AR sesn 2 FF -kshitij ki aur- gulmohar pg 67 - Page 46

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Posted: 14 years ago
awww... read ur updater.. so now don't take time... update the next party... so we r in that fresh mind...😉 when will u update the next part dii ???
anizor thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks sami, it was nice to read it all at once, memory is all refreshed now please update soon. thanks
sami01 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww thanks all of u am writing it as we speak so 1-2 din do bus it will be posted for sure even i had to refresh my memory
sami01 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
also guys i had missed full update...so i added into the first part so if u want u can read it ...so story has a continuty...now i realize i had not done a very good job in posting parts properly...hope this helps
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Posted: 14 years ago
@sami..thank you so much for posting the story again ..read it in one go and its so beautiful..👏
the depth of the character of anmol blended with the exact mixed emotions to show the emotional turmoil he was going through in the beginning is just fantastic..👏
things changed later with tammy's birthday.back home to his princess daughter and ragini.
waiting how ragini ask for forgivenes for hurting such a gem..
afterall anmol is human and has feelings not a punching bag whenever she wants lashes on him..
waiting for next update inder to be back home and how anmol's reacts to ragini's bitter words to him..
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Posted: 14 years ago
links to rest of FF
scrol down on this p[age to see full ff posted in 3 diffrent posts
Ragini was sitting on banks of a misty white lake; there was a small boat coming towards her .She stood up in anticipation, her feet floating towards water .She held the bouquet of white roses close to her heart and inhaled sweet smell of roses. The boat kept floating towards her slowly growing bigger over the horizon , a man dressed in white was standing at the front looking towards the shore'..finally he was so close that she could look into his deep eyes and see the fire of longing in them..

Boat came close to the shore'she moved forward, her feet in water and held her arms out to him, waving her bouquet '

He held out his arm to catch her when suddenly a wave came and she stumbled'.the boat jerked back into mist,she tried to get up and grab on t o her flowers'and held them close to her heart''but they felt hard '.

There were bells ringing'..may be a distant church or a tower house she mumbled''she tried to get up but''.she touched her face it felt wet and bells kept growing louder and louder''.someone was calling her name'.Ragini ..ragini utho'..

Suddenly she felt someone was shaking her'

She got up with a start looking around in confusion and saw Alekh's disturbed face; she sat up confused and saw she was holding on to Anmol's photo in her hands.

Ragini tum ro kyun rahi ho'.

Phone baj baj ke pagal ho gaya tumhara..

Main apne kamre se bhi aa gaya'

Delho 10 missed calls hain he showed her the screen'

She touched her tear strained face,stil confused

Her mind was blank and hurting still thinking about her Anmol in that boat'where did that stormy wave take him??

Ragini phone dekho missed calls'.anmol ki

Phone karo use''.

Oh..She suddenly woke up fully and grabbed her phone to dial '.

Earlier in night'..

Anmol had snuggled in the warm blanket and inhaled its fragrance. It reminded him of fresh lavender fields across the white lake'

He was standing on the front deck of a small boat, there was mist all around him'..the rowers were singing rumblow fumblow in perfect rhythm'.

Sometimes the mist would clear for some time and he could see a lone figure in white, standing on the shore '

He urged the rowers to row faster but it seemed they kept rowing but shore was still far'.finally he could see her face so full of love, her eyes shone of devotion and she waved her white pure flowers towards him, he moved forward'

His heart filled with anticipation he felt as if he could inhale the sweet smell of rose over the misty fragrance of lavender'..

Suddenly he felt a jolt'

She disappeared in waves'.her frantic hand trying to catch hold of his extended arm'..

He screamed

Ragini''.his head hit the hard side of boat and he jerked to wake up'

He looked around confused, where was he why were there so many white clad angles,

"sir" came a concerned voice

Suddenly he was awake thank god it was dream

Why she was disappearing in storm he frowned..

I have to hear her voice .I should he felt'..I hope she is fine and reached for his ''

wil continue soon guys soon mean few hours...till then enjoy...
Edited by sami01 - 14 years ago
anizor thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
sami ,wonderful now i am waiting for the next part. thanks
shanti05 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow Sammy yeah tho kamaal ka tha

Both having the same dream and missing each other in the wave storm.. 😍

I loved alkeh's part phone baaj raha hai 10 missed calls tumhara dhyaan kaha hia !! I could see him scolding Ragini !!

Now whats next in store eagerly waiting !!👏👏👏

After a long time track is back on track
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome Sami , 👏👏👏 I loved it as both having the same dream .❤️❤️❤️

But was disappointed you left it there.😔

Waiting for the next update.😃⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago
arey kaam pe thee na and it was crazy busy abhi likh rahi hoon next part kritika...sone se pehle wil post...
thank you rozy shanti and kritika
wil be back with next part in few hours...

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