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Posted: 14 years ago
Hiii
superbbb upd dear
fabulous
rocking
loved it
brilliant
do cont. soon
thanx for d pm

Love
Deepa

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kareena32

short and cute update love maaneet romance

thanks for pm waiting next part
ab kia dhamaka hone wali hope a good dhamaka


The dhamaka is not actually gud..
but don't worry.. it will not sep our maaneet :-)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: simi91

both parts

cute & sweet
love it
do i need to scare about
the precap dhamaka😲
waiting eagerly
ty 4 pm


Thanks a lot..
No.. u don't really need to be scared abt the dhamaka..
as our maaneet wud not be separated :-)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: nilu710

Beautiful part

finally geet also said it.
very nice part
precap is scary!
do whatever dhamaka but plzz dont separate maneet!
:) lovelyyy parts
plz update soon
waiting already


Thanks a lot :-)
Don't worry.. m not separating them :-)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 810Kankana

yaar iitni jaldi CANDLE-LIGHT DINNER khatam ho gayee...maza nahi aayaa.. 😲 😭 nxt time i want a much bigger C-L Dinner with some cozy dance ..ok...plzzz😍


Candle light dinner to tha hi nahi..
But don't worry.. on your req I'll surely add a CL dinner.. wo bhi romantic wala with dance!! 😉😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sarita21992

Loved part 29. Btw off late ur pm link takes us on d first page of ff, n not at d part itself.in case one has to read a no of updates at one go, it becomes a little difficult to find d part.. .


Really??
Next time I'll double check it..
really sorry for that..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: preethia

yippeee happy finally geet said it...

wats this dhamaka...
acha wala ya bura wala dhamaka...
pl cont soon


Actually its bura wala..
But don't worry..
Maaneet will not be separated..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepanwita

Hiii
superbbb upd dear
fabulous
rocking
loved it
brilliant
do cont. soon
thanx for d pm

Love
Deepa


Thanks a lot dear :-)
Your comm are always so sweet..
Love them.. :-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
yaar part 31 de do ...jaldi se...cant wait for it..plzzz😕
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 31

Arohi directed him to her room.. he made her lie on the bed..
He again carresed her cheeks a kissed on her forehead.. & said in a a whisper tone Good night..
She hugged him & cuddled in a baby position. He made her lie straight & again kissed on her forehead & left from there.

She got up next day feeling tired. She prayed to babaji as per as her routine & headed towards the washroom to get fresh. Just then Arohi came there. Geet aaj sunday hai.. bhool gayi tu??
Geet: Arre.. mai to bhul hi gayi thi..
Arohi: Chal.. koi nahi.. abb tu aram se beth & hav ur coffee.. mai chalti hun..
Geet: Tu kahan jaa rahi hai??
Arohi: Wo.. mai
Geet got up from her bed & put her hand around her shoulder.. Ohh.. to.. jiju ke sath bahar jaa rahi hai??
Arohi: Nahi.. wo.. matlab haan
Geet: mai bhi chalungi
Arohi was taken aback.. Tu.. tu kaise..
Geet: Kyun.. tu apni dost ko apne sath lekar nahi ja sakti??
Arohi: haan.. par.. vo
Geet softly patted her cheeks.. arru.. tu bhi naa ekdum budhu hai.. I was joking yaar.. jaa u get ready..
She went from there & Geet again settled on her bed to drink her coffee that had by now become ice.. Allo.. yeh to thandi ho gayi.. garam karni padegi.. she made a face & then went to the kitchen & heated it..

She came back to her room and saw that her cell was ringing. She saw Maan's name flashing on it. Oh no.. phir se der ho gayi uthane me.. aaj to pakka gussa ho jayenge.
She answered the call..Maan aap gussa to nahi hue naa??

