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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 1: Conclusion of current track into Marriage

Continued from:- Abhay: YES!!! I LOVE PIYA!! WE ARE DATING EACH OTHER!! AND WE ARE GONNA GET MARRIED SOON!!! *this answer came from a impulsive Abhay Raichand*
*This words from Abhay left both – Piya and Press reporters started and shocked*
Piya: *was totally shocked at Abhay's words, she dint know what to do or say or how to re-act to this????*
Part 3

*A Press reporter turns towards the camera and says:- "Piya Dobriyal weds Abhay Raichand!! Abhay Raichand ne khud confirm kiya hai. From us and all viewers of star live.. We wish you both a very happy married life. Shaadi mein bolana...math boliye"
Piya: What?? Shaadi? Main? Abhay? *looks at Abhay with confusion, anger on her face, like she wants to tell him 1000 things but she doesn't know from where to start*
Abhay: *steps forward towards Piya*
Piya: *steps backward and walks away without a single word*
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@Reaction of Abhay-Piya's Marriage news on their friends/family

*Kabir-T watching news from a coffee shop tv*
Kabir: Abhay and Piya to wed soon? What rubbish? *one side he is happy for piya because he knows Piya truely luvs Abhay, on the other side he is worried as he doesn't consider Abhay the right guy for Piya*
T: *actually jealous* O-M-G finally these two losers have decided to get married... I cant imagine how their kids will turn out to be
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*Ruhi-Angad who are watching news from Ruhi's home*
Ruhi: Wowww I am soo happy for them !! This would be the first wedding in our group... Main na wo ashwariya type lehnga selaogi for their wedding...
Angad: ...aur main abhishek wala sherwani.
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*Neel and Jay watching the news from their living room*
Neel: Whaoo.. Piya tho bade fast nikle *looks at his brother* Jay, are you fine?
Jay: *quiet and upset... just walks out from there*
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@Dobriyal House
*Dobriyal Family watching the news on TV*
Misha: O – M – G... W – T – H *drops down on sofa, pretending to faint*
Madhu: *really happy* Aaj kal ke bache... ab humien humare bacho ke shaadi ke news tv se milne lag gayi... Hey Bhagwan *holds her head* :S
Panchi: No mom, there is something wrong... Piya has not said anything
Misha: Yea right !! Yeh Abhay kuch bhi bhakwas karr raha hai
Arnab: *just quiet, fuming in anger*
*Piya reaches home*
Piya: Hi everybody!!!..
Arnab-Misha-Panchi-Madhu: What's all this??????
Piya: What?? *asks confusedly and then sees the news playing on tv* Oh yeh...
Arnab: Piya, tum kal Abhay ke sath thi? And you dint even bother to ask permission or inform us about your whereabouts?
Piya: Dad..its not like that
Madhu: *pulls Piya's arm towards her* Do you love Abhay???
Misha: Obviously!! Its Obvio she loves him..!! Mom, aap bhi na kis se kya pooch rahe ho.. Just look at her face, Its written all over "I LOVE ABHAY"
Piya: No Misha, Mom *she tries to explain but someone or the other is cutting her off*
Arnab: See, we are broad minded parents and maine aapne teeno bethiyo ko freedom of choice diya hai... but that doesn't mean you take advantage of it..
Piya: Dad, I swear maine kuch nahi kiya...
Arnab: Its not that we are against you loving someone or getting married... we are very happy for you but ABHAY????? you love ABHAY? *questions in a worried way*
Piya: Please listen to me
Madhu: Humien jo suna tha... wo tv se sunn liya... Now you better go to your room
*Piya runs to her room, Misha and Panchi follow her*
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@Raichand House
*Raichand Family watching the news on tv*
Haseena: Whats all this Abhay??? Hum ek raat yaha nahi the aur wapis aayi then we get to see all this?
Chand: Abhay !! *speaks up, who was silently watching the news* I would like to know ke tumne kya sooch ke media se kaha that you are gonna marry Piya?
Haseena: Impulsive as ever... Do you know what have you done???
Abhay: very well...mom, dad..!!! I know what have I done... Maine bahut sooch samaj ke kaha that I will marry Piya
Haseena: Sooch samaj ke?? *asks amazedly*
Chand: tho humien bhi samjao ke tumne kya soocha aur kya samja??? Ek vampire aur insaan ke shaadi... are you trying to break rules like you always do?
Abhay: Dad!!! Jay is a werewolf!!!
Chand: So??
Abhay: Mr Arnab Dobriyal Piya ke shaadi Jay se karvana chahte hai aur agar aisa ho gaya tho Piya ke jann ko kathra ho sakhta hai.. Jay may use Piya to take revenge on me, on us
Chand: So are you trying to tell me that Abhay Raichand, ek vampire... Jay Khurana, ek werewolf se darr gaya? Are you frightened Abhay?? Fright and Abhay don't go together
Haseena: Tum phir se insaan jazbaato mein beh rahe ho..
Abhay: I have lost love in my life once... Life has given me a second chance in form of Piya aur main ushe khona nahi chahta... kise bhi kimath pe nahi !!!!!
Chand: Do you have an idea... what we would have to face for your sake?
Abhay: Yeahhh!!
Haseena: So are you ready to face it?
Abhay: Anything for Piya...
Chand: Allright then...
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@Dobriyal House
*Dobriyal family are all in the living room, when they see Raichands at their main door. All be shocked seeing Chand and Haseena enter their living room*
Arnab: Aap yaha? Koi zaruri kam? *asks raising a eyebrow*
Chand: Bahut zyaadha zaruri kam
Madhu: *gets up and welcomes them* Aaye na... have a seat!
*All sit down*
Panchi: Look, Abhay has to apologise for what he said to the media... He dint even bother to ask Piya's opinion
Arnab: aur agar aap yaha aapne bte Abhay ke taraf dhare karne aaye hai tho we are not interested
Haseena: Hum yaha Abhay ke liye Piya ka hath magne aaye hai *says directly*
Piya: *is left with her mouth open*
