Maneet SS 'Love is Blind' NOTE page 151 - Page 25

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Posted: 14 years ago
I loved it , awesome update ⭐️...thnx 4 pm .
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow u r back,dev is such a disgustng husband.
nice prt,precap is grt,thnxs 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Precap sounds interesting ...cont. soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks 4 da pm n amaizng update...hey precap is intersting update soomn
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow
you started new FF i didn't eve know:(
i am sorry zee
But amazinggg concept..
love it
ughh that dev..wanna kill him
he's so disgusting..poor geet
feel sad for her
ahhh maan all in geet cant seem to forget her brown eyes
can wait to see there real encounter
vicky is soo nicee..he helped geet awhh
Loveee the precapp
continue soonn
thank yaa
mwah bigg jhappi to youuu

Edited by maangeetcrazy - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update...
vicky is sweet.. awww poor geet...
precap looks gud.. continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful update...

hhmmm so now that Vicky met Geet...I'm sure soon Maaneet will come face to face...
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved both update
poor geet
she suffer so much
hate dev
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part:5

Some Hope

He goes near a window letting the chilly air cool down the internal fire in his mind and body. She had to be real and not just part of his imagination because he felt her . . . he felt the electric current her touch passed through his body. He looks at his hand, which had touched her and says, " You are real brown eyes . . . you are real".

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The morning sunrays start to peek in through the window hitting geet's face. She starts to squints her eyes as the sunrays were starting to bother her and eventually she wakes up. She had a smile on her face, totally putting everything that happened last night behind herself. Not to mention that today was a very special day for her. She stretches out her arm only to find the other side of the bed empty. Her fingers unconditionally start to clinch the bed sheets as her heart fell like it sunk into a black hole. Dev was gone on a special day like today . . . on their second wedding anniversary.
"Nahi . . .Dev could never forget this day. I am just jumping into conclusions he may just be trying to act like he forgot and then surprise me at the end of the day" she thinks to herself and her smile reasons back to her face. " Theek hai I will also play along like I don't know anything and feel sad and annoyed".
After tidying up a bit around the house she decides to go to the dargah and pray to God on such a special today. When she arrives she closes her eyes and silently prays, " I never complained to you when I was left all alone in the orphanage nobody to call my own. But then one day you decide to have mercy on my poor soul and sent Mohinderlaal . . . who with just one look at me accepted me as his daughter.
Never did I complain when 5 years later you take him away from me, leaving me alone again at the hands of my daarji and his family who never accepted me as one of their own all because I was adopted and their blood didn't run through my veins.
Never did I complain when they would torture, abuse and use me. I kept quiet and never asked anything from you . . . Not even when you forgot to give me a name . . . I was just only "Geet". . . sirf Geet.
Dev was the one who gave me a name. DEV! In which you forgot to give me babaji . . . but never did I complain then nor am I now.
Lekin auj pehli bar mein apse kuch chize mang rahi hoon . . . Please give me my Dev back! That Dev who swept me off my feet and showered me with all the love and happiness I had been deprived from in my life.
That Dev who you sent as my savior and from the first day on slowly became a part of my life . . . the reason for my existence. I want that Dev back, who cared for me, who showered his love on me! I don't know this new Dev anymore . . . he treats me as if I don't even exist. Please I don't have the strength in me to wait anymore. I want my lover! I want to be in the arms of my humsafar" she silently continued to pray.
After a couple minutes she opens her eyes and turns around, but accidently bumps into a baba. "I am sorry I didn't see you". Just by giving one look at her the Baba could sense the pain she was going through and what her heart desired. He brings out a taveez and tells her " yeh lo beta". Geet looks at him all confused. " Your wait is over. Soon you will be in the arms of your humsafar . . . of your lover. He will bring back the happiness in your life. Give this to him whenever that day comes to keep your bond safe and strong".
Geet's eyes were glistening up with happiness. She didn't know how to contain her happiness. She ran out of the dargah with that taveez as fast as she could . . . she ran and ran into an open field and starts to dance and twirl around in circles. Nothing could stop her . . . she was going to get her dev back . . . her humsafar back.
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It was about 8:00 p.m. Geet has made Dev's favorite dishes and set up the apartment in a very lovely and romantic manner. She was getting herself ready in a pretty pink saree when she got a call. " Come to this address ### now geet. Don't keep me waiting".
Geet's heart almost stops beating hearing his voice. She holds the taveez up to her eye level and just watches twist in the air. " I knew you had a surprise planned for me. Dev you will be mine again soon".
Moments later she reaches the address which Dev had given her. She steps out of the car and she looked up to what looked like a 5 star hotel. Her thoughts started running wild and she could feel herself blushing and her face getting hotter. She brushes off her thoughts off and goes inside.
The receptionist of the hotel recognized her and told her exactly what direction she should head to. When Geet reaches the room it was pitch dark. She felt herself getting goose bumps . . . maybe she really didn't need to work hard to act surprised because she had no idea what to expect right now. All of a sudden the place slowly gets shimmered with lights and just like those lights Geet's heart was shimmering and brimming in happiness.

