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Posted: 14 years ago
link to story so far...
Haan phone..
ragini stammered her dream all forgotten ,her hands were badly shaking when she tried in vain to dial anmol's number

Alekh got frustrated and snatched the phone irritably..

Idhar lao Ragini

Suddenly phone rang again and alekh answered it'

Anmol bhaiya'..Papaji to theek hain na'

Ragini looked on anxiously while Alekh chatted for brief 2 minutes and then cut off the phone to go.

Wo jija ji kay hua?

Kuch nahi bhaiya ke liye chai le jaani hai

Would you make it or should I ask Sakshi?

Ragini was stunned by this'10 phones for this..are we his servants or what? she fumed and as always threw the arrow out of bow before time'''''

She dialed Anmol's phone again and as soon it connected started shouting

10 missed calls because you need your tea'come on anmol ek baar chai kya pila di aap to

Anmol looked at his phone and shook his head in resignation''.then he cut in calmly behaving as if he had not heard a single word'

he told her calmly'

Alekh is not 100% better to deal with such pressures, they found more complications with some vessel blockage; we need to sign consent ASAP and I would rather have mummyji or you sign it

Oh ragini mustered weekly'.

Anmol ignored it and instead asked

Can you or mummyji come as soon as you can..

Haan main jaati hoon she managed'

He looked at his phone in amazement and reflected on last 3 hours'.

He remembered he was dreaming of Ragini and boats in misty lake when suddenly he felt a urge to call her but before he could dial her number a frantic nurse had walked into visitors room and told her about minor heart attack and possibility of blockages'..

Mumyji Ragini went to vasu's room and saw her untidy condition

Her eyes were red and swollen and she was wearing a ancient night dress

She half got up after seeing Ragini ;her face anxious and worried

Inderjit..she mumbled

Ragini explained everything and added mummyji driver se kahoon

Nahi phone milao use'..

As soon as ragini said hello ;she snatched the phone and spoke sternly to anmol..

he needs those test and you are being a bad son by delaying,,'.

But signatures mrs rajvansh he tried again..

Go and sign ''

Tears strolled down Anmol's eyes when the nurse shook him '

Ragini was shocked to see her proud mother in law '

Please bring him breakfast and tea Ragini vasu said sternly

An dhour later Ragini was going up the elevator in hospital to 5th floor where inder was admitted,

The door opened and she was rooted to spot

Anmol was standing in front of the door

He ;looked at her and the food basket

Before ragini had chance to say anything he moved past her into elevator and shut the door to go downstairs.

Ragini waited 2 hours while Anmol was no where in sight,she got worried and called on his cell phone

Bolo came a crisp question

Chai she managed
nahi zaroort nahi hai

Her eyes full with unshed tears she sat on the waiting chair and closed her eyes tightly,few drops escaped and Anmol found her sitting ,with head resting on wall and sleeping.

He watched her for good 5 minutes .something shifted inside him and he moved forward to gently shake her..

she was agaiin in that misty lake shore,she was stumbling and frantically reaching for his hand which was slowly disappearing in mist..
finally she coulght his fingers and he pushed her towards himself...she felt as if she may loose the grip...Wil continue tomorrow'
Edited by sami01 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Achha I was laughing !!🤣🤣🤣🤣

Kadoos Anmol and equally Kadoos Ragini
and not to miss Vasu melt baby melt apney issi bete kay liye melt ho rahi hai
Anmol tho Anmol hai !!😉

Again the lake I thought she rested her head on his shoulder 😳

cONTINUE SOON !!!👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome Sami,👏👏 👏 Just loved the scene where Vasu says👏, he needs those test and you are being a bad son by delaying,,….

But signatures mrs rajvansh he tried again..

Go and sign ……

Tears strolled down Anmol's eyes when the nurse shook him …

Ragini was shocked to see her proud mother in law …

Please bring him breakfast and tea Ragini vasu said sternly👏

Atlast Vasu accepted Anmol as SON.😃

And the scene in hospital,
Her eyes full with unshed tears she sat on the waiting chair and closed her eyes tightly,few drops escaped and Anmol found her sitting ,with head resting on wall and sleeping.

