Maryada: Vidya-Gaurav FF - Updates. p. 145 (6/29)

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diotima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#911

aaargh, how do u do this? amazing! It is so easy to picture the characters... because of the way you write ofc!

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jazzerette

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Posted: 14 years ago

#912

Amazing update!

The scene is the garden was so intense. The element of nature added to the whole hypnotic spell.

Vidya and Gaurav have still not come around to have a talk. But just wondering, where would they even start from?

Do enlighten us soon Devi.

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-Blossy-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#913

Ah desperately waiting for the a confrontation! Update soon...

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YusLiz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#914

I'm having goosebumps of my own reading ur updates. Couldn't do justice with my words to describe how amazing ur writing is and the updates are getting intriguing by the minute apart from getting very arousing 😉

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BheegiBasanti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#915

I maintain...will they...will they not...will they...will they not? Get your minds out of the gutter people...I was referring to their talking! 😆

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Nirjhor105

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Posted: 14 years ago

#916

it's beautiful. i could just see them, feel the moment.

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priya..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#917

Nice Nice!!!🤗 for updating! Still playing Peek-a-boo with each other :) and her sari joing the little game as well..Fantastic!!

So he is finally coming home for the night. Are you going to send Vidya and Gaurav to their room? Everytime they have been conscious of each other, fireworks happened..whether they want it or not..Oh they want it- I should really say whether they intended it or not..

I am going to second with Krishna- Is the teej vrat going to be it? They will be at her maayka, away from this monstrous house, and at a place where people think they are husband and wife in the true sense. May be that will give them an opportunity to "talk" among other things 😆