Ek Raja aur Ek Rani ki kahani-- A Poem!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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This is my poetic attempt to narrate the story of Ram and Priya. Any grammatical mistakes , please bear due to poetical liberties. Read and enjoy and do please comment.Thank you.
BADE ACCHE LAGTHE HAIN!!
Aao sunao pyar ki ek kahani,
Ek tha ladka ek thi ladki deewani.
Ek tha Raja badi seher mein rehnewala

Roop hai uska mota thoda par dil se ek shera.

Bhai behen se bahut hai pyaara

Par unme chuppu hua chaal ko kabhi nahin samajaya.

Gayab hai ek bhai; aur shaitan hai doosra

Dono hai katharnaak hamesha.

Maayke se bandhi ek behen; aur doosra hai pagal

Raja ne pitah jaise undono pala.

Unke Maa hai sautela
Poora burayian hain uski pehechana.
Mama hai ek number ka chor

Uski baatein aur soch sab bekkar.

Dost hai ek badiya aadhmi

Hamesha saathi haath badaatein hain.

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Ek thi Rani usi seher mein rehnewali
Sundar sulrili roop hai unki aur deewani.
Pitah hai retired aur biwi se tohda henpecked
Baap aur beti ka anmol rista; unke bandhan hai atoot.
Maa hai purana zamaneka saundarya rani
Par ajeeb hai soch vichar badi beti ki baaren mein.
Behen hai eki, jho bahut hai kubsoorat
Aashayian kuch zyada unki,ab tak acchi lagthi.
Dost jaisa Bhai unka,usko pyaar se pala aur posa
Woh bhi sab kuch karega uski kushi ki vaaste.
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Toh ek tha Raja aur ek thi Rani deewani
Aao sab aur suno unki pyaari ki yeh kahani.
Ek din achanak mile hai dono aur hogaya ek durghatna
Dil se dil takraya aur isko kehthe hai takdeer.
Samajhauta se shaadhi hoga unke bhai behen ke kaathir
Ab saath saath chalna hoga zindhagi ki har raaste se.
Aankh se aankh milna hai,dil se dil baat bataana hain
Dheere dheere pyar bhi hoga aur had se guzar jaana hain.
Kuch Jaana, Kuch Anjaana Sa woh chera dono ka
Saari Raina Sapna Banke woh aankhon mein jaage.
Bade Ache Lagte Hain
Yeh Mausam, Yeh Baatein, Yeh Uljhan, Aur Tum
Bade Ache Lagte Hain
Yeh Dharti, Yeh Nadiya, Yeh Raina Aur Tum.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow very nice & cute
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@Maris lovely, the whole family captured in ek tip top lines. We are hoping for dheere dheere se...haule haule se...ek pyaar ki dor kiche raja aur rani koh.👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: divan

@Maris lovely, the whole family captured in ek tip top lines. We are hoping for dheere dheere se...haule haule se...ek pyaar ki dor kiche raja aur rani koh.👏

Thanz Divan for liking this.
Yes ab dheere dheere hoga pyar aur Ram ko bhi koi apna pan milega jho unko behether samajayega!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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👏👏Great job! Your poem captured the essence of the characters. You have a flair for writing.👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Maris just wonderfully described...the whole family came out beautifully, I wish I could write like you ...just too good👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Aviva and Jayati I humbly accept your praises. It was a spur of a moment thought, yesterday morning and just sat down to type those lines least I forget my lines. Thankfully it came out well.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: maris08

Aviva and Jayati I humbly accept your praises. It was a spur of a moment thought, yesterday morning and just sat down to type those lines least I forget my lines. Thankfully it came out well.

It's amazing! Creativity written on the spur of the moment sometimes takes the cake .
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow! Lovely... you write so well... 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Maris, very well written. 👏

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