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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey dat was a nice update hope geet gains conscious soon do update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

Geet, no coma! Please! Thanks for the update!



Well i can't tell you yet... but i hoope you like it x
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: preethia

loved the updates...

finally maan found her...
her uncle how can he b so blind that they killed their sister but that doesnt bother but radhe killed his bro that matters and he wants to kill her for revenge...
now cant wait for maan and radhe to take revenge...
waiting for maaneet to tell their past identity...
pl cont soon



thanks x
Yeah maan finally found her,..
hehe yeah its going to be good but yeah once they reveal it its going to be good x
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ruhakhan

Hey dat was a nice update hope geet gains conscious soon do update soon


thanks ..)
Glad you liked it...
don't Worry it will be good x

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey, Guys!!!
Well Most Of You Guys Were Saying You Didn't Want Geet To Go Into A Coma..
So I Didn't Let Her Go Into A Coma...
Well I Hope You Guys Enjoy This Update x




Chapter 19 –

Everyone was waiting for Geet to wake up… there were 10 minutes left.. 10 minutes till for her to wake up or else she would slip into a coma.. everyone had tired to wake her up.. but nothing.. maan had just sat there… no moved nothing… he couldn't do anything, he couldn't hold her hand or talk to her… Radhe was sat there so he couldn't move, he couldn't do anything to help her…. Nothing…

Radhe, and everyone was sat near her bedside…talking to her, laughing telling her about their childhood, making her hear everything.. still no response.. nothing… doctors came to get everything sorted if she slips into a coma…. There was 5 minutes left…

Everyone got up and left the doctors to do their job… Radhe, Rahul, Sameer, Anjali all went to the temple in the hospital and prayed…. Dev, Vicky, and the rest of them was waiting outside…. Maan went into geet's room.. there was one minute left.. he could try his luck and see if she wakes up..

Maan – hey geet… kaise ho he said he held her hand and took a deep breath before he carried on..

Maan – jainthi ho main kaun ho… still holding her hand…

Maan – main tumhara ladoo hoon geet.. he looked at his watch and he had less than 30 seconds before she slips into a coma…

Maan – Geet utto na… please…

Maan – please mujhe tumse bohat sari baatienn karni hai… he looked at geet… still geet did not move or open her eyes.. she was still in that state of unconsciousness.

Maan – geet please he said tears falling.. he had less than 10 seconds left… the doctors came in behind them… followed by radhe, Rahul and sameer and the rest of the family…

Maan – Geet dekh tumhara bhaiyoon kitna pyaar karta hai tumko…. Kitna chahtha hai tujko… unki liya tho utto… Geet.. utto na.. aapna bhaiyon ki liya… main une aisa dekh nahi saktha… please Geet … Still no movement…

Maan - Mera liya Mishty… Mera liya… he whispered as tears fell on her hand… it was 12…

Doctors put a hand on Maan's Shoulder…

Doctor – Mr Khurana… I'm Sorry lekin ab yeh coma main hi chali gaye hai.. please ab jaaye…Radhe, Rahul, Sameer And Anjali broke down… maan still hand hold of Geet's Hand…..he got up slowly loosing the hold on geet's hand as Radhe, As the rest left the room leaving him and the doctor..…

Slowly leaving Geet's Hand he felt his hand being held tight….

Ladoo, she whispered… she whispered his name and he turned around to face her… her eyes were still closed but her hand was moving… she held his hand tight and maan rushed to her bedside…

Maan – Mishty… tum tekh ho..

Geet – Ladoo she whispered… still her eyes closed…

Doctor – Mr Khurana yeh tho bohat acha new hai… Gee tab coma main nahi hai… hum iska checkup karta hai aur phir humme saaf pata chalgea .. please ab aap bhaar jaye..

Maan – Tekh hai doctor.. he said not wanting to let the doctors wait any longer… he looked at geet and said Mishty main abhi aata hoon.. hmmm ek minute main… He slowly bent down to kiss her forehead as he brought his head back he saw a small smile on her face…

He smiled as he saw this and walked out.. he saw Radhe, Rahul, Sameer, Vicky, Ada, Rani, Anjali, Kajol, Pinky, Meera, Arjun, Arohi, Dev and Adi sat there… Radhe, Rahul, Sameer, Vicky and Anjali were all crying hugging each other with tears falling.. radhe had his head in kajols lap crying his eyes out.. whispering Geet's name…

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Maan walked up to them and put his hand on Radhe's shoulder… Radhe got his head of Kajol's lap and got up off the floor..he looked at Maan and hugged him… Radhe hugged maan tight and cried bitterly…

Radhe – Vo chali gayi hai… mujhe choor ki chali gayi…

Maan – Radhe Baat sun …

Radhe – maine kya kiya tha ki vo muje aise choor ki chali gayii

Maan – lekin Radhe… mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai…

Radhe – mama aur papa mujhe maaf nahi kara gaye…

Maan – maan vo kahin nahi gayi… vo abhi zinda hai..

Radhe – mujhe geet chahiya x

Maan – she moved…

Radhe was shocked…

Radhe – kya…

Maan – Haan usni haath hilaya… she moved her hand…

Radhe smiled…

Radhe – Sach… he smiled with tears in his eyes..

***

Geet was now just asleep even though Radhe Thought she had slept for ages.. But there was nothing they could do about it… Radhe left Geet to sleep…

Radhe – Thank god..!! ab vo teek hai…

Sameer – Main bohat khush hoon.. meri Geet teek hogai hai…

***

Maan was now at home, with daadima… he had not slept at all.. but now he knew she was going to be alright he went home and slept peacefully with his head on his daadima's lap.. he smiled in his sleep…

The next day he went to visit Geet in hospital… Radhe, Rahul And Sameer was still at home so Maan was the only one who was with Geet…

As soon as he walked in he saw Geet was awake.. he walked upto her and sat down… Geet looked at him and smiled…. She was nervous.. she didn't know what to say to him.. she wanted to say thanks but how she didn't know..

Maan wanted to know how to talk to her, he wanted to ask if she was alright… he wanted to over to her and tell her how scared he was to lose her, how hard it was for him to sit there with her brothers and not be able to say anything…

Maan wanted to hug her and kiss her…

Maan & Geet – Maan Geet… they said together… the both looked at each other and laughed nervously…

Maan – Geet tum kuch kehna chahthi hai?? He asked..

Geet – Vo.. tum pehle kaho…

Maan – nahi tum kaho na he said …

Geet smiled…

Precap

Will Maan and Geet Talk??

I know its short but I hope you like…

Hit the LIKE Button And Please Comment…




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Posted: 14 years ago
hiii
awesome update
loved it
loved maan
glad geet is okaiii
maaneet sooo sweet
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
Edited by KaSh-Maneet-Fan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank you so muh for the pm
awesome update
loved it...
already waiting for more...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi
wow i liked it
so emotional
do conitnue
n thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
loved the way geet came out of coma

do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

I loveeedd it.. and you scared me Nazmaa!😆 And.. it was so cute how Maan said that he is her ladoo😳

Update soon! and make the confession fast fast!😆

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