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Posted: 14 years ago
ye kahani to mere ek cousin ki real story ki tarha mod le lya...un dono ka rishta fixed hua tha arranged marriage...then aisehi kuch rumor ki bajase and ladke ki arrogant batoki bajase rista tut gaya nd then then...dono ne vag kad shadi kadli 😆...still their families r behaving cold with them but pyar kadnewaloko koi roksaktahe kya...oh yes yes un dono bohut jaldi mammi papa bannewala hain...😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh no...y is daarji doing this when geet herself have no problem...i wonder how maaneet will react to this...
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks a lot for all the beautiful comments
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love u all
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Posted: 14 years ago
yapppieee

me waitinggg

and i want longgg update and plzzz end iton happu note or doubl update plzzz

waiting eagerly muskiieee

thanks for updtinggg

loveee uuu
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Posted: 14 years ago
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darji - lekin beta hum aisen aapni beti ki shaadi aap se kaisen karayen
Maan was offend!! he refuses to explain anything he was so wild with so many baseless accusations. & darji whom he regarded nothing less than Daadi..questioning him was really annoying him.
His silence was misunderstood. They were heart broken. How could they blindly trust him & give their daughter. It was tensed scene. Daadi understood their concern
Daadi - samdhi ji ..yeh sab aavahen hain. She was studing with him in college. Nothing else. Aur yeh phot bhi tab hi ki hain. College ke time ki
Brij - how do we know he didn't have any affair then
darji held Brij back.. he folded his hand together.. hume maaf kardijiyen ..hum yeh rishten nahi jodna chaten. Maan clenched his fist & stood numb. His ego was sharply hurt. It was beyond him to justify himself.
They just quietly walked out with a heavy lump in their heart. Papaji couldn't say much though he wanted to speak to Maan once. But Maan 's respond was too cold. He was in no mood to talk or justify. Daadi tried to tell Maan to stop them but it was in vein. He stood looking away.

Geet was unaware of all this. She wondered why Maan didn't call her the whole day. She did read the news but knew there was nothing to worry it was all baseless.

At sanjeevni
ridzy - yeh sab kya hain
Geet - kuch nahi ..koi chip ku hain
ridzy - dehkne main koi model se kam nahi dihk thi
Geet smiled weekly.
Ridzy - do u think yeh sab sach hain
Geet - nahi yaar.. she was with him in college... shayad tab ki hoto hogi
ridzy - he told u abt her
Geet - haan
ridzy - phele se
Geet - haan baba
ridzy - u don't have an issue
Geet - why will I.. unki biwi tho main hi ..
she bit her lip & tirned red in embaresment ... ridzy lifted her brows..
Geet blushed ..I mean ..she knotted her pallo & looked down
ridzy - tumhare ghar main kisi ko problem nahi
Geet - subha darji thoden gussa huwen the... lekin who unse milne gayen hain.. I am sure he will explain things & sort it all out.


She was pretty sure Maan won't let anything go wrong between them least did she know wat awaited for her at home. She reached home, there was strange silence ..all of them gave a sympathetic look to her. She didn't understand wat was going on. She heard
thai ji.. usen bol do na
Rano - aisen kaisen kah den
thai ji - jitne der karogi utni hi mushkil hogi ussen
they became silen when she came closer.
Geet - kya baat hain mama?
Rano - kuch nahi beta.. tu change karlen.
Geet looked at both of their faces.. it looked tensed & worried.
Geet couldn't sleep the whole night worrying why he didn't call. She didn't know if it was ok to call so late. She thought for few mins & then finally called him
the phone kept ringing. He didn't know wat she had to say abt all this, but was some where happy she called. He took a deep breath ...& answered the call.. she was quiet for a min.. then.. aap teehk ho na?
Maan - umm
Geet - nahi main .woh...
she didn't know how to say she was worried abt all that & most of all he didn't call.
Geet - aap teehk ho na she asked again..
Maan - is that all u have to say he roared
she had tears in her eyes.. ek tho pura din call nahi karthen.. aur main phone kathi hoon tho naraz hoten hain.
Geet - good night ..she said abruptly breaking down in tears.
Dam he said.. as he knew she was crying. He was hurt but didn't know she meant so much to him. Her cracked voice her tears.. he closed his eyes in frustration. He couldn't even think of anything else but her god knows how many times since morning he wanted to talk to her but his ego stopped him. She knows every thing then why didn't she tell her parents or she also doubts me.
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NDktWFkx0Js&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]

