oh man.
i feel like pronouncing my undying love for you!
that was ... no words! words wouldn't be adequate enough for this part!
thank you!
Okay so i after reading it again i had to edit my post, then it got deleted and here i am WRITING it again!
Firstly, I love how we are slowly uncovering what G said to V in those three days. and what we are covering is to die for!
You know how long it's been since you have said anything to me… I miss you… Wake up, please… I need you… I need you more than you will ever need me, Vidya…
I just hope she realizes what he is saying and not store it away as fictional chatter.
Secondly, I love how he called her Jaan, my favorite endearment! Please make him continue calling her that!
Lastly, i love the gentleness in this chapter. the gentle kiss to keep her talking, the gentle kiss to her shoulder, the gentle confessions, and the slow and gentle kiss at the end! it makes it all more amazing!
i hope she is able to answer herself if whether a man's ability to love gives him eternal vitality- i hope her love answers for him.
the comment about him giving his life in sacrifice to not her hurt, shows how passionate of a character he is with his limited emotions.
man it just keeps getting better each time i read it!
okay i am done! my longest comment ever!
Edited by bushrayou - 14 years ago
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