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Posted: 14 years ago


Thanku all for ur encouragement on all previous 8 parts''!!!
hope u like this too...😳😳



PART-9



They were still stuck in the jam and snowfall was continuing badly'.the roads were covered with snow'.Geet was unconscious and maan's tension was growing up second by second'..he rested her head on her laps and rubbed her hands'.but she dint responded'.maan took out his waist coat and put it over geet''his tension kept on increasing'!!

Finally he decided to look for a shelter'..he asked the driver to take them to a nearby hotel'..but it was about 2 feet of snowfall on the roads and the car could not even move from where it was standing.

Maan( self-thought) agar aise main subah ka intezaar karta raha to pata nahi kya ho jaega'lagta hai muje hi kuch karna padega' main geet ko iss halaat mein nahin dekh sakta'.

He got up from the car and took geet in her arms and started to look for some shelter'..!!


Snowfall was continuing at a fast pace and it was difficult for him to walk and when he carried on geet became more difficult'..he slipped many a time but dint loose his hope'moved on but still could not find any place for rest.

It was getting cold and cold'..maan too was shivering now but he continued moving on''finally he saw a shelter which eased his tension a bit'..!!

He rested geet on a chair outside the house and knocked the door but no-one opened it''.he went to geet again rubbed her hands...tried hard to bring her consciousness back'..


and finally he succeeded'.geet opened her eyes''maan was so happy'..

Maan: geet tum thik to ho na?

Geet nodded her head in approval. Maan hugged her''maahi in background'...


Maan: geet tumhe iss haalat mein dekh kar pata hai main kitna darr gaya tha.

Geet(was unable to reply it was so cold) and again fainted.

Maan kept talking to her but she dint replied'.they were still in a hug...

Maan: geet'geet tum kuch bol kyu nahi rahi ''breaks the hug and notices that she was shivering badly and was unconscious'..

This was the time maan could not think much'.he straightaway opens the door and takes her inside the house. He rested geet on a bed and covered her with a quilt, blanket and lit fire around her. Maan was again rubbing her hands and found that geet had high temperature too''!!!

He starts putting wet pattis on her forehead''.did it for a while'.and felt that her condition was bit improving'..

Maan tried calling up doctors so that he could seek their advice once but networks were jammed due to bad weather'..

He kept rubbing her hands...but he knew that he had to wait till the next morning'..maan was too feeling cold' he sat near her holding her hand and fall asleep'..!!

It was midnight now'..maan broke up with his sleep'.he saw geet sleeping peacefully '..he thought to wake her up and ask how she was feeling but dint disturbed her'.

maan noticed that the coals in the fire were almost burnt now'..so thought to lit them up again'..as soon as he stood up'.geet holded his hand'. "please muje chod ke mat jaiye"'..


maan was surprised hearing this''he sat back near her'..and kept staring geet''!

maan(self thought) ye muje kya ho raha hai''geet ki main koi bhi baat nazar-andaaz kyu nahi kar pa raha hu'..use main takleef main bhi nai dekh pa raha''aisa lagta hai ki vo har pal mere hi pass rahe'vo hasti hai to main hasne lagta hu'.uske chehre se jaise meri nazar hatne ka naam hi nahi le rahi'.abhi be sote hue ekdum pari ki tarah lag rahi hai''mano koi pari aasman se utar ayi ho sirf or sirf mere liye'.

Thinking all this he even fell asleep.

It was next morning now maan woke up and was waiting for geet to get up''she was fine now''temperature was okay''maan stood up near a window and saw that whole of Shimla was covered with snow'.it looked as if the hills was covered with white blanket'everything was so calm'silent''but that beauty was nothing in front of his geet''!!

Finally geet woke up'she saw a new place and saw maan standing behind her''.!!

Geet(self thought) ye kaha pe hai hum'or mere upar ye sir ka waise coat''.stands up immediately and looks at maan''😕😕😕


Precap'.geet: ye muje kya ho raha hai, kyu har baat maan sir pe shuru hoti hai or unhi pe hi khatam??????


Well how was it friends??? I know was a short update''and sincere apologies for that''.!!

Please comment and share ur thoughts on how did u find the update'..will be waiting'..!! 😳😳😳

Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow me firsttt
he i loved it totally
thanks for the pm
it was awesome part
do continue
luv ya
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
Thanx for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
AWESOME... SUPERB Update dear. Loved it. Thanks 4 d pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesom and superb
sweet short update
cont soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi thanks 4 da pm n wonderful update. beautifully written...MAan is falling for geet! Maan took care of her, precap is awesome, update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowowoowo silky ..

rocking part ..

best of luck 4 the next 1 .. 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome update silkz..
geet shocked, maan rocked 😆
cont soon
love
Noor
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow what an innocent romantic update dear...
seriously...itne khoobsurati se tumne saare situ ko handle kiya
loved the way maan took care of geet...n jab man hi man mein maan ne kaha meri geet 😳😳😳
The best thing was k maan felt the beauty of environment was nothing in front of geet ...this was really sweet
n geet neend mein jab kehti hai k mujhe chod kar mat jaayiye...😳😳😳
okay so maan has slowly started realizing his feelings n precap se lagta hai k geet bhi dheere dheere apne feelings ko realize kar hi legi
lovely update
love-Piya

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