Next day on the breakfast table in Handa hawali
Geet quietly came picked an apple & began to rush to sanjeevni
darji - isne ring utra nahi abhi thak
Rano & thai ji looked blankly at darji & then Geet.
Geet innocently looked at Rano.
Darji - hume maaf karde beta we didn't know abt Maan's reality before
Geet could sense pain in darji's voice. She kept the apple down & came close to Rano feeling scared.
Brij - darji ne kitna pucha uss se.. kuch nahi kaha..kuch safai nahi di
Darji - humne mangni thod di
those words shook her!! she looked blinking at rano frst then papaji ..she ran out crying. Rano tried to stop her
thai ji - ro lene de bicahri ko.. ji halka hojayega
She took a cab to sanjeevni & kept crying all the way. Rano tried to call her but her phone came switched off.
Only thoughts that ran in her mind.. its over..!!! they are not together anymore. How could he just let something like this happen. She didn't mean anything to him, it was only her feeling love.. & attached to him.. only she lost her heart to him.. she tried to compose herself. Least could she. His thoughts haunted her every breath, her heart was broken, and feeling wrought. The flood of hurt that welled up in her was so hard to show for others to see. She tried to keep herself aloof.

It was not her relation that broke ..it was her heart.. she trusted him with that heart. She thought he won't let anything happen. She thought she meant something to him.. is it only her sitting here thinking about him in her little world, which seemed meaningless. She ran to the stair way & cried.. she didn't know wat else do. She couldn't go against her parents & she couldn't breath without thinking abt him. Its only been few hrs & it felt like hell. He didn't even tell her anything abt all this last night. Why didn't he explain to darji. Why did he keep quiet. Why!!!
her thoughts went all over.. thats why he didn't call her. Thats why he was avoiding her. The more she though abt it the more heart broke down she felt. She could feel herself breaking down completely.
She went back home calm & composed she didn't want to hurt their feelings. Later at night papaji came to her room. She immediately hid maans photo. She wiped her tears & sat up
Papaji - sorry beta
Geet - nahi papaji aap aisen mat boliyen
papaji - pata nahi yeh sab kaisen ho gaya..
Geet - unho ne mujhe phelen hi bataya huwa hain is ladki ki baren main
papaji hugged her .. kitni bholi hain tu..
Geet - woh aisen nahi hain
papaji - aab yeh sab darji ko kaun samjaye ga..
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- BLOG aparichit part 20-

precap
darji angry at Geet
- NEXT PART 21-
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Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
yipeee i m first aur wo first tym😆...
really emotional part di...how can daarji do this😡...i really loved d way geet says ki unki biwiw to mein hun...awww really cute but di aap ne aise cliffhanger pe chod diya😭...plz plz plz aparichit ki bhi double update milegi😳... nd why didn't geet says anything why didn't she protested dat maan is not wrong😕...i hope sab kuch jaldi se acha hojaye !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Edited by my_maan_geet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wonderful update.
Maan's super huge ego didnt let him talk to either Daarji or Geet.
True that he was offended by Daarji's questions and shut himself.
But In the whole process once again the engagement got broken.
He distanced himself from his love which i am sure will make him restless and all the more mad.
He expected Geet to clear up things with her parents.
Poor Geet didnt even know what had happened.
He even got mad at her concern being unaware of her ignorance.
He has a lot of making up to do once he gets to know of the happenings.
Geet as usual fell short of words listening to Maan shouting.
Its not all that easy to handle MSK's temper.
Its going to be a long process for Geet.
Her trust in Maan which was slowly building up seems to be shaken again by the whole series of events.
She still tried explaining to her parents which was a good move.
They all seem to be helpless in front of Daarji.
Precap sounds pretty scary.
Cant imagine Geet who is already hurt facing Daarji's fury.
Waiting for the next part.


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Posted: 14 years ago
😭😭Wahhh both updates today made me cry!!!!😭😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
emotional part but a good one.. hope this confusion sorts out soon.. already waiting for the next part di...
Ankita:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update. very sad maan kept quite and let them broke the engagement😭😭. why. poor geet didn't know anything and still called him. he made her cry tooo. precap darji gussa on geet. another heart breaking update. but i must say u did a very good job in writing and 👏👏 pls update soon

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