na ho jaye.. she wondered. Her eyes began to look for him. She was really restless. She looked up.. babaji yeh strange emotions jagate ho tho inko shant karne ka rasta bhi tho dikhayo na..
How she wanted to see him once.. feel him once. That wud just make her day. babaji plz ab bas karo.. pata nahi mai kya kya soche ja rahi hun.

She headed towards her class. In the way parul & khushi joined her. She remained quite & looked away.
Parul- Geet we're sorry na yaar plz
Khushi- Yaa geet we r really sorry
Tum dono kyun nahi aaye when I specially told u to come.. mujhe kya tum logo ko invite bhejna padega..
Parul- Geet sorry kaha na
Tu tho rehne hi de parul.. khushi ka tho I understand uske parants allow nahi karte but u.. tu tho aa sakti thi na
Parul- wahi tho geet.. I don't know kal mom ko kya ho gaya.. she was like kahin nahi jana.. sit at home & study or go with her at some business party.. mai college me tho padti nahi bhala ghar par kaise padu.. bata tu
Rehne de parul
Parul- Geet I swear mom ne mana nahi kiya hota tho I wud have defo come
Pagal.. jis party me teri mom tujhe le jaa rahi thi that was only my dad's party..
Parul- Kya..
Ji haan
Parul- Oops.. wo.. I'm sorry geet
She looked away trying to give an angry look. Parul just hugged her.. bas bhi kar na geet.. chal ab jaldi se maaf karde apni friend ko..
She smiled.. chal tu kehti hai tho maaf kar hi deti hun..


PRECAP
Parul- Geet u r in love.. haina?

Ok so I hope this one is long for u.. Well this time I expect more likes & comments.. I hope I will get them.. luv u all.. & a special thanks to all those who press the like button & comment regularly.. luv u guys.. thanks a lot again..

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Edited by mahimak - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hiii Mahima
yipee i m d 1st one
amazing upd dear
superb
brillant work
thanx for d pm
do cont. soon

Love
Deepa
Edited by Deepanwita - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Niceee! cont soon
thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepanwita

Hiii Mahima
yipee i m d 1st one
amazing upd dear
superb
brillant work
thanx for d pm
do cont. soon

Love
Deepa


Thanks a lot dear..
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Posted: 14 years ago
fianlly they both are there in the love...
just to say feel them that they are in love
lets see...
a great going dear

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