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Posted: 14 years ago
its okay yaar take your own time dear
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Originally posted by: santoshi58

its okay yaar take your own time dear

its so sweet of you di🤗
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no need to say sorry dear.i can understand.take ur time.miss u take care

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hi evryone. Sorry for I am updating a bit late but thanx for your wonderful comments and co-operation. Hope you will enjoying reading the chapter. Do comment and criticisms are most welcome🤗


Chapter-7: Nupur is jealous


Neelu and Anurag were talking when Robindo saw Taani.

Robindo: Arre Taani baudi aap?

Everyone shocked hearing baudi.

Taani: Baudi?

Robindo: Nahi nahi mera matlab hai Taani tum? Yahan itne subah subah.

Taani: Haan voh…………..

Anurag: Kyun nahi aa sakti?

Robindo: Well, I didn't mean that.

Neelu: Acchha baba tum log ladna band karo. Main breakfast bhij vaati hoon.

Taani was feeling awkward there. As it was her first trip in Anurag's house. Anurag realized that.

Anurag: Taani chalo main tumhe apna room dikha ta hoon.

Taani Started walking behind him.

Anurag: Main maa se keh doonga ki voh chay yahin le aanyge.

Taani: 😊

Anurag led Taani to his room. It was a total mess. All things were lying here and there.

Anurag felt a little it shame that Taani has come for the first time in his room and voh bhi iss condition mein.

Taani: Onu ye sab kya hai(little bit smiling)?

Anurag: Main nahi, Tut oh janti hai na Robi ye sabh robi ne kiya hai. Meri saari cheezein idhar se udhar kar deta hai.

Taani:hmmm..😊

Anurag: Tub beth na idhar beth.

Anurag asked her to sit on a chair. This was the only thing which wasn't untidy. He led her to the chair until she comfortably sat on it.

In drawing room

Neelu: Arre nupur tum?

Nupur: Haan kaki mujhe kuch kaam tha Onu se..

Neelu: Voh toh kamre mein hai Taa..

Till Neelu could complete hers sentence she Nupur left saying that she has some urgent work to do with Onu.

Neelu: Ye ladki bhi na hamesha jaldi mein hi rehti hai.

At Anurag's room

As Anurag led Taani on the chair. Anurag was staring at her. They had a cute eye lock.

Dheere Dheere,

Haule haule,

Chupke se ab hoga,

Kehte hain ye pyaar jise hum,

Na jaane kab hoga……………………….

Someone knocked on the door. Anurag-Taani came to their senses.

Anurag: Arre Nupur tum yahan?

Nupur was very angry as she saw Taani sitting on the chair which was made only for her. Whenever she came to Anurag's room she Onu used to make her sit there only. And till now mo one has ever dared to sit on that chair.

Nupur: Kyun nahi aa sakti?

Anurag: Nahi, nahi aise koi baat nahi hai. Voh..

Nupur: Voh mujhe kutch tujh se kaam tha. Jyada jaroori nahi tha. It seems you sre busy.

We will talk later.(And she left)

Anurag(in his mind): Ye Nupur ko kya ho gaya?

Anurag: Taani main abhi aata hoon. Maa itna der kyun laga rahi hain.

Taani:😊

Nupur was about to gop out of the house when Anurag held her hand.

Anurag: Nupur kya ho gaya. Tu itne gusse me kyun kag rahi ha?

Nupur: Kuch nahi Onu, main toh aise hi aayi thi. You are busy right now we will talk later.

Anurag: Par meri baat..

Before Anurag could complete his sentence Nupur left.

In Anurag's room

Taani's phone was ringing……………..She picked it up.

Taani: Haan, bol Mauli.

Mouli: Kahan hai tu?

Taani: Kyun?

Mouli: Voh maa bol rahi thin ki tujh se mile vai bohat din ho gaye hain. Toh hum nikal rahe hain.

Ghar par hi hai na?

Taani: Nahi, lekin tu pahauch main bas aati hoon.

Anurag: Kya hua Taani?

Taani: Onu, mujhe actually ghar jaa na hai. Kutch urgent kaam hai. Main tujhse baad mein milte hoon.

Neelu came in Anurag's room with the tea and the snacks.

Neelu: Main aise kaise jaane dungi. Pehli baar aayi ho. Naashta kiye bagair…

Taani: Auntie please. Next time definitely

Neelu: nahi aise toh main jaa ne hi nahi dungi.