Madhu: *happily shocked*
Misha: Whattt?????????????????????? *whispers to piya: lagta hai raichands ne mera wala tonic (alcohol) pee rakha hai*
Panchi: Piya is not interested in marrying him... usne vaise bhi door se bahut dukh create karr rakha hai Piya ke life mein...
Arnab: Aapki guts ke tareef karne padenge ke itna sab ho jaane ke badh bhi... aapne soocha bhi kaise ke Piya Abhay se shaadi karengi
Haseena: vaise hi jaise apne soocha ke Piya Abhay se shaadi nahi karengii
Chand: I think humien Piya pe apne decession throw karne ke bajai... uss se uska decession pooch lena chaheye *says calmly*
Haseena: Piya, tumara kya decession hai?
*All Dobriyals and Raichands eyes on Piya... waiting for her to speak*
Piya: *she continues to maintain her silence for 2mins* Mujhe Abhay se milna hai..!!! *gets up and goes to her room – It was all too much and too soon for her to handle*
Chand: Fine then... We shall meet again...sooon *Tells the Dobriyals and leaves with Haseena*
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*Piya sends a sms to Abhay – 'Met me at the tea/chai shop at 7pm'*
(Both reach chai shop *the famous CWB's shop* which is near the forest.)
Piya: *looks at him* Chivalry is really dead huh? Without my content tumne humare shaadi ka announcement karr liya?? Aur phir apne parents ko mere ghar bhej diya to ask my hand for you? And you dint even bother to ask me my opinion? Why would you bother to ask?? Doosro ka opinions se tumhe kya farak padta hai... Abhay Raichand ne faisla karr diya tho bass ho gaya
Abhay: *looks at her, just silently hearing what she is saying.*
Piya: shaadi??? Do you know shaadi kya hote hai??? Its a life long commitment which lasts even after death...!!!!!! Its not ke tumare mood karr liya tho shaadi karr li... Its the question of our whole life... *she blasts abhay with her words*
Abhay: Ho gaya? Are you done?
Piya: *what? Kinda expression was on her face*
Abhay: *comes close to her and feels her breath on his face*
Piya: *feeling Abhay so close... she again loses her sanity*
Abhay: *he pushes the hair away from her ears with his fingers, and says in her ears* Shaadi karongi mujse???
Piya: *is still getting over the proximity, scent on his jacket, his touch, his words*
Abhay: Will you marry me?? *he asks again and goes a bit away from her*
Piya: *gets out of the abhay-effect* Marry you???????? Kyunnn??? Because the media has spoilt my name with you??? Thats the reason I will marry you??? Are you having pity on me... like ab mera nam karaab ho gaya tho I wont get any proposal so ehsaan karke mujse shaadi karr rahe ho?
Abhay: *raises his eyebrow, shocked at Piya's thoughts*
Piya: Then you are wrong Mr Abhay Raichand . I am not that kind of girl you think. Agar mera nam karaab bhi ho gaya, agar yeh duniya kuch bhi kahe... I don't care because I know myself... aur aaj bhi mere ek yes pe ladko ke line kade hoge to marry me... I have many option s rather than you
Abhay: *silently smiles watching Piya Dobriyal yap away... He was yet trying to search Piya Jaiswal* Agar yeh tumare doosre options(guys) ne tumare taraf aankh utha ke bhi dekha tho.. I-will-kill-them!!! So that leaves you with no other option rather than marrying me...
Piya: *she doesn't find a suiting reply* Thats not enough reason to marry you... I need a strong reason
Abhay: I'll give you a strong *holds her waist and pulls her towards him* reason!!! *lifts her up and takes her mid forest and pushes her lightly against a tree* Piya, I... *looks in her eyes*
Piya: you?? *blinks her eyes*
Abhay: I love... *goes close to her*
Piya: You love... *her heart goes thud thud thud*
Abhay: *silent*
Piya: you love what????????????
Abhay: I'll tell you some other time *leaves Piya and goes far*
Piya: But I hate you OK!!!!!!!
Abhay: How much?? *he crosses the 10ft distance b/w them in 2secs* Tell me how much you hate me? *kisses her eyes* sooo much that you loose control when I come in front of you? *kisses her cheeks* sooo much that you forget yourself when I am not with you? *kisses her nose* sooo much that you hit on other guys..just to make me jealous? *kisses her chin, looks up at Piya...who was a bit teary eyes* Or sooo much that when I touch you... You forget to breath? *kisses Piya's eyes* Tell me how much you hate me Piya?? Tell me I really want to know...
Piya: I HATE YOU VERY MUCH *says looking sharp into his eyes*
Abhay: But I love you very much *holds her arms tight*
Piya: But I really really hate you *bursts out crying – her tears are the love she holded in her heart this long*
Abhay: But I really really love you *holds her arms even tighter*
Piya: But I hate you lotsss!!!!! *hits his chest*
Abhay: And I love you lotsss!!! *kisses her hands*
Piya: AndI love you ABHAY!! *hugs him and squeezes him hard... with all her strength/love*
Abhay: *kisses her forehead* I love you PIYA!!!
(This moments gets locked for 2mins. Both Abhay-Piya feel light hearted... as if a certain burden has gone off their chest)
Abhay: So you will marry me?
Piya: *smiles* do it the formal way *teases him*
Abhay: *goes on his knees and stretches out his hand* Will you marry me, Piya? *this was totally unabhay*
Piya: Lemme think about it!! *teases him further*
Abhay: Oh C'mon *gets a bit irritated*
Piya: Since our relation has gone public tho Aise propose nahi karte... You have to propose me front of whole dheradhun… phir shayadh "HAAN" karr dongi *this reply comes from paris return Piya Dobriyal* Its a challenge
Abhay: Challenge huh?? No one challenges Abhay Raichand... Its a very wrong thing to do... You will have to pay for it
Piya: I'll be ready to pay for it *winks and goes from there leaving a smiling to himself Abhay behind*
Abhay: *a genuine smile played happily on Abhay's face – like it had missed his face for years*
Here I end this part... Do tell me how was it? Hope you like it... Will continue soon...
Luv
Ritu