He watched her for good 5 minutes .something shifted inside him and he moved forward to gently shake her..

she was agaiin in that misty lake shore,she was stumbling and frantically reaching for his hand which was slowly disappearing in mist..
finally she coulght his fingers and he pushed her towards himself...she felt as if she may loose the grip...Wil continue tomorrow…

OH Sami, you ended here at a suspense.💔Waiting so anxiously for the next part.😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome sami, i am really looking forward to this. thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow..it's wonderful dii..👏 👏. angini having the same dream...😃

i can't believe vasu said ''Go and sign'' 😃 wohooo... so vasu accept anmol as a family member...😆

dii continue it soon... you have end it in a intresting part... need to know whats next...😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
aww thanks kritika ,rozy,zee and shanti..
yes vasu pighal rahi hai aur ragini bhi...
hamare anmol ji is a real soft mom...it gets hard sometimes..but as soon as u lit the candle again that same mom(wax) becomes soft..will update tonight
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Posted: 14 years ago
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/44203262

The mist kept getting thicker and thicker. She felt as if she was in a ship, her body rocking back and forth with its rhythm; suddenly he appeared before her ;those intense brown eyes were looking deep into her soul ,he sat in front of her bringing his eyes in level to hers'she kept looking at him though the hazy mist; holding her breath ;worrying that if she blinked he would disappear''

Suddenly he bent forward and wiped her face with back of his hand and hazy mist disappeared ,she saw his beautiful lips curving into a slightest smile, his face had immense tenderness and those perfect lips'ah she thought they r magical specially when they r moving'..

Suddenly he shook her more strongly and she was fully awake, she looked around to see nurses walking around'.

He was looking at her with concern and he was speaking again'

She bent forward to hear his softly spoken words'.

Tum theek to ho na Ragini?

Lao main chai pee leta hoon, don't be sad

I was waiting from 2 hours she pointed out..Frowning like a stubborn little girl; reminding him of Tammy

He smiled suddenly and sat beside her on the chair and said

I was working out the formalities for Papaji's angioplasty

One of his arteries is blocked and doctors are hoping this small procedure will work..He explained in reassuring tone

But abhi hospital mein 3-4 din lagenge'

Oh ..She was lost for words, she kept playing with her hands nervously, and suddenly he covered his hand over her hands and pressed them lightly with reassurance.

Her eyes welled up again and she looked at him with remorse and anguish

She tried speaking but her throat was choking with unshed tears'.

Finally she mumbled I am sorry

3 small short words. But the feeling and her expressions made them so powerful that both felt as if it was one of the ropes of that bridge they were trying to build between each other and this relationship.

Finally Anmol had drunk his tea and both were sitting in front of operating theatre where Paapji was getting his artery unblocked'.her head resting on his shoulder ,eyes closed and his arm lending a bit of extra support; they made a very special pair.

Few people smiled at the warmth this picture was portraying.

Finally Vasu and aalekh came with sharmaji.Inderjit was finally shifted back to CCU and according to doctors he was on road to recovery but with loads of rehab and life style changes.

When vasu came Anmol had squeezed her hands ; giving her a quick reassurance and added that he would go home and freshen up for a while and rest.

I would come back at 8 he said to no one in particular'.

You all stay here and if need arises call me.

Vasu was bit ashamed at her earlier outburst and just nodded while Ragini was too stunned to react.

At home he freshened up and changed into a casual t-shirt and track pants and then went to find his little princesses'

Partner aap

Papa both came and hugged him, their little faces worried'

He kissed their heads softly and hugged them close inhaling into their soft innocence

Ah so what are my two dolls doing and where is their sweet smile gone..

Bade papa theek to ho jayenge na they both asked..

Hmm let me see and proceeded to catch something out of air into his fist and asked with twinking eyes..

Guess ? what is in this ..

Children were delighted with this game and started guessing..Finally he opened his fist to reveal 2 eclair toffees..

Now guess who sent these?

Bade papa'.came and joint reply

Yes'he said and mentally thanked that little girl in hospital who was selling the toffees to raise money for charity.

Bade papa wants you to eat these and study hard while he would work hard to get better and come home as soon as possible..and then we wil all celebrate diwali together

Yey''their worries disappeared and Anmol inhaled deeply and proceeded towards his own room with a weary gait.

Arey sakshi tum baby kaisa hai ?

Bhaiya you have a magic touch'I saw how you soothed their anxiety; I had been trying for the whole day.

He smiled and gently patted her head and asked for a cup of tea and went to lie down for some time.

In the hospital Vasu sent Ragini and alekh home saying there was no point in staying as only one person was allowed inside at one time anyways, but she wanted Ragini to go home and make sure that Anmol got food at time and he was well rested.

She was amazed at her own heart; which kept worrying for Anmol as well as Inder'

Jo beet gaya uske liye kahin main beta aur pati dono na'..she shivered and suddenly saw that inder was awake and was watching her intently'

Arey aap uth gaye .how are you feeling

Better came a week reply

Her eyes welled up and she bent her head, her hair falling over to cover her face, but inder could see her shaking shoulders but he was unable to move'..he watched quietly once she was composed again he smiled at her and said

Let go of past..Embrace the future..please vasu

She moved forward and held his hands and nodded vigorously

Ragini almost ran inside and bumped into sakshi

Wo anmolji ?

Didi he is sleeping, he asked for tea so I went to give him but he was asleep so I did not wake him up.

Kal se 2 mins bhi he has not had peace..