Taani: Auntie please..

Neelu: Accha theek hai magar ek shart par.

Taani: Kya?

Neelu: Ki ye mujhe auntie auntie keh kar bulana band karo. Main tumhari maa jaise hoon na. Tum mere liye Anurag jaise hi toh ho. Is liye mujhe aaj se tum maa bulaogi. Theek hai?

Taani's eyes filled with tears. She hugged Neelu. And Onu? What do you think what he would have doing? Again admiring her qualities.

Taani: Accha aunt.. I mean maa main nikal ti hoon.

Neelu: Theek hai. Aur Onu tu yahan khada-khada kya kar raha hai? Ja Taani ko ghar chod kea aa.

Anurag(happily): Haan maa jaroor.

…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..

Outside Taani's house.

Anurag opened the car's door for Taani. She got down.

Taani: Onu. Thanx.

Anurag: Taani…

Taani: Ok baba no thanx.. Accha main ab chalti hoon. Bye.

Anurag: Bye…

Taani was about to go when.

Anurag: Taaniii

Taani: Haan? Bol Onu, kya hua?

Anurag: Nothing…. Bye take care.

Taani a little bit confused.

Taani: Pakka?

Anurag: Haan bye..

Taani: Bye..

Anurag went back to his house.

…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..

At Taani's house

Taani: Kaka kaise hain aap?

Shumona: Main toh theek hun.Tu kaise hai?

Taani: Fine.

Shumona: Mujhe tum dona ka diya hua gift bohat pasand aaya.

Mouli: Aaya ga kaise nahi meri aur Taani ki pasand thi.

Taani: Acchha kaki bataye aap kya lengi?

Shumona: Voh toh tu mujhe bata? Aaj main tere liye khana banaungi.

Taani: Nahi nahi kaki. Aise kaise?

Shumona: Main kuch nahi sunna chahti. Tum dodnon yahan par betho aur batein karo.

Saying this she entered in the kitchen and started preparing for the breakfast.

Mouli: Aur Taani bata? Kahan gayi thi?

Taani narrated Mouli the entire story of yesterday night and today's morning.

Mouli: hmm…

Taani: Kya hmmm..?

Mouli: Is mein ab koi nayi baat to rahi nahi. Itne dinon se tum mil rahe the aakhir friendship to hone hi thi.

Taani: Mouliii.😡

Mouli: Accha tu ya bata tujhe Onu kaisa laga?

Taani: Acchha hai. Lekin kaafi weird harkatein karta hai. Chal tu voh sabh chod.

…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..

At Anurag's house

Shekhar called everyone in the drawing room.

Anurag: Baba aap ne hume bulaya?

Shekhar: Haan, voh Ritesh ka phone aaya tha, voh aur Ananya kise kaam se India aa rahe hai. Toh maine socha ki kyun na hum ek party rakhein. Anurag ne apne khud ka business start kiya hai. Aur ritesh-Ananya bhi bohat dinon ke baad aa rahen hain. Toh………..

Nilanjana: Ye toh bohat acchi baat hai. Ananya bhi aa rahi hai.

Shekhar: Toh theek hai that's final kal raat Anurag aur Ananya-Ritesh ke naam. Anurag tumhe apne jitney bhi friends ko bulana hai tum bulalo.

Anurag: Theek hai baba.

………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………

At Anurag's room

Anurag was doing some work. When someone knocked at the door. It was Robido.

Anurag: Arre Robi tu?

Robindo: Haan dada baithe-baithe bor ho raha tha .

Anurag: Achha toh is liye dada ke paas aa gaya.

Robindo: Haan… Vaise dada aap party mein kis-kis ko bulaoge.(teasingly)

Anurag: Mere jitney friends hain un sabh ko. This is obvious yaar Robi.

Robindo: Dada aap samajh nahi rahein hain. Main kya keh raha hoon? Anyone special you would like to invite?

Anurag: (understood whom Robi was talking about?) Robi tu mujhe ek baat bata ujhe aur kuch sujh ta nahi hai. Chal tu agar sunna hi chahta hai toh Taani ko bula lunga. Happy?

Robindo: Aur?

Anurag: Aur kaun? Dekh Robi tu mujhe jyada pareshaan mat kar.

Robindo: Dada aur bhi toh sochiye. Taani e friends.

