FF(Maneet):Dil mil gaye Thrd 2 Upd prt 34 pg 140 - Page 10

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Friends every one is asking me one common question ke maneet confess kab karenge. ... so give answer with confess
Guys pls trust me i have planned something but u will have to wait for that ... tera planning or hamari jaan gai
ok let me give a clue next update u will get a mini confession from maan but...😉... thanks so sweet of u
sabse pehle toh geet hi confess karegi n believe me guys each one of u will b shocked the way she will confess...we know our kudi is the best
then maan ke confession ke liye aapko zyada din intezaar nahi karna padega i promise... vo to kab se tayyar hai 😉
but u hv to trust me... i promise u will get maneet moments in between ...trust he to kar rahe hai
Pls guys trust me aakhirkaar ye humare maneet ka confession hai kuch toh special hona chahiye na... maybe 5 updates ke baad u will gt the actual confession ... 5 update hmmm kuch jyada nahi hai
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Posted: 14 years ago
#92
Hiii dont worry dear
i will wait for confession
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93
we trust u completely n well w8 4 da confession 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#94

Thank you dear friends for all your love support and encouragement. I will try to make maneet confession special. Ok so here is the next part I hope u will enjoy reading

Love 'Piya

PART 23

Geet: Ofho ye mam ko bhi aaj hi extra classes lene the' ab tak tho maan date k liye jaa bhi chukka hoga

Geet: Haan zaroor pouhach gaye honge wo toh hai ek chalta phirta clock har kaam waqt se hi karte hai' o babaji aapne mere maan ko itna punctual kyun banaya

Geet: Chaddo ek baar andhere mein teer maar kar dekh lethi hoon shayad nishane pe lag jaaye

Geet dials maan's number

Geet: Ye lo subah kam se kum phone chalu toh tha magar ab switched off ' hai ab kya karu'kaise pata chalega k maan iss waqt kaha hai. Haan adi ko phone karke puchthi hoon

She calls Adi

Adi: Are Geet kaise ho?

Geet: I m fine Adi pehle tum ye batau k Maan iss waqt kaha hai

Adi: Maan Sir toh kisise milne k liye gaye hai kehrahe the k bahut hi important person hai

Geet: kya? itne jaldi wo maan k liye important bhi ban gayi'Adi tum ye batau k maan exactly kaha gaye hai

Adi: Sorry Geet iss baare mein mujhe kuch nahi pata

Geet: Jab kuch bhi nahi pata tab itne der tak mera precious time kyun barbaad kiya' chado phine rakho

She cuts the call

Meanwhile,

Maan: Hey Yash good to see u back

They hug each other

Yash: Same here Maan

Maan: So bata itne dino tak apne doston ko chodkar kaha chala gaya tha?

Yash: Maan main kuch dino tak akele rehna chahta tha issliye thode dino tak shehar se bahar gaya tha

Maan: Yash tune promise kiya tha k tu mujhe saari bathe sach sach batega chal bata aakhir problem kya hai?

Yash: Meera'

Maan: Meera magar tujhe toh Pari pasand thina?

Yash: tu chahe toh usse kisi bhi naam se pukar saktha hai

Maan: main kuch samjha nahi

Yash: Tells him the whole story

Maan: Oh toh ye baat hai' toh kya meera ne tumse uske baad kabhi bhi milne ki koshish nahi ki?

Yash: Nahi usne koshish ki thi infact wo mujhse milne ke liye aaj radio station bhi aayi thi

Maan: So what did she say?

Yash: Maine usse baat nahi ki

Maan: Magar Yash tumhe atleast ek baar uski baat tho sun le leni chahiye thina?

Yash: Maan pls tu ye sab baate chod aur mujhe apni aur geet k baare mein bata aur haan ye khwab ka kya chakkar hai?