Ragini nodded and saw kids running towards her and telling her about Paapaji's magical clair toffees..

She had actually seen anmol buying them from that little girl but his gesture touched her deeply and she felt small one more time and thought how can I even doubt you for one minute ever'.she then went to kitchen to make food.

At about 7 RAGINI WENT TO WAKE Anmol up and saw he was already up and just freshly showered. He was sitting in the chair and drying his hair with towel. She went forward and grabbed the towel thus entangling her hands in his, he looked up with surprise and question in his glance..

Laiye main kar deti hoon.you must be so tired

He kept staring at her and removed his hands and waited for her to start

Her face turned the color of beetroot and she was blushing profusely;

He lifted his eyebrows in amusement and said lo mujhe do I would manage

Nahi nahi she swallowed and started to massage gently ..

Ah it felt like heaven he relaxed back in chair and closed his eyes..

She kept rubbing slowly and both were lost in this sensual assault when suddenly they heard loud laughter and came into their senses, Ragini dropped her towel in confusion and saw Alekh standing in the door

Ragini itne time mein to tumhare kamar tak lambe baal bhi sookh jaate 15 minutes se I have been calling you two to dinner downstairs'

Anmol got up and picked up the towel and threw it at alekh playingly'

Ask sakshi to try it on you and winked '..tell her it comes highly recommended'

Ragini was blushing profusely; she looked at both of them and ran from the room

Leaving very amused anmol and alekh alone who burst into laughter'

She stopped on stairs when she heard that sound'

Is ghar mein kitne dino ke baad yeh aawaaz suni hai'

She ran down the stairs and went to fold her hands in front of radha Krishna idol '..

Edited by sami01 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
ok friends updated nw o i wil updat eon monday night ..hope u like this...small part
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Posted: 14 years ago
😆 The last part was funny and nice punch line from Anmol when Alkeh comes into the room . And that towel scene was so sweet

Now Vasu ji ki Jai ho she is now set freeing her angery and understanding this man Anmol and his significance in the life of the family and specially Anmol ...

I loved the scene when she says I am sorry and later keeping her head on his shoulder. So nice 😳

And Anmol with the kids Aww magic in the air and then eclair toffee. So nice .. The twinkle in their eyes was so visible...😳

Very nice Glad Happy days are coming now !👏👏👏👏

This longing between Anmol and Ragini will soo give them a bridge to come closer and start loving each other deeply 😃

Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Just loved the whole update Sami. 👏👏 👏

You write like a Professional Writer,👏sometimes I have to read it 2nd time to understand it better😳 (as I don't read novels)😊 These lines show how professional you are,⭐️

The mist kept getting thicker and thicker. She felt as if she was in a ship, her body rocking back and forth with its rhythm; suddenly he appeared before her ;those intense brown eyes were looking deep into her soul ,he sat in front of her bringing his eyes in level to hers'she kept looking at him though the hazy mist; holding her breath ;worrying that if she blinked he would disappear''

Suddenly he bent forward and wiped her face with back of his hand and hazy mist disappeared ,she saw his beautiful lips curving into a slightest smile, his face had immense tenderness and those perfect lips'ah she thought they r magical specially when they r moving'.

I am spellbound.👏👏👏


My another favorite scene,❤️❤️

Oh ..She was lost for words, she kept playing with her hands nervously, and suddenly he covered his hand over her hands and pressed them lightly with reassurance.

Her eyes welled up again and she looked at him with remorse and anguish

She tried speaking but her throat was choking with unshed tears'.

Finally she mumbled I am sorry

3 small short words. But the feeling and her expressions made them so powerful that both felt as if it was one of the ropes of that bridge they were trying to build between each other and this relationship.

Just Mindblowing ,👏I just visualized my Angini ,😍so beautiful scene.👏


And my pick of the update,👏


her head resting on his shoulder ,eyes closed and his arm lending a bit of extra support; they made a very special pair.

Few people smiled at the warmth this picture was portraying.

Loved Anmol and Vasu's scene, 👏

When vasu came Anmol had squeezed her hands ; giving her a quick reassurance .Awesome.👏


I was just grinning from ear to ear reading this scene.😃😃😃


She kept rubbing slowly and both were lost in this sensual assault when suddenly they heard loud laughter and came into their senses, Ragini dropped her towel in confusion and saw Alekh standing in the door

Ragini itne time mein to tumhare kamar tak lambe baal bhi sookh jaate 15 minutes se I have been calling you two to dinner downstairs'

Anmol got up and picked up the towel and threw it at alekh playingly'

Ask sakshi to try it on you and winked '..tell her it comes highly recommended'

Ragini was blushing profusely; she looked at both of them and ran from the room

Leaving very amused anmol and alekh alone who burst into laughter'

So Romantic and was Funny too.❤️😆


Waiting for the next part Sami.⭐️






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