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Congrats for the new thread. do update soon.
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Congrats on the new thread...waiting for update
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FOR NEW THREAD
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Part 29

She looked at his sad eyes and felt her heart skip a beat, she went forward and held his wrist and pulled him inside, he followed her command, once inside he pulled her and hugged her, she felt at home in his embrace.

M: why are you going back?

G: I have no reason to stay

M: invent some

G: you try

He rested his forehead on hers, and traced his fingers on her either arms, she shuddered, the movement was gentle but gradually it turned wild, she was heavily breathing and so was he, he then cupped her face and nibbled slowly on her trembling petals, she was like waiting for this and circled her arms around his neck pulling him closer.

The passion was running high, they were lost in each other, he traced every exposed part of her body with anger, yes he was angry, he was frustrated by his helplessness, he wanted her to stay back, he wanted her to be his forever, but he was not sure if that was possible, same was her plight, she was longing for all this, her body responded well to his attempts, she too wanted to stay back, but she was not able to find a single excuse, so she gave up and surrendered to the heat of the moment.

After a very long time he stopped and as he moved back she hugged him, he held her tight like a small kid holding his most cherished toy, she was trembling with desire, but he knew well that if he stayed back then there will be no going back, and he may end up doing some thing that would only make things complicated, he held her back and rested his forehead on hers, she was flushed all pink, her cheeks were a darker shade and her eyes darker then usual, she was in a mess, but all he could formulate was she was ready to surrender to what ever he wanted, but he should not move further, so he said

M: Geet, come let's have dinner at the Mansion

G: ok

And the two moved to the Mansion, Pratham was just going to have dinner, Maan moved back seeing him there, Geet held him and indicated him to join his father, she herself sat on his right side, forcing Maan to sit on left.

G: good evening Uncle

P: good evening, Beta ji, so you have decided to go back

G; yes, uncle, now that my course is complete and Di also has been married, I don't think any one will allow me to stay longer at Delhi

P: so what have you thought, you will do now, wait for some marriage proposal

Maan stiffened and Pratham noticed he smiled and continued

P: BTW why don't you stay back, and work as an architect in KC,

G: me as an architect, but Sasha

P: I never like that woman, she looks so cunning, but as she is a daughter of our very faithful employee, we can nit throw her out, but you can always join us, am I right Maan

Maan was not prepared to get involved in the discussion, he just nodded. By that time they were finished with eating and Pratham asked them to come to the lobby with him,

P: Nakul, 3 coffees in the lobby, come Geet Maan do join us

Maan followed them

And the talk resumed, Maan was standing near the window and Geet was sitting on the sofa facing him, where as Pratham sat near Maan's side.

P: so what I were suggesting was, that this job issue is temporary, as when you get married you might choose to leave it

Maan glared at him and gave her a helpless look, she too felt awkward

G: ji uncle

P: I were talking to Ranveer and we came out with a permanent solution, but it can only be possible if you two agree

Maaneet gave him a puzzled look, he continued

P: Ranveer and I have been friends for long, but now we are thinking of becoming relatives

Maan could not hold back and said: how?

Pratham smiled: but that depends on your wish, I am only suggesting, no force, it's totally if you want

Maan was irritated: what?

P: if you two can get married

Before he could complete his sentence both said "WHAT?"

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part 30

Edited by smj1977 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow...love the part...
Love that Pratham has talked straight about their wedding...
Love their reaction...

waiting for next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow! Loved the part.
So the elders already thought about their marriage.
Hope maan & geet realize their love & accept the proposal soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was awesome

i mean straight to marriage proposal coool not bad
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats on new thread shruthi...
shruthi u r making me mad...
wats this...they love each other, they cannot live without each other...they cant stand some one getting even closer to on another and they have the passion and desire then when pratham suggested marriage y did they get shock in first place...
mujhe toh chakkar aa raha hain inn dono ko samajne mein...
now update soon and clear my doubts yaar...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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didi its part 29..where is 30 ??
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow that was a lovely surprise from pratham to the couple who were not able to leave each other,

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