Maan (smiles) Hmm' kyun geet ne bataya na k khwab meri girlfriend hai

Yash: Maan main tujhse acchhe se jaanta hoon tu geet ke alawa kisi aur k baare mein soch bhi nahi sakta

Maan: haan ye baat tho sahi hai' khair ye khwab na geet k hi dimag se nikla hua plan tha mujhe pareshan karne ke liye aur ab main usse ussi k plan se pareshan kar raha hoon

Yash: Kya matlab?

Maan tells him everything

Yash: oh tho ye baat hai poor geet' achha ye bata tum dono uhi ek dusare k saath games kelthe rahoge ya phir ek dusare se apne dil ki baat kahoge bhi

Maan: Confess tho pehle geet hi karegi dekhlena ye MSK ka plan hai kabhi bhi fail nahi honewala

Yash: I hope aap dono jaldi hi confess kar le

Yash and Maan spend the rest of the evening with each other

Here Geet is desperately trying to contact maan but none of her attempts are successful. She finally decides to go to sleep

Next Morning

Maan: Hmm' lagta hai meri pyari geet mujhe bahut miss kar rahi thi' o geet tumse dur rehne ka tho dil nahi karta magar tumhare saath shararat karne ka jo maja hai na uska bhi luft main uttana chahta hoon

Maan gets an idea and calls Geet

Geet gets up and realizes that Maan is calling her. She immediately picks up the call

Geet: Maan tum kaha the main tumhe kal se contact karne ki koshish kar rahi hoon tum bhi na kitne gairzimmedar ho ek baar bhi mujhe call karne ki zaroorat nahi samjhi tumne

Maan: Meri Mumbai Express zara rukho tho sahi' mujhe apni baat kehne ka mauka tho dho

Geet: Haan bolo

Maan: Geet agar mujhe tumhari kadar nahi hoti tho kya main tumhe itne subah call karta' tum jaanti hona k tum mere liye kitni special ho

Geet is very happy to hear this

Maan: Geet main tumse kuch important baat karna chahta hoon kyat um aaj mujhe shaam ko milogi

Geet: Shamko kyun abhi milte hai na

Maan: Achha ji lagta hain madam ko aaj kaam pe nahi jaana hai kyun?

Geet: O haan kaam pe bhi jaana hai aur college bhi jaana hai' thik hai maan hum aaj shaamko hi milenge magar sirf hum dono aur koi bhi nahi

Maan: Haan sirf hum'

Geet (happy to hear this) Bye

Maan: Bye

Geet: ab ye shaam kab hogi ye ghadi bhi na aaj kuch extra slow hi chalegi' Babaji pls jaldi se shaam ho jaaye

Everyone is busy in their work

Evening

Geet wears a beautiful salwar kameez. She is aware that Maan loves to see her in an Indian Outfit

She goes to meet Maan

Maan is already waiting for her

Geet arrives

Maan just couldn't stop staring at her. She was looking like an angel. He was sure that no one could b as beautiful as his Geet

Geet: Hi Maan

Maan is still lost

Geet: Maan kya hua aise kya dekh rahe ho?

Maan :Haan kuch nahi

Geet: (thinking) kuch nahi jiske liye itna kuch kiya itna sajh dajh kar aayi usse toh kuch farak hi nahi pada . Babaji aur kuch nahi kum se kum Maan se meri jhoothi taaref hi karwadete

Geet: Maan kaho tumne mujhe kaunsi important baat kehne ko yaha bulaya hai

Maan: (unable to control his feelings) Geet main tumse kuch kehna chahta hoon

Geet: Haan kaho

Maan: Geet pata nahi tum ye sunkar kaise react karogi magar aaj agar maine ye baat nahi kitho shayad kabhi bhi tumse ye baat nahi keh paaunga

Geet: Kaho maine kab tumhe rokha hai

Maan: Geet main jab kabhi bhi tumhe dekhta hoon dil mein hazaro khwaishe angdaaiya lene lagti hai

Geet shocked to hear this

Geet: (thinking) Maan kahi apne pyar ka izhaar toh nahi kar rahe. Babaji pls aisa hi ho' unke muh se main wo teen lafz sunna chahti hoon'pls babaji pls