She felt the breath knocked out of her as she looked of how beautifully set up the whole place was. Tears of happiness started to well up in her eyes at the thought of her dev throwing a party for their second anniversary.
Something touches her on her shoulder; she turns around and finds her husband standing right under the spotlight in a hot black suit. She couldn't control herself anymore and she practically slams into him wrapping her arms around his neck and shoulders into a passionate hug. She missed him so much, his closeness, his touch, his smell, and most importantly his love for her in these last 6 months . . . it was as if she was burning in hell.
Realization of what she is doing snaps into her head and she could feel herself becoming flushed and blushing. She releases her hold of him a little bit, now her hands were around his collar and she tries to look into his eyes, but just couldn't. For some odd reason she felt like a new bride because she had the same feelings, uneasiness, and shyness of one. With eyes down she waited for him to break this awkward moment.
" Are you done now?" Dev's words pierced through her heart. That smile, shyness, and jittery feelings snapped and vanished into thin air and instead got replaced with pain, grief, and hurt. Her head jerked up to face the grim reality, which she had thought would be gone forever. She looked at him with her pain filled eyes, but Dev couldn't seem to read them anymore.
" I had told you to come here immediately? Oh God there is no point in arguing with a useless person like you. That's okay I am just going to have to make you useful. Go and get ready because the party starts in one hour and you will have to perform in front of everyone. You love to dance and you are a trained dancer right . . .so show all your moves tonight and leave Maan Singh Khurana breathless. This party is for him, to strengthen our bond so I need you to impress him as much as you can because the more the better of my chances for a successful company"Dev says and jerks her hands off him and leaves.
This place, which made her heart brim with happiness, was now haunting and taunting her. This party was not for her or for their second wedding anniversary, but it was a business party for Maan Singh Khurana. Her husband, Dev, suddenly gave more importance to this random businessman over her?
Who was he that Dev couldn't even remember how special today was??? Geet didn't know if she could tolerate more wounds to her heart, her own husband wanted her to move her body in front of people who were strangers to her. He wanted this Maan Singh Khurana person to marvel over her and her moves in order to leave him impressed! What kind of a husband does that who does not care for her self-respect or status.
The room started to feel like it was spinning. Today was supposed to be their day . . .her day . . but no instead she had to bust moves for this Maan Singh Khurana? Just saying his name filled her with hatred and that's when her eyes closed and she drifted off.
Pre-cap:
All of a sudden the sound of screeching wheels came from behind geet. "Errrqqq" and then stopped millimeters from running over Geet, but neither did she get startled or feel anything nor did she stop walking.
The driver starts hitting the horn, but still geet was lost in her own world. " What is the hold up" the man in the back seat of the car asks his driver. " Pata nahi sahab. This random girl is blocking the road. " You stay here. I will take care of it" the man said.

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Previous Part~How much more pain?
Edited by zeynab111 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome updt
hate dis dev argghh idiot
poor geet her dreams ,aspirations & hopes as if had been brutally shattered & set to fire dev is such a cheap gutless guy he wants his wife to dance infront of msk to impress him
hope msk wud punch him hard
omg geet hates msk
pls msk cum soon & fill geets lyf wid happiness
cont soon
thnx4 d pm

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