When we meet...(AR)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey guys I am nikki and this is my 3rd ff(I know that I haven't updated my other two ffs since a long time but I really wanted to put down this mini ff) or rather a mini ff it wont be more than 5-6parts

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When we meet ...

Oh god today for sure I am screwed, please aisa kuch to karo ki sir hi late ho jaye, I know its all my fault that I am going to be 20mins late for my accounts lecture that to of my dear Raj sir who has his very famous rule, 'if u r 5mins late then wait outside the class for more 5mins and then enter' arghh I so hate him for his stupid rule. This is my first time being late ,nah na na correction super late.Oh god ridzi now stop talking to yourself people on the skywalk are staring at u as if u r some psycho.

Uff I reach hey I am 18 mins late yippee not 20 mins expectation se jyada jaldi pahuch gayi,and there is that ever late boy Armaan Mallik waiting outside the class,hump it was fun sitting inside the class and enjoying when ever sir insults him for always being late, but today I guess its my turn, or if sir makes an exeption as I am late for the first time then it would be nice but thinking this a small part of my heart desired to wait outside the class along with him, anyways keeping that thought aside I knocked on the door

"sir sorry for being late, this would never happen again,please may I come in"

"Riddhima gupta, I know that this is the first time u r late but rules are rules hmm… fine I can give u a exemption of entering the class after 10mins instead of let me check hm… 18mins" said raj sir, muttering a silent thankyou I went to where armaan was standing and said "Hi" in response he gave a surprised smile and said hi.

I couldn't take my eyes of his dimples,but then I soon realized my stupid staring activity and turned my eyes to the other side, this was the first time that he was talking to me.Once again I turned my eyes to steal a glance at him, I saw that he was busy texting someone, feeling akward even I took out my cellphone and started reading all my unread messages, like this time flew by and after 10mins we were called in by the teacher.

Once the class was over it was 7.30pm and but I had some doubts on todays subject so I went to the staff room to get my doubts cleared, by the time my doubts were cleared it was somewhere around 7.50,I usually caught the 7.45 bus but today I missed it.While walking towards the bus stop at a corner on the skywalk I saw Armaan and Ashna standing hand in hand along with the others in their group, I just kept my eyes down on the road and walked towards my bus stop.It was 5mins past 8 but here I was sitting at the bus stop and getting bored, suddenly someone came and sat at the empty seat next to me and said hi,I could even in my sleep recognize that voice it was of none other than Mr Armaan Malik. "u over here, I mean at this bus stop", I asked him not being able to control my happiness at seing him that too at my bus stop. "waiting for 421" came his reply, "Oh! Even I travel by the same bus" I replied. Suddenly with an excitement in his voice he said "wow that's super great, I always needed a company till my house which takes me half an hour to reach, btw if u don't mind me asking, hmm..where do u stay?" I quickly replied "powai",in my mind hoping that even he stays close by afterall even he travels by the same bus and even I don't have a company. "yes" he said while flashing his ever cute dimpled smile. "What" I asked to which he replied "even I stay at powai and this means u will be getting down at the same bus stop as me, so I have a nice company all through my daily half an hour journey", the two words 'nice company'which he used were enough for me to do an happy dance.

Hey guys tell me what u feel about the intro and the main thing should I continue it?

Plz plz tell me if u want it to be continued because I already have 2 running ff and I am pretty busy so if I get very few comments then I wont be continuing it.

Love

nikki😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
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yyaaayyy iam the first one to comment🥳

its an ausum concept👍🏼
u have beautifully written it👏
i loved AR's meet
u should defo continue
nd do pm me😊
nd do update other ff also😃
btw
congratulations for ur new ff
Edited by youth_showsfan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice strt
would luv 2 read more
thnx 4 d pm
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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not bad at all! it would be interesting to see where you take the story. but continue only if you'll be able to finish it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: amaniM

not bad at all! it would be interesting to see where you take the story. but continue only if you'll be able to finish it

what u said is absolutely true, i will see if i can complete it because frankly speaking i am way too busy nowadays
anyways thanks for liking the concept
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: youth_showsfan

yyaaayyy iam the first one to comment🥳

its an ausum concept👍🏼
u have beautifully written it👏
i loved AR's meet
u should defo continue
nd do pm me😊
nd do update other ff also😃
btw
congratulations for ur new ff

woow shrishti !!!, its really sweet of u to post a congragulatory banner, i completely loved
abt the continuing part let me see i am not sure,its just that my hands were itching like hell to post this part so i did that, but frankly speaking i am very busy for a few weeks,and thats the reason i havent commented on 'His Way ' also,actually i havent read the last 2-3 parts but all my catching up work will be done on this weekend as i am quite free for 2 days
and once again a big thank u
love
nikki
Edited by niknavyu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great start... Would love to read more so plzzz cont super soon!!!
Plz do pm me!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: niknavyu

woow shrutika !!!, its really sweet of u to post a congragulatory banner, i completely loved
abt the continuing part let me see i am not sure,its just that my hands were itching like hell to post this part so i did that, but frankly speaking i am very busy for a few weeks,and thats the reason i havent commented on 'His Way ' also,actually i havent read the last 2-3 parts but all my catching up work will be done on this weekend as i am quite free for 2 days
and once again a big thank u
love
nikki

i can understand that take ur time
cos ever since my college opened
i find difficult to sit on net for long
u wont believe its just been 2 weeks since i went
nd i am already piled up with 4 assignments😭😭
due to which i havnt yet updated his way hopefully will do tom😊
nd my name s srishti😊
Edited by youth_showsfan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: youth_showsfan

i can understand that take ur time
cos ever since my college opened
i find difficult to sit on net for long
u wont believe its just been 2 weeks since i went
nd i am already piled up with 4 assignments😭😭
due to which i havnt yet updated his way hopefully will do tom😊
nd my name s srishti😊

oopssy i am really soorrryyy(badawala sorry)srishti, lol i remember ur name but then while writing i goofeed it up, i will write away edit it,same here even i am busy with coll assignments,kitna bhi karo,yeh assignments khatam hone ka nam hi nahi leta, and try and update tommorrow, it will be fun for me to read all my pending parts in a go,i just enjoy reading all at once
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: niknavyu

oopssy i am really soorrryyy(badawala sorry)srishti, lol i remember ur name but then while writing i goofeed it up, i will write away edit it,same here even i am busy with coll assignments,kitna bhi karo,yeh assignments khatam hone ka nam hi nahi leta, and try and update tommorrow, it will be fun for me to read all my pending parts in a go,i just enjoy reading all at once

its k😊
nd i agree ek khatam karo they give us another😭😭
i will surely try my level best to update it by tomorrow😊

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