2 my lovely Ekta mayee..DO READ

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This write-up is by bhoomi frm yahoo grps (I got her permission 2 post it)…sry if its been posted b4…n yes this write-up is merely 4 entertainment….NO INTENTION OF HURTING ANYBODY LEAST OF ALL OUR DARLING GURPReet

Hi friends,

So great to see Rajeev in Time bomb. Its such a treat to watch him in
action , with pinch of emotion & drama. Way to go Rajeev!!!!...am
also waiting patiently for the baby girl playing his daughter, we
missed kajal so much na yaar in kth......

I was just wondering ...agar....Hold ur breathe....mind....senses...
intact .....agar...Time bomb ekta ne banaya hota......dont faint
yaar....hmmmm so how would the story go?????

Firstly the name would change to Krime Kontrol..........The lead
would be played by Rajeev as the cop & Akash as the villian, Akash
would have grey eye lenses & colourful hair. The first shot of Akash
would be shot in Dubai....for tourisim promotion, he would thus be
wearing gold & gold!!!!just like bappi lahiri....Akash name would be
Rakshak.....& Rajeevs name would be Veer......Her name sake creative
writers r good in that deptmt.

The story will began with a celebration in Veer family, where Kya
kool hai hum music is on.....everyone dancing , its Veer & Saraswati
wedding anniversary & the phone rings tring ...tring....(dont ask why
Veer doesnt have a mobile in this kalyug)...he will not be able to
listen...andar jayega...bed room mey....then will get the
message ....'Come soon ISI secret information'.....he will load his
gun. Everyone at the party will enter the bedroom with tears in their
eyes, Saraswati will come , she will put tilak on his forehead, (lots
of sad background music).......dhahi-shakkar khilangey.....few
romantic dialogues will be their , suddenly everyone in the party
will react as if he is going to a war & will not come back....he will
meet each & everyone, saying dialogues taken from kyunki, kahani, &
kth, border, loc etc.........Episode ke episode will get over but he
may reach his office only on Thursday(daily soap baba).

Coming to Rakshak, sadly he will have atleast one typical music
whenever he enters.like raaaakshaak ahahaha....(how realistic). He
will start attacking the family of these cops than the actual
mission. Moreover the family bahu saraswati will have dhamakedaar
dialogues to him, scenes where Veer will die.....Saraswati will be
pregnant & will fight with the cop who believed veer was part of
Rakshak gang, relatives will go against saraswati.Veer one big
afternoon will come back at a time when Saras(bored of calling her
saraswati) is getting married to Veer's friend Yash (by hiten, woh
kya hai na story ka kachara ho raha hai, yeh bhi ajaega).....Yash
will help both Veer & saras but he is the culprit....He is veer's
step bro & wants to take revenge from him.........

In the mean time Rakshak has called in few more villian like Sohi,
dhobhi , jobhi yaar....etc all the star in fav villian
category......along with few item numbers performed by Avantika of
KGGK, Pammi of DMNLC etc etc....Trps r going down.....
So another charcter Veer's Mom will enter...Deviji (played by Smriti)
she will be the one who has plotted all this, who shook hands with
the mafia, Gave away tips to Rakshak....Beta Film story will
follow....saas bahu aur sajish..!!!when that ends ....20 yrs
Leap .bechara akash would have gone bald till (hair colouring) then
rewind the story with
freshfaces...hhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaa..........Bore ho gaye
kya????????Me toooo.....ektaland creative writers really work very
hard...!!!!

A big SORRY to u all,for pakoing I didnt mean to hurt anyone , I know
Rajeev will not act in such foolish story but just how Stereotype the
stories of Ektaland r. Just waiting for fresh ideas, interesting
concept & above that responsible making & viewing. Time bomb is in
safe hands, ketan mehta is hugely talented in his craft & is with
immensely talented group of actors. Chalo Zee dekhenge Jee bhar
ke......!!!!

with luv
Bhoomi

Ps- sujalfan I was wondering if u could pass this 2 ekta mayee…or maybe we could send it 2 mid-day…its really gud!

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Posted: 20 years ago
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hehehehheeeee this is funny...😆
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Posted: 20 years ago
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😆😆BRETHING-IRONY U BETTA B SORRY 4 ITTT 😡😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
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sry 4 wat...and guyz plz call me sneha...no need 2 keep saying breathing-irony
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Thumbs up Bhoomi... great story thanks!!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
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😆😆😆 its really funny
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Posted: 20 years ago
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😆😆sneha sorry cuz tumne hamain buhat pakaya

shukr hai rajeev will not act is such a story 😃

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Posted: 20 years ago
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dina read the write-up on gurpreet there r 2 of them....
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Posted: 20 years ago
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i got it sneha 😃

gud bhoomi 👏sneha can u tell me rajeev's yahoo grps names?/

pm me plzzz!

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