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Meera

@momo.x

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

I'm a great fan of Arohi and Arjun.

I'm new here but I was silent reader..

This is my first time writing an FF.

So it may not be interesting but I will keep you entertained.

May not be all romance in it.

This FF is called: Black Doves

I know its late to post a FF, but lets just try.

So enjoy =)

For a Pm please hit the LIKE Button, If you dont I wont be able to PM you. Because I got studies going on so please hit the like button if you want a Pm.

Edited by momo.x - 14 years ago

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Meera

@momo.x

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Posted: 14 years ago

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1. Chapter 1.. Pg. 1

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Meera

@momo.x

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

Chapter 1

There I was standing on the bridge. Trembling. Shivering. I was soaked. The weather was terrible today. All you could hear was the loud thunderstorms and the rain drop hitting the ground. I looked terrible. My curly hair was ruined by the water and my makeup was smeared. But I had to do. This was my last chance. Last chance to get my true love.

- Arohi, Please leave. We cant be together.

- But Arjun''

- Arohi just go. Forget about me.

- I cant Arjun. It's hard. Please don't live me.

- But you have too' Forget about us.

- But I love you'.. Arjun.

I ran to Arjun and gave him a big hug and said " I love you ". At first Arjun didn't respond to my hug but after a few minutes he wrapped his arms around me. He told me those 3 magical words. I love you too Arohi. He grabbed my chin and looked at me. Slowly he kissed my forehead and than my cheeks. Than he came to my lips and I gave him a smooch. The longest kiss

Aaja aaja, o aaja aaja Aaja aaja, piya ab to aaja - 2 Dekh to kaisi haalat hui hai Aake humko gale se laga jaa - 2 Tujhse milne ki chaahat hui hai Aaja aaja, piya ab to aaja - 2 Dekh to kaisi haalat hui hai Kya bataaoon tujhe kitna pyaar kiya Har ghadi bas tera intezaar kiya Haan, kya bataaoon tujhe kitna pyaar kiya Har ghadi bas tera intezaar kiya

Chaahe jaagi rahi, chaahe soyi rahi Tere khwaabon khayaalon mein khoyi rahi O, ho oh oh, oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh Tujhse hoke judaa mere raja - 2 Mujhpe kya kya qayaamat hui hai Aaja aaja, aaja aaja, ho Aaja aaja, piya ab to aaja - 2 Dekh to kaisi haalat hui hai (Tera sandesa jab se hai aaya sajan Ek ajab sa nasha mujhpe chhaaya sajan) - 2

Ab to kaate se bhi waqt kat ta nahin Tera chehra nigaahon se hat ta nahin O, oh oh oh, ho oh oh oh oh oh oh oh Yeh khushi ki khabar sunke raja - 2 Beqaraari mein raahat hui hai Aaja aaja, aaja aaja, ho Aaja aaja, piya ab to aaja - 2

Dekh to kaisi haalat hui hai

Aake humko gale se laga jaa - 2

Tujhse milne ki chaahat hui hai

- Arohi your pagal, to stand outside in the rain for me.

- Arjun I can do anything for you. We falled in love.

- Look at the rain. Perfect timing for our love to blossom.

- Your right Arjun, no one can separate us

- But what about your parents. Your already engaged.

- Arjun take me away. Lets run away really far.

- No Arohi. That's not right. I have to convince your parents that I will be a good son-in-law. No matter what.

- But Arjun.. That will be impossible. Your poor and I'm from a rich Kingdom. Please don't be stubborn.

- Arohi. We falled in love. No one can separate us. Don't worry. I'm here.

- Arjun I love you too.

- Arohi I love you too.

- CUT!!!!! - said the director of our play.

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varshini karthik

@.vrshn.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

wow! the way you wrote was wonderful!!
i loved it completely!
it was a scene in a play??
do continue!
waiting to know how your story unfolds!😊

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Kudi_NextDoor

@Kudi_NextDoor

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

Better late than never! There's just so much talent on this forum, so many amazing thoughts; it always leaves me stumped. Great start.

Do continue :)

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Meera

@momo.x

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Kudi_NextDoor
Better late than never! There's just so much talent on this forum, so many amazing thoughts; it always leaves me stumped. Great start.
Do continue :)

thank you so much... yes I will continue =)