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Posted: 14 years ago
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This is for getting some Dakshna scene only..

Taking Kaki's words Aku will be more worried and tells Naina about the truth. Naina gets shocked in knowing Aku was lying and she will be tensed. She forgets everything and runs to Daksh and inform him everything happened. Daksh will be broken and Naina will give courage to him. He plans to meet Ayush and that guy insults Daksh. Daksh will get angry and there will be fight btn them. Daksh got wounded a bit. In btn this Sonakshi calls Daksh but not get any answer. She will think that he might go with Naina's issue. Here at home everybody will be worried why Daksh be late. Sonakshi rushes to the house by shouting. But she cannot see Daksh there. By then Daksh arrives and she taunts him in saying she is not important for him etc. and threatens him and leaves. Daksh will be more annoyed with that girl. He does not tell anything and goes to his room. Ayi Baba feels Daksh will not be happy with this girl if it is like that. Naina feels bad and goes to Daksh's room and she finds the blood on his shirt's sleves and asks whether he quarrelled with Ayush.. Then Naina dresses it up well (aiding scene) and gives support to him. Daksh feel confortable with Naina and asks her to stay some more time. Ayi asks for having the dinner, but Daksh says he is not hungry. Naina takes the food and goes to his room and asks him to have food. etc...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice scene...unfortunately i dont find any FF writers in this forum...i wud just love to read dem..thnk god u started and beleive me u write really nice entertaining scenes...i really find dem interesting ..keep writing these type of beautiful scenes...⭐️👍🏼
and please continue witd this one😊 wud love to read the next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great story👏and excellent writing👍🏼... plz do continue.. it's totally compelling and addictive!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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glad to know that you like my story line... here is one more... more intimate one

[Daksh feels that Anjali is right - Naina has to disclose the pain to anybody]. So Daksh insists Naina to burst out the pain in her heart. Naina hesitates to talk about it and she tries to divert the topic. But Daksh calmly and softly but forcefully takes the subject again and speak about not to worry about it [you know he is cunning in that matter]. Talking about the matter Naina's emotions come out and she shares it with Daksh. Daksh hugs her and consoles. Naina forgets herself and weeps. After that, Naina feels far better and she becomes released from the bitterness a lot. She thankfully and lovingly looks at Daksh in knowing her without telling always. Daksh's love comes out...and he forgets everything else, he looks at her eyes with love and about to kiss her. When Daksh tries to move the hair lays on her forehead, suddenly both's eyes fall on the ring in Daksh's hand and both withdraw their intension. ha ha ha... [Then the CVs will tell... sorry.. if you thought you will get such an intimate scene quickly, you are wrong... you have to wait more... ha ha ha ;)]
I expect all will participate in writing FF like this.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: niksidfan

nice scene...unfortunately i dont find any FF writers in this forum...i wud just love to read dem..thnk god u started and beleive me u write really nice entertaining scenes...i really find dem interesting ..keep writing these type of beautiful scenes...⭐️👍🏼

and please continue witd this one😊 wud love to read the next part

Oh.. no.. I am not the first person who write like this. There were some others write their story lines in this forum too... I remember until Kajrat journey they kept writing like this. But when we started to get bored with the story by introducing Abhi/when Naina said yes to Abhi - many of them stopped writing that too.. i don't know whether they stopped watching this like me... mostly I read the updates only... I think it was not a wise decision of CVs, they asked Abhi to propose Naina or Naina to say Yes to his proposal.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Simply mindblowing! So tender and touching😳... Looking forward to some romantic scenes!😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ntsindia

Oh.. no.. I am not the first person who write like this. There were some others write their story lines in this forum too... I remember until Kajrat journey they kept writing like this. But when we started to get bored with the story by introducing Abhi/when Naina said yes to Abhi - many of them stopped writing that too.. i don't know whether they stopped watching this like me... mostly I read the updates only... I think it was not a wise decision of CVs, they asked Abhi to propose Naina or Naina to say Yes to his proposal.

o really...i m sorry den to all of them...actually i was not visiting too often den dats why i m nt aware of it...anyways...i understand deir interest being sabotaged by our cruel cvs but now as dakshna fans is set to get deir due back so i m really excited about dis and i hope some brilliant FF writers wud join u in writing some beautiful scenes of our dakshna😊by the way i liked ur 2nd part 2👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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the scenes were seriously superb and romantic... i hope we get to see something similar on screen...

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