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part 60

She kissed his eyes.. his cheek his nose.. he gulped his saliva.. as her lips lovingly..claimingly touched him.. her eyes continuously searched his face..like she was making sure. He just let her, like it belonged to her. He couldn't have asked for more. She realized wat she did & pulled away terrified. Scared of his apprehension, though she felt nun. May be their relation was beyond that, still the fear of him turning her down shook her inner self.

It was late in the evening & he had just walked in the door & she just pounced at him with all her tears & worries how odd was that she thought. The odd silence lingered, he kissed her cheek to ease the situation. She held her cheek, in embarrassment & then a blush, she smiled, still with a moist eyes & looked at him
He smiled - kya huwa itni pareshan kyun ho?
She knotted her duppata & stood there. How well he knew her. He not even once thought her kiss would have been anything beyond her concern, how could she not see this side of him before. People spend years to develop such relation & they had it all the while & never realized it.


Even in the subdued light he could tell she had been crying.
Kya huwa dodo he asked again, reaching out to place a finger under her chin and tip her head gently backward. Geet shrugged and made a hiccup coughing noise, dabbing her eyes with a crumpled duppata. Then her face twisted and tears began anew.

Dodo
he said soothingly drawing her through the door and wrapping her in his embrace. He held her while her shoulders shook. She sucked in great gulps of air, her tears muffled by and absorbed into the front of his shirt. He shushed her, soothingly until at last her sobs subsided into hiccuping once again.

He made her sit in the couch & sat next to her.
She couldn't say anything, how could she say she was worried abt him being thalassemia minor.
Maan - is every thing alright?
Her silence only made him worry more.
Ur bone marrow didn't match. Maan & Geet turned together to the source of the voice. Rahul walked in with NT. Nt walked towards the kitchen & switched on the lights.

Geet broke down in tears & went into the wash room.
Maan couldn't himself stop the tears. He blinked couple of times to hide his tears.. & looked hopefully at rahul.. wat can we do now.
Rahul - as we discussed before sibling.
Before he could complete, Maan clenched his fist in anger, hands trembling as he glared at Rahul in front of him. He couldn't think of his dodo going through all of this again. Another child out of wed-lock. It disgusted him. Whispering one last word to him softly, he walked away with his head held high, ignoring the pain in his chest.
Nahi..
he walked straight to the room on his way he saw amy.. sleeping peacefully with all the toys, cuddled up like a ball under the spread. He hide behind the door when he saw Geet walking towards amy & sitting next to him slowly shedding tears. His first reaction was to cry with her. But he wanted to keep calm. He wanted to save her that misery. But he could only feel her tears rolling down his cheeks as he stared at her blankly. He felt numb. He couldn't move at all. He can't call for help ironically he was the help. He can only hold onto them in silent torture in his embrace he just reached to her & hugged her.

After the dinner Nt stopped Geet.
Geet knew wat she wanted to talk.
Geet - di main kaisen ussen kahoon?
Nt turned in anger. She threw the napkin on the table.. can't u see amy is dieing??
Geet - di a scream escaped her lips
Nt - its high time u sort out ur misconceptions & work on having a baby
Geet - wat if he is married
nt - first he is not, second even if he is..he can't deny his responsibilities towards amy
Geet - he has no responsibilities
nt - knock knock he is the father
Geet - but
nt - Geet stop being nerd u both have to for amy.
she pushed the chair back ward as she took the tables wears & went to do the dishes
Geet shuddered with thought. The thought of getting intimate with him again. She closed her eyes thinking abt the night it all happened. It was not his fault nor was hers may be partly hers.
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She was playing with ballu. It was quiet late.. Maan was out for a date with kavitha. Geet was in her room on her bed.. holding ballu in her lap & kissing his nose & laughing, giggling. Maan came in stood at the door. He didn't enter.. uska kamra hain.. phir fight karengi.. he murmured. He just stood their gaping at her. She had not realized why he stood their like that & wat was wrong with him.


Maan ..shook his head for glaring at her.. as her lips narrowed kissing ballu. He couldn't believe was doing that. He left at once to his room forgetting he had walked to her to cry out his heart ache. Kavitha had just broke up with him. It was all so sudden, so unexpected. They were hanging out ..they had couple of drinks.. kavitha suddenly came close to him, well that was ok.. but oddly he was not reacting to her touch, she was trying to get close as she felt bad that he was leaving in 2days to US. They had spoken all abt it 100 million times. But then don't know wat was it with her that she was getting so upset & acting wired. When he couldn't stop her from making out with him, he just left & she got wild.. anyone would be..if turned down like that.. but then breaking up was not expected. She just shouted at him..as he walked away.. never ever come back to me consider this relation over. He was drunk. But at that state of mind he was strangely aroused & all he could think of was his dodo, & seeing her kissing was not helping. It was strange.. kavitha was doing all that intimate thing & his mind only thought of his dodo. Kavitha had not left any stone unturned to seduce him, but even then he was not able to get beyond a level with her.


He walked back into his room & smashed the door behind. He removed his shirt & threw it on the chair. He closed his fist .. in anger as his mind only kept replaying dodo's lips narrowing & leaning into a kiss. He punched the wall in anger. The pics fell down & broke. Geet & ballu jumped up hearing the noise.

Geet to ballu - lagtha phir fight kiya hain uss kavitha ke saat. Tu idhar hi rahen main dehk ke atti hoon.
ballu made a cute face little scared little worried
She rushed to his room.
His hand was bleeding, she took her duppatta & tied it around his hand. He winched his brows & turned to see her. He immediately looked away seeing her without duppata. He didn't know wat was wrong with him, he had been drunk so many times but never was his eyes wandering on her like this.
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her innocence his passion
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Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yay me first...whoop whoop
Awesome update:;
Loved it x
Awww geet is so concerned for maan and is confused on how to tell him
Oooh so geet will have to get intimate wiv maan again...
Loving the flashback scene...wanna read how they got closer and didnt geet know wat she was doing?? It's ok...we'll wait for your updates..
Cont soon Xx...
Edited by MaaneetLuverr - 14 years ago
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😭...Amy
uff geet batade...
😳 oops maan ke feelings!
lovely update!
Edited by 18mypride - 14 years ago
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OMG..beautiful update di!!!
loved every bit of it!!👏
poor amy...
geet is sooo very helpless!!!😭
di..its high tym now!!
plz let maan knw everything!!!!

and yeah...so we r sure tht
even b4 kavita he was in luv wid dodo!!!!😳



can't wait for next!!
its getting more and more exciting!!!!!😍


all the best wid ur family di
hve fun!!!!

Edited by kawaii_geet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Why is geet not telling maan the truth...??? updt soon.

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