Eyes And Vision [Original SS] : Chapter 10 : Pg 53- Page 29

Originally posted by: ...Aashi...

I dunno why my sister isn't updating anything...but as far as i know..she isn't even opening her I-F account...she hasn't logged in since 29th...the date she last updated...

Thanks Aashi...

You know na..

- Mahi

Originally posted by: sariska_mnarti

chp on pg 34:

lovely'

it was really romantic

feelin bad for pankhudi

cont soon

Thanks for considering it romantic :)

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- Mahi

Originally posted by: sariska_mnarti

part 5:

wow mahak

lovely update

simply amazing

sorry for replying really late

will reply 2 all ur updates soon :D

Thanks for considering it lovely :)

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- Mahi

Originally posted by: .rumki.

Hi mehak gr8 ff
do pm me 4m next time
whem u pmed abt this i had exam and couldnt pm u back

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- Mahi

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

Update mahak...

I am updating it today <3

- Mahi

Originally posted by: a little faith

Chapter Six.

The Chinese have a saying, that things are completed by their opposites. I love this saying.. In order to understand or appreciate love we must feel hurt too, in order to appreciate companionship we must understand loneliness. Exactly true :) Here you contrast darkness with light. Yup. However your skill is that you showcase light first, something most if not all would have not done, that's true...coz i myself never read something happening at all...and i read a lot. for it is far easier to illuminate light after darkness, like the day that follows night in our world, in our lives. I did it purposely. Why not experiment a little? It is easier for us to see light after dark NOT to imagine dark after light, it is easier since that is what we wish, the other is something that is far sadder. That's exactly right. And that was what i was trying to show. It was a challenge for me. and i jst had to do it. However you have created something wonderful here, you showcase darkness after light and yet make it inspiring as well as making that light all the more brighter for it. I am so happy that i succeeded. Just skillfully done. Thanks :) Very impressive. Thanks yaar...thank you sooo much. I can't tell you how much flattered I am!

I felt like a tiger in a cage. I loved how you show his strength of character as someone who guards himself as well as guarding others from himself, from his, our more primal desires. Yes, Arth is a very strong person. He would always protect the one he loves...even if it meant saving them from himself. In truth we are all capable of evil but the strong are not those who overpower others BUT those that over power themselves. Yup...that's what i was trying to show! Excellently done! Thank you :)

An excellently written part, as expected but the layering and detailing of Arth was just magnificent. Thanks yaar...i am so glad that you liked it :) Truly impressive writing. Thank you...i thought that i use such simple words in this SS that no one is gonna like it. Thanks for liking it Sabah :) It means a LOT to me. With love, Sabah Love, Mahak P.S. - I miss you <3

I replied to you in my favorite colour: pink :)

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I always wait for them <3

- Mahi

update soon dear...waiting for it

Mahak,

I was saddened to hear about your difficulty. I wish I could have done something. However in truth, even if I had known, this is something you had to suffer through, struggle past and succeed regardless on your own. I was much heartened by your note though. You seem you be your own protector like most warriors. : ) Stay strong, keep fighting, your friend, always, Sabah 😳

Originally posted by: shaheen_memon

update soon dear...waiting for it

Hmm...i am updating it today only..