Anurag: Pagal hai kya main Taani ke friends ko bulaon phir tu bolega ki unke bhi friends.

Robindo: Dada aap samjh ne ki koshish kyun nahi kar rahe hain. Main mouli ki baat kar raha hoon.

Anurag: Acchaa bacchoo tu jabse ye kehne ki koshish kar raha tha. Tabhi main sochoon pure din toh dada ki yaad aati nahi hai.

Robindo: dadaaa

Anurag: Chal theek hai. Mouli ko bhi bula lunga.

Robindo(happily😊): Thanx dada. Aap world ke best dada ho. (he gave On a kiss on forehead and then rushed out of the room)

Anurag: Ye robi bhi na..

Anurag(in his mind): Vaise Robi sahi keh raha tha, maine sabh ko to bula liya magar Mouli-taani ko to bulana he bhool gaya. Main bhi na..

………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….

At evening

Anurag:. Robi main Taani ke ghar invitation dene jaa raha hoon

Robindo: Theek hai, Dada main bhi chalta hoon.

Anurag:Theek hai.

………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….

At Taani's house

Taani was getting bored.

Taani: Chal mouli kahin bahar chalet hain.

Mouli: Kahan..

Ting tong..ting tong…someone rang the bell.

Mouli: Arre Onu tu yahan?

Anurag: Kyun nahi aa sakta?

Mouli: Anytime. Aa na andar aa.

Mouli to Taani.

Mouli: Dekh Taani kaun aaya hai?

Taani: Arre Onu tum. Aur Robi?

Robindo: Voh jaisa aap ko patah hai dada ne apna business start kiya hai toh baba ne unke liye ek party throw ki hai.

Anurag:Isliye hum tum donon ko invite karne aay hain.

Taani: Onu par…

Anurag: Par var kuth nahi.. tum donon kal aa rahe ho and that's final.

Mouli:😊

Taani: Ok baba. Fine.

Mouli: Accha Onu main nikalti hoon. I am getting late.

Taani: Chal theek hai bye.

Anurag: Bye.

Mouli left.

……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………

Robindo: Dada main abhi aata hoon.

Anurag: Theek hai.

Mouli was searching for a rickshaw. When someone stopped a car in front of her.

The person was Robindo. Mouli ignored him.

Robindo: Shall I drop you?

Mouli: No thanx. Main chali jaongi.

Robindo: Common Mouli, now we are friends. Aren't we? And if we you can trut me.

Mouli unwillingly agreed

Mouli: hmm..

Robindo opened his car door for Mouli.

……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………

At Taani's house

Taani: So Onu what would you like to take. Hot or cold?

Anurag: Nahi kuch nahi.

Taani:Aise kaise kuch nahi.

Anurag: Haan voh…… tickets.

Taani: Tickets?

Anurag: Voh actually maine client ke liye films ki ticket mang vayi thi. Toh unka jaana cancel ho gaya. So would you like to come with me?

……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………

Precap:

Anurag:Shall we?

Taani for warded her hand on Onu's.

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Posted: 14 years ago
Wowww
It was such a fun filles sweet chapter...
And Nupur is always jealous of something or the other...
I think she better not bring any troubles to them... And i love the way Onu says Mene clienets ke liye ticket li thi and asks her out... That was really sweet of him...
And the precap looks like weare gonna get some great TaAnu dance... love it
And next chap to be updates ASAP
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Originally posted by: -Shobz.TaAnu-

Wowww

It was such a fun filles sweet chapter...
And Nupur is always jealous of something or the other...
I think she better not bring any troubles to them... And i love the way Onu says Mene clienets ke liye ticket li thi and asks her out... That was really sweet of him...
And the precap looks like weare gonna get some great TaAnu dance... love it
And next chap to be updates ASAP

I am glad that you enjoyed the chapter. And I think you guess it right.😳
Will continue soon...
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wow so cute friendship between TaAnu..plz update soon.fab update.brilliant..mwah
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Originally posted by: -Mahi148-

wow so cute friendship between TaAnu..plz update soon.fab update.brilliant..mwah

thanx a lot for reading and enjoying. Will update ASAP.

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Waiting for more comments guys.😆
Edited by taanufanvartika - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow..Its a sweeet chapter
Just like u.. 😉
Update soon,,
Thanks for the PM. 🤗

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