Maaneet FF ~ Kasak - Page 77

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Posted: 14 years ago
u made us very emotianal dear
really superb part
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

very emotional...when someone thinks of somebody as their father...loves them throughout their liofe how can they stop loving them just because he is not her bilogical father...i have an inkling something bad had happennned to him...atleast Maan is there to stand with her...hope he becomes her strength in these trying times.


u r right.. how can a family stop loving their child.. just bcoz now they got to know that its not their blood.. but remember geet is daarji's grand daughter only.. she is her papaji as she calls him.. his sister's daughter.. so same blood.. & her papaji & brij understand this.. bcoz they are educated.. but others are not.. they blame Geet for the death of their family's daughter..
But Maan is with her.. so hope everything will be gud only..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: allibr

👏awesome update👏

geet should tell maan abot her past😲
continue soon😍


Thanks a lot dear :-)
n yaa.. he will get to knw it.. now that he is going to HP..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shivikasavvy

luved it alot...

but kuch dhamaka nhi hua ...
and thanks for the PM ...


Thanks a lot :-)
This is the starting of the dhamaka..
Abhi there s lot awaiting for them..
Just wait..


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: swetha10

lovely ff... awesome updates.. hope geet's dad is fine... continue soon


Thanks a lot dear :-)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: abisamratgunjan

u made us very emotianal dear

really superb part


Really thanks a lot :-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG...so her Darji has comet o know of Geet's truth...so is that suppose to mean that even Maan will come to knw of the truth...


Cant wait for the update Mahima...pls update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 32

The whole day passed with their cute romantic moments. But Geet was all the while very sad.. she just wanted to be in his arms.. she was scared what wud have happ that daarji cut her call. Maan tried to cheer her up.. but nothing seemed to work.

It was 7pm now & he was really feeling worried for her as she had not eaten anything since morning. He excused himself & went out for some time. After an hour or so he came back.

Geet was really angry.. Maan kahan gaye the aap?? Mai kabse aap ka intzaar kar rahi hu.. aap ko pata mai kitna dar gayi thi.. I thought aap mujhe.. she couldn't complete tears threatning to fall from her eyes, she turned her back to him.
He made her face him. He cud see trails of tears on her cheeks.. Geet.. tumhe apne maan par bas itna hi bharosa tha??

Geet: Maan.. aap par to khud se bhi zyada bharosa hai.. par meri kismat par bharosa nahi hai..
She hugged him.. plz maan mujhe chodkar kabhi mat jana.. plz
She started sobbing silently.
He wiped her tears.. Geet.. bas abb bilkul rona nahi..


She hugged him more tightly..

They broke apart after a while..
Maan: Geet.. chalo mere sath
Geet: kahan Maan??
Maan: Chalo to sahi..

He took him downstairs. She couldn't believe it was the same house she lived in.
Geet looked at him in surprise.. Maan yeh kyaa
Maan put his index finger on her lips.. chup bilkul chup..
He made her sit on the chair & seted himself in front of her
He lighted the candles.. it looked so beautiful
Maan made her have a bite.. Maine khud apne hathon se banaya hai.. I know it wud not be that delicious but maybe tumhe yahi chahiye tha thats why the whole day u didn't ate anything.
Geet had it.. Maan.. its really yummy.. I luv it.
Maan: Geet.. don't lie.. its not yummy.. I knw that
Geet: Nahi maan.. sach me bahut acha hai..
Maan: Really??
Geet: Hmm
Maan: Then finish the whole thing.
Geet: Ok..Just for u..
Maan smiled inwardly.. Thankgod.. isne kha liya.. warna bhooki hi so jati

They finished the dinner after an hour or so with their cute talks in between..
They were sitting in Geet's room.. Maan laid down on her lap.. she gently moved her fingers through his scalp.


Maan: Geet.. tum fikr mat karo.. kuch nahi hoga.. hum kal jaa rahe hain naa
Geet: Maan.. aap mere sath ho.. mere liye bas yahi bahut hai.. I was really scared.. but aap ho naa.. to mujhe pata hai sab theek hi hoga..
Maan got up & kissed on her forehead.. Love u shona
Geet blushed & said: Love u too
Maan: Chalo.. abb mai chalta hun..kal jaldi tyaar ho jana..ok
Geet: Hmm..

Next Day
Geet got up early than usual. She was sad.. that was natural. But total unlike of her that she was quiet. Her thoughts lingered on the last day's incidents.. He babaj.. yeh kyaa ho raha hai.. sab theek hoga naa.. upar se daarji ne mera phone bhi cut kiya.. kyaa ho raha hai ye..

Just then her cell ring.. ofcource it was Maan. She answered the call in one ring..
Maan: Geet.. itni jaldi uth gayin tum
Geet: Hmm.. bechaini ho rahi thi
Maan: Geet.. I said naa I'm with u..
Geet: Haan Maan.. I knw that..
Maan: Acha.. tum jaldi se tyaar ho jayo.. I'll come by 7 to pick u.. ok??
Geet: Hmm
They hanged the call & she went to get ready.

7am
She heard the doorbell snapping her thoughts exact at 7. She ran to open the door. By that time Arohi had already opened the door.
Arohi: Jiju aap.. she turned back & saw her.. Geet tu itni jaldi uth gayi..
They both looked at each other..
Arohi: Kyaa baat hai yaar.. tum dono kuch bataoge mujhe
Geet narrated the whole incident.
Arohi: tu tension naa le geet.. sab theek hoga.. tu kahe to mai papaji se puchu ki kyaa hua hai.
Geet: Nahi aru rehne de.. ham jaa hi rahe hain naa.. its ok
Arohi: Theek hai.. tum dono upar jayo, mai tumhare liye coffee lati hun..

They went upstairs & seated themselves on the bed.
Maan: Geet.. I think HP me koi strike chal rahi hai.. hame tickets HP se pehele padne vale kisi gaun ke mile hain
Geet: Strike.. Maan zarur kuch galat huya hai.. mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai
Maan cupped her face.. Geet mat daro.. mai hun naa.. sab theek hoga.



PRECAP
Trip to HP


Candle light dinner on req of Kankana

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Part 33

Edited by mahimak - 14 years ago
allibr thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
yah me first
😊lovely update😊
continue soon😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
MAHIMA, kahan ho dear...waiting for u...:)))

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