Maan: Tumhare aas paas hone par mera dil bus yahi dua karta hain k meri zindagi ka har panna har lamha bus tumhari muskurahat se bhara pada ho

Maan: Tum mere dil ki ek aisi ankahi tamanna ho jise paakar meri zindagi khushiyoon k diye ki tarah jagmagaane lagegi

Maan (holds her hand) Jabse tum mere zindagi mein aayi ho tabse hawayon mein shokiyaan nazar aati hai, har khushboo manchali si lagti hai, saawan ki har ek bhoond matwali si lagti hai, duniyaan ki har ek cheez suhani lagti hain yu kaho k tumne meri zindagi ko mekhktha hua ek manzar bana diya hai

A beautiful smile arises on geet's face

Maan: (goes and stands behind Geet and hugs her) Main ye tho nahi jaanta ke tumhare aur mere darmiyaan ye kaisa rishta hain magar main bus itna hi keh sakta hoon k tumhe dekhe bina mere dil ko koi bhi sukuun ya kaaraar nahi milta

Geet closes her eyes

Maan: Geet agar tum mujhse ye sawal karti ho k tum mere liye kya aihemiyaat rakhti ho toh main bus yahi keh saktha hoon k'

Maan moves her hair to one side and approaches her ear and kisses it

Maan: Agar jaan meri hai toh iss jaan ki saase tum ho

Moves more closer and places a kiss on Geet's cheek

Maan: Jab kabhi bhi saase letha hoon tab tum inn saaso ki sargam bankar behti ho

A small tear drop falls from Geet's eyes

Maan comes in front of Geet and places her hand on his chest

Maan: Mere seene mein tum dil bankar dhadakthi ho Geet' aur mere seene ki har ek dhadkan bus tumhara hi naam lethi hai

Maan cups her face in between his hands and places a kiss on her forehead

Maan: Kaash mujhe aisi kismat mil jaaye Geet, jisse ke har ek pal tum bus meri baho ke panahoon mein hi raho ' hum apni ek aisi duniya basaaye jahapar humare aur humare pyar k alawa aur kisi ko bhi aane ki ijaazat na ho

Geet looks lovingly at Maan

Maan: (kneels down and takes her hand in his and kisses it) Geet main jaanta hoon k main tumhare sapno ka shehzaada nahi magar tum mere liye mere sapno ki maalika se bhi zyaada khoobsurat aur beshkimati ho'

Geet is smiling

Maan: Geet I love U. Kya tum mujhe apne zindagi mein shaamil karogi?

PRECAP: Geet: "kya?"😲😲😲

PART 24: PAGE 23
Edited by piya- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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well piya awesome update...u know loved maan's confession...that to geet ke liye...each and every word he said to geet was so so so beautiful...msk is really smart geet ko bol diya apne dil ki baat...but precap mein geet isliye shocked hai kyuki m sure maan will tell ye sab kuch main apni GF khawab ko bolna chahta hu...tumse puch raha hu ki aisa bol du na...i guess same happend in K2H2,,,,,good going dear...!!! But once again all my assumptions...!!!


Continue soon dear...loved the update...!! Simply awesome...loved the way maan expressed his feelings,,,,,!!!
Edited by minnie_tweetie - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome part...i dunno y but am guessing that maybe even maan will tell geet that he was joking or practising as to how to propose Khwab...just like geet once did...i loved it...continue soon n thnx...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow what lines...cheesy lines dekh kar hi main samajh gayi thi...Maan is practicing with Geet to propose Khwab...ha ha ha...bechaari Geet...i can't wait to read ehr expressions...kya😲😲😲
great update Piya...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98

i think this is the same confession way as geet did in the office... picture to abhi baki hai mere dost...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#99
Hmm kuch toh gharbar hai i know maan bhi wahi kar raha hai jo geet had done to him earler days well kya sach me geet gonna 2 perpose first i had never hear that girl perpose first
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsom part piya
thanx 4 pm

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