NEW FAN-FICTION 'Mai dil tum dhadkan'

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charecters

Abhay=a human

Mr. Raichand= abhay's dad succesful business man richest in the world lives in dehradoon

Hasina raichand=abhay's mom miss universe of 1984

Siddhart=brother of abhay

Jennifer aka jenny= sister of abhay

Arnab dobriyal world second richest man rival of raichaind's

Story to be continued
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sunita satardekar

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Posted: 14 years ago

NICE CHARACTER SKETCH YAAR...SOUNDS INTERESTING...PLZ DO CONT SOON...N PM MELUV U SUNITA

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now let me start the story when hasina won the tittle of miss universe then chand and arnab was trying to impress her but only chand succeded and after 20 year chand had meet the car accident where his car was hit by a truck intentionally and missing now . At this time abhay is 16 and hasina a widow now she suspect arnab to be involved in this conspiracy.

Precap=chad injured badly some how crawling in the jungle see's a man injured by wooden stick still stick was in his heart and he was asking chand to remove that stick

Madhu the wife of arnab talking with some one by phone and telling that she is alive u had done the mistake

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hey guys if u like the ff or not in both case plz reply and tell me the pro's and con's of ff

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Ki fark Painda hai

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi its interesting..Pls continue soon...😛😛😛...

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Divya Sharma

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hmmm sound interesting continue soon.. Plz add me in your pm list...

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Rosie -x-

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Posted: 14 years ago

Interseting ff- I like were you wrote "abhay = human" lool.

Do update soon :D xx

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chapter-2

chand is passing by jungle crawling as he can not walk due to accident and he see a man injured badly by wooden stick still there crossing his chest he is screaming and asks to chand to bring out that stick. he did so.as he did so the injured man became fit and fine.chand wonders but suddenly a strong feeling of pain emerges in chand's mind and he died suddenly but the man who was saved by chand says= you saved the life of akash the eldest vampire on earth now i'll save you and bring you back to life and by saying this he bites chand on his neck and after some time fangs in place of teeth was apearing now chand asks akash what he done.he tell him whole story and then chand thanks him for bring the dead chand into life again as the living dead.

in raichand mansion

hasina is worrying for chand then suddenly 10 men with arms enters raichand mansion and they started threting hasina and abhay.they killed hasina brutally and they was about to kill abhay and abhay became consiousless.but suddenly chand came there and kill all the intruders and then he sees hasine died he wants to weep but he can't as he is now a vampire and he remembers what akash told him he said to him that if with in 24 hrs. of a human death anyvampire bite him he or she will come to the life back.and he bites hasina.

chapter 2 ends

precap
chand and hasina both have fangs.

scene of a school where a student with 99 percent in 10th board is rejected from the admission list.and announced not qualified.
principle standing at the gate of school of mono "V.F.C. school".
SOME ONE ON PHONE SAY TO him that if can create the controversy not to admit a student with 99 %.princi replied if we had give we would be exposed he may be killed.ressisting the instinct of killing humans are not possible for us.

Edited by arif4441 - 14 years ago

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644078

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hey guys and gals plz do reply

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