Simply Magic - Spell # 2 || NTL - page 147 - Page 48

sweet and cute one
thanks for the pm

Have you ever tried reading a Mills and Boons novel, lady?

awesome os

OMG this is sooo cute...I think after long time u wrote a before marriage romance...And trust me it ws worth it...
Im so happy today...First the news of retelecasting MJHT and now this super romantic OS...Allah is too meherban on me...
Love this sweety...Write more on this topic...😉

OMG Fanta how did i miss Missed call😲

A night before Presentation,

I loved, just loved the opening setting. In just a few lines you manage to create a tense yet playful setting. You open with that loud shout and then immediately detract away from it by Nupur's nonchalant reaction, thereby forming a pattern of reaction for the reader to follow in suit too. Cleverly done.

abhi tu kitabon k beech main chor k ayi thi So cute. I love these cute lines you write for Nupur. They are in Rati's style but with a splash of Kinza too. I love how you take a characterization and make it your own but without destroying it beyond our own beloved consciousness of it. Finely done.

"bus aisye hi" So that we find that the urgency of the initial shout is not rooted in anger but frustration. Very finely done. You could have pulled it in any direction and your ability to keep the reader in suspense of it until you are ready to disclose it, is masterful.

OK, so you know my disinclination to such scenes. I mean I don't hate them but rather just wish for a little sacredness concerning them. It isn't a matter of right and wrong just difference of temperament. Haan, I know I am a prude.😳

Regardless, I read them from behind a pillow, and I am much appreciative of the little oasis you created for me, or rather people like me. "main soch raha hon ik baar aur revision kar hi lon" 😳😆 Short and sweet jhalak of a deep yet delicate love.

New dreams.

I liked the title, for new dreams come when old ones have come true, setting an ambiance not of hope but rather happiness. Here the dream of a house with which a good husband and a good and sincere life she had turned into a home. A dream accomplished and rather than it fading away, it was she who was letting it go. Nicely done.

Professor Woes.

So, 😳. Kinza, please don't be offended or take this personally, but maybe it is time you got married. 😆 Sorry. You know I am more of that aunty ji type so just ignore me. I am sure every one else, the more friend type, your peers, loved it. I am sure their appreciation more than suffices.

With much love, your sister, Sabah.

I loved professor woes. I do the same all the time complain about every single one of my teachers and my mum replies with beta aisa nahin kehta😆 but i do it all the times anyways👍🏼🤣 mazaa aata hai😃 the beginning was to sweet and very romantic.☺️ I love your new style of writing.👍🏼 end was fab love the start the work I'll come to remove your frown☺️
overall too cute😍

hello all!! ..
okay so this idea was going in my head for very long, as this issue is very prevalent in Asia, sp .. south east Asia .. so finally i wrote a small piece today .. hope u all enjoy! ..

Faryal was working in the kitchen, while the phone bell was constantly ringing.

"sadaf zara phone dekho", she called out her sister in law in a loud voice but it was of no use, "bhabhi ap dekh lo na, main TV dekh rahi hon", she said in an equally loud voice and faryal quickly stirred her dish and turning the stove dim, she ran out to the phone.

On coming out she found that everyone was sitting in the lounge, her mother – in law, father – in law, sadaf, but no one bothered to pick up the phone. Wondering and getting amazed she quickly picked up the receiver before the phone would disconnect.

"hello", she said in a displaced breath and the person on the other side felt it was music from heaven.

"faryal..", he said softly and it hit the deepest chord of faryal's heart. Suddenly she felt her heart pumping fast and her lips curved in a shy smile.

"ap ..", she said in a low voice, still in surprise and amazement.

"gi main .. ap kisi aur ko expect kar rahin thin?" he said in a naughty tone and faryal smiled even more wide, "nahi wo .."

While she was smiling, her mother – in – law was very keenly observing her blush.

"faryal kis ka phone hai?", she interrupted in a strict authoritative voice and her smile vanished, 'ami wo .. in .. in ka phone hai", she said slowly and the frown on the woman's face was replaced with a vibrant smile.

"arey mera beta .. lao phone zara yahan ..",she announced and faryal smiled weakly, and took the cordless to her, while Umer on the other side did frown, but then it was his mother,

"Aslakm alikum ami!", he said

"walikum askalm beta .. jetey raho … khush raho .. haye maa sadqe jaye .. kaisa hai mera beta ..",she said lyrically and umer giggled, "thek hon ami, ap dua karti hain tu thek hon, ap apni tabiyat ki sunano"

"arey meri tabiyat ka kiya hai … ab borhi ho gayi hon tu ..", she sighed while faryal just stood in the corner, because she knew now she won't get the phone back.

"arey zara meri baat karwao ..", her father in law came forward, and so did her sadaf, "meri bhi bhai se baat karwao.

Faryal knew that the calling card would have the talk time of only 45 minutes and he used to call once in a week, for 45 minutes, and every time, it was her luck if she got to pick up the phone, or sometimes a few minutes at the end, and sometimes she didn't even got to talk.

Umer worked in the middle east, and used to visit home once a year. They belonged to a lower middle class family and thus it was necessary to do all this to maintain expenses. She was married two years back and in these two years she had spent just four months with him, but she still loved him. The way he took care of his family and the way he happily accepted all the responsibilities made her respect him very much.

Although they did talk less, but whenever they did, it felt like time stood still, and today again his one naughty love-filled statement was enough for faryal to smile and blush.

"faryal!",

Her mother in law called out her name and she was shaken out of her thoughts, "gi",she fumbled.

"ye lo, jaldi baat karo aur phir tumhain kahan bhi banana hai", she held out the cordless and faryal looked blankly.

It was just 15 minutes since he called and will she be getting a half an hour to talk??

"arey pakro bhi", she said again and faryal took the phone hesitantly.

"hello", she said again

"faryal … I guess tum kitchen main chali jao .. wo kya hai k I don't want anyone else to see ur blush which is going to come in the following half an hour ", he said with a naughty giggle and she suppressed her smile and looked at her mother in law, , "umm.. ami main ye kitchen main le jati hon phone", she said and went away blushing while her mother – in – law's glare followed her, but she didn't care for anything more – her husband didn't let her care, his charm was too irresistible and his love was too powerful.

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awww kinzu- it was so sweet OS Dear
Veryyy Nice..
i loved this line
"faryal … I guess tum kitchen main chali jao .. wo kya hai k I don't want anyone else to see ur blush which is going to come in the following half an hour ".lol lol

It was awesome hun
loved it so much