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Posted: 14 years ago
shivangi i hv commented on ur gallery update n ys i loved ur banner of dil mil gaye
dear i won d first prize n i got a gold medal😛
take care
loads of love -piya
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update...
i guess geet still loves him..
maan will prob think it was a dream
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: piya-

shivangi i hv commented on ur gallery update n ys i loved ur banner of dil mil gaye

dear i won d first prize n i got a gold medal😛
take care
loads of love -piya

awesome...!!! luv you...! my best wishes...!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update ... she still loves Maan alot
continue soon with Maaneet moments
love
Sana
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Posted: 14 years ago

Thank you guys for this awesome support and response... I hope this Update touches your hearts... Stuts! see I updated finally...

PART 13

It was quite and still night and a white car drove through the mist. Inside the car, there was no sound...not even the sound of breaths as the car belonged to a walking dead. Geet drove through the highway with enormous speed with an abnormal gleam in her eyes. That was probably the first time, her heart felt contented and a smile adored her lips. She had the steering wheel in one hand and Maan's shirt in the other. She continuously inhaled the scent of his shirt.

*~*~*~*
He stood on the forest floor in a very drunk state and remembered nothing but Geet. How much he missed her. Where was she? How was she? Who was she with? Who was the guy? Numerous things and queries popped up in his mind and he seemed lost in his world. Suddenly, he felt a different feeling. He turned around and saw Geet, she looked different, pale, white, still but one thing was same, she had the same love in her eyes as 2 years ago. He smiled...Geet waved at him. He stepped forward. She stepped back. Maan looked surprised. He called Geet; words didn't not come out of his mouth. He pushed his voice box again but they didn't seem to utter a word. He called again and stepped forward. Geet continued to step back. He didn't realise when both of them reached the cliff. Maan continued to move forward and Geet continued to step back. Finally, in a fraction of second, Geet uttered, Maan! And stepped back and BOOM! She fell off. Maan moved with lightning fast speed and saw Geet falling down the cliff slowly and gazing at Maan.
*~*~*~*
Geet was walking in the jungle when suddenly, old memories started cropping up. Her face and her eyes, they worsened. She changed.
She lay on the floor of the bar, surrounded by all kinds of drunkards who looked at her with thirsty eyes. She moved her eyes towards Maan with a hope of help but he grinned an evil laughter and continued with his drink. One of the men moved forward and kissed her hand in a very bad manner. She jerked but had no strength left to protect herself. Soon, all the men were above her face and touched every part of her body and tore open her dress.
Geet roared through the forest. Her eyes blazed with a very pungent blue color and her fangs, they lumped out looking ferocious. She cursed herself to have reacted that way with Maan, he wasn't a man to be forgiven. She questioned herself, yeh kya kiya tune? Bhul gayi sab use dekh ke? Bhul gayi usne kya kiya that tere saath, chali gayi bachane use? She hit herself hard with a tree; the tree bark fell and broke into its constituents- its cells. She tried to hit herself with a rock, its remnants flew in the air being converted into powder or properly, fly ash. She snarled and brought down two trees to the ground. That didn't seem to satisfy her anger for herself, she wanted to give every possible pain to her body, so desperate she was.

*~*~*~*
Maan woke up because of the shock and word blurted out of his mouth, Geet! He looked around and found himself in his hotel room. He looked at the watch, it struck 2:30 in the morning, and he was breathing heavily. Still in his drunk state, he managed to make it up to the table where he drank some water. He then went to wipe off the beads of sweat that covered his face and slept off under the intoxication of his drink.
*~*~*~*
Geet was very furious and wanted to destroy herself, though she knew nothing but fire could completely destroy her. She snarled again and inhaled the air for some prey, there was none in proximity. She was about to pounce down to cross the stream when she was stopped by Milind
Milind: what the hell are you doing?
Geet: Milind, don't mess with me
Milind pressed her hands and started to drag her: Don't you try to tell me what I should and what I shouldn't. Chalo mere saath.
Geet: I am not going anywhere!
Milind: of course you are.
Saying this Milind just struck her chest and she fell unconscious immediately. She was dragged to her home by milind where she slept for almost the entire night before Milind checked her.
*~*~*~*
Location: Naitik Singhania's Residence
It's Naksh's first wedding anniversary and Naitik is sitting on his bed watching Akshi sleeping and waiting for her to get up. Finally, the first rays of dawn enter Naksh room and Akshi's face shines like a fairy. Akshi smiles and stretches herself to get up. Naitik stops her and kisses her eye-lids which are still closed. He moves near her ears and whispers, Good Morning Akshara! Happy Anniversary! Akshara opens her eyes with much effort and kisses Naitik's cheeks Happy Anniversary to you to! They both hug each other and then fall on bed. Their legs are twisted in one another and Akshi tucks her in Naitik's chest and both of them go for a lovely nap.
*~*~*~*
Maan gets up with a severe head-ache. Unable to open his eyes he gropes to the bathroom and splashes water on his face. He searches blindly for his towel and wipes off his face. He opens his eyes in the mirror and then is about to turn back when a thing catches his view. A tabeez kind of thing lay in his neck which he had never seen before.
Precap
Yeh tabeez, yeh mujhe kisne pehnayi?
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waise guys... I am not happy with the Update...dunno why! so suggestions welcome... and ande/tamatars also...😳

Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wowww shivu... awesome update!
loved it!!!
no thanx for naksh!!! lolzz... cute romance😳

i didnt get one thing😕
milind ne geet ko behosh kaise kiya?????

awesome update!!!
Edited by stuti_naksh4eva - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
good story...thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: stuti_naksh4eva

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wowww shivu... awesome update!
loved it!!!
no thanx for naksh!!! lolzz... cute romance😳

i didnt get one thing😕
milind ne geet ko behosh kaise kiya?????

awesome update!!!

Idea taken from PKYEK...dunno how😆😆 there Haseena behoshed Abhay like that
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow... i really loved geet's emotions
starting mein she was smiling... sice she realized that maan still loves , still cares for her... n mayb geet still loves maan i know she is dead but...
then achanak se she recollects all d bad memories... yes she is right maan cannot b forgiven for such an act...
i feel geet is confused ys indeed she is... the evil geet wants revenge but the geet who loved maan still wants to protect him
i really wonder shivu k iss kahani ka end kaise hoga...
khair regarding d taveez offcourse geet ne hi pehnayi hogi
i just hope k everything gets sorted out soon...
lovely update
Love -Piya
Edited by piya- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Woww Shivu Awesome update.. Geet saved Maan inspite of wat he has done..true luv.. Poor Geet.. D way u had described Geet's anger was gr8.. I hope she wont hurt herself.. Eagerly waiting for Maan-Geet's meeting when maan 'll b in his full sense.. Continue soon..thanxx for d pm..lol.
Edited by Gals_11 - 14 years ago

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