He was calm.. Mai kyun hounga gussa??
Geet was surprised.. Gussa nahi hue.. ohh.. kahin inhone abhi abhi to call nahi kiya.. matlab mai late nahi hui.. thank god.. warna to aaj mujhpe baras padte yeh..
Maan: Geet.. kahan kho gayin??
Geet: nahi.. wo.. mai
Maan: Geet.. chalo.. forget abt it.. & tell me are u ready?
Geet: Kyun??
Maan: Batao naa Geet.. ready ho ya nahi??
Just then the landline phone rang.. Maan aap do min ruko.. mai abhi ayi..
Maan: ok

She went to answer the call.. her cell was still in her hand.. so Maan cud hear her.
Geet: Hello
It was Brij..
Geet: Veerji.. aap?? Kyaa hua??
Brij: Geet.. maine tere HP ke tickets book karva diye hain.. aaj sham ki train hai.. tu jaldi se ready ho jaa aur time se station pahuch jayiyo..
Geet: Veerji.. HP ke tickets.. train.. ye aap kyaa reh ho.. kuch hua hai kyaa??
Maan wondered why did his brother booked her tickets for HP.. Mai Geet ko kahin nahi jane dunga.. & if she has to go then I will also go with her..
Geet: Veerji.. dasso naa.. ki hoya??
Brij: Gudiya.. tu yahan aaja.. sab apne aap hi pata chal jayega
Geet: Par veerji.. aisa ki hoya jo aap
Before she cud complete he cut the call..

On the other hand in HP Daarji made Brij cut the call..
Daarji: Kyun phone kiya tune use??
Brij: Daarji.. wo uske bhi papaji hain.. use pata to hona chahiye naa..
Daarji: Wo iss ghar ki koi nahi lagti hai abb.. pehele apni maa ko aur abb..
He couldn't complete.. he just left from there..

Geet thought why was he calling her to HP. She realized she was talking to Maan..
Geet: Maan.. wo.. mai
Maan: Geet.. mai bhi tumhare sath chal raha hun.. tum akele nahi jayogi.. samjhi tum..
Geet: Par maan.. aap.. aap kaise
Maan: Geet.. maine kaha naa.. mai chal raha hu.. to bas..
Geet: Maan.. she sad in sad voice..
Maan: Geet.. don't worry.. sab theek hi hoga.. tum jaldi se tyaar ho jayo.. mai abhi aa raha hun..
They hanged the call & Geet went to get ready.

After an hour or so Geet heard the door bell. Arohi had already left so there was no one in the house.. Zarur Maan honge.. she went downstairs to open the door..
She hugged Maan.. Maan straighten her.. Geet ek min ruko..
He closed the door. & took her upstairs & made her sit on the bed.
He cupped her face.. Geet.. dar lag raha hai??
Geet: Hmm..
She hugged him tightly.. Geet don't worry.. sab theek hoga.. mai hun naa..
Geet: Maan.. ham kab jayenge?
Maan: Geet.. maine flights ke ticket book karvane ko kaha tha adi ko par aaj ki koi flight nahi hai..
Geet: Par Maan train ki tickets to booked hain naa
Maan: Geet maine Adi se vahan bhi call karvaya tha.. par sab train cancel ho gayi hain..
Geet: Flight bhi nahi.. train bhi nahi.. aisa kyaa hua hai maan??
Maan: Pata nahi Geet.. but don't worry.. kal ki tickets book ho gayi hain.. kal subah ki flight hai..
Geet: Par Maan..
Maan: Geet.. tum apne veerji ko call karke bata do.
Geet: Hmm..

She called on his no.. but no answer. She tried on the landline of Handa Haveli.
Daarji answered the call..
Geet: Sastriyakal daarji..
He hanged the call as soon as he heard her voice.
Geet was surprised.. mera phone cut kar diya..

Maan came near her & held her by shoulder.. kyaa hua Geet??
Geet: Maan.. daarji ne phone cut kar diya
Maan: nahi geet.. cut ho gaya hoga.. network ka prob hoga.. dekhao apna cell.. dekho network kahan hai..
Geet: Nahi maan.. uss waqt tha.. unhone khud phone cut kiya.. mera phone cut kar diya.. aisa kyun
Maan: Geet.. don't worry.. sab theek hi hoga..
Geet said tears threatning to fall from her eyes.. Pakka naa.
Maan hugged her.. Haan Geet pakka..


PRECAP
Maan & Geet going HP

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Edited by mahimak - 14 years ago

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