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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
beautiful update. love how abhay nearly seduces pia into saying yes. 😊
now waiting for the proposal 😍
Edited by abhayfan_dishu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
i loved it...its damn freaking ausum...fab...abhiya confession was sooo cute...thanks for pm
Edited by peehu24 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Its outstanding...the proposal party and specially how Abhay-Piya convo on how Abhay make Piya realize how much she loves him 😍
Amazing dear 👏 carry one... superbb 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG awesome update loved th way Abhay Proposed Pia😳😳
and am waiting for Abhay to propose in front of the Whole Dehradun and plsplsplspls... Pls Update Soon am dying for ur next update Hope sumthing Like this happens in the Show
and Thanx a ton for the PM
Edited by moonlitnisha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
Imagining abhay on dancing tenu leke me jawan ga for piyaa hayyyeee
awesome part yar!
update soon please
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely!!!!!!!!!!u r ritu right then one i met in game?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ur writing is jst wow!!luvng ur ff!plz ad me 2 ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg!!!!!!!
The update was superb!!!!!!
Amazing,fantastic dear.
luv the romance between abhiya.
They both look so cute.
I'm still in their dreamland after reading ur update.
This part ws outstanding.
lovd every bit of it.. dear.
thanx for pm . .continue soon. .tc!
eagerly waiting for ur next part,so plz do update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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this was the best Update... how Abhay forces piya to say yes! and then piya finally admits that she loves him...wow! hope this happens in the show! and then paris return Piya Dobrial ka challenge...so looking forward to the proposal... you are an awesome writer dear! continue soon!!!
Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 14 years ago

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