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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: euphoric

tu mujhe nahi pitegi mujhe pata hai😛

chal tu rajveer rakh le... main sujal😳😆😆


Rajveer ya sujal...tujhe jo chahiye woh tera..but Rajeev sirf mera😳☺️😛...samjhi...no compromise in that...😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

eshuuu mujhe jijz nahi dikh rahe hai...

tum ko tumhare dikh rahe hai???


haa handsome waala dikh raha hai...😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

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Edited by -jia- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
moi is ready!!
kise padhan hai meri besharmi ka next kissa!
hayy kitna ganda ganda likha hai maine
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Posted: 14 years ago
jiuuu soniii
khali posts se apni ginti mat badhaooo
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

moi is ready!!

kise padhan hai meri besharmi ka next kissa!
hayy kitna ganda ganda likha hai maine

jaldi update karo...mujhe pardhna hai😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
ohh shit shit shit!!!!!!!
maine kahi aur post kar diyaaa
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

ohh shit shit shit!!!!!!!

maine kahi aur post kar diyaaa


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Posted: 14 years ago

Before i start my update thanks guys for the warm response! 😳😳😳

Sooo sorry guys for the late update. Moi is kaan pakding!!😭😭😭

Was just hell busy with work n stuff!! And the Crazies n the Kaminis are the reason for not updating! They keep me soo busy that I don't get time to write only!😆😆😆😆😆

After another disastrous Maha-Bakwaas-Episode, I felt this was needed!! Why can't the CVs just understand the whole concept of a ME!! 4 mins of Maaneet in one hr??? 😡😡😡😡😡😡

Anyways enough of cribbing, let's start dreaming people'''mahiii😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

One more favor ' can u plz plz use your imagination a little here n ignore a very big loop hole!! 🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓

I know camping tents are supposed to be small, but for this OS can u imagine that this is like that Harry Potter n Goblet of Fire wala tent at the Quidditch world cup?? U know which magically expands inside'😉😉😉😉😉😉
don't throw jootis at me...just imagine yaar!😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

This update is dedicated to:

1. Our very own GURTI''''..wowww guys we won!!! Lets partyyy🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

for turning soo many of us into writers!!!😆😆😆😆
2. Nidhi ' for the awesome photos!!!!😳😳😳

3. Reni (leverne) ' she told me to use a transparent tent coz madame wanted to peek into it while Maaneet were doing their ahem ahem'.moi used her idea partially!!😈

4. Samata, Spandana, Priti, Annie, Sakhshi, Arti'..my Crazies for loving me n accepting me!! 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

5. Shika (do I need a reason) I'm sure Evil Cinders is gonna kill me for this!! But no giving dhamkis ok!!!!

PART 4:

Maan broke off the kiss as he felt the rain drops on his face n started pulling Geet towards the tent. "Geet chalo, nahi to tum bheeg jaogi" Geet freed her hands from Maan's grip and started twirling in the rain, enjoying the sensation of the rain on her face. "Naihiii...Mujhe barsaat me bheegna hai'.!" She spread her hands in the air n felt the season's first rain wash away her worries.

"It's an altogether different feeling Maan'.aap ko bhi try karna chahiye'" Maan yelled "Geeet" and glared at her, but Geet gave him the royal ignore and continued her innocent rain dance. Maan shook his head in defeat as he watched Geet, her beautiful face all gleaming in the rain, her lips smiling widely. Her eyes had a childish innocence, her actions a bewitching sensuality. This contrasting woman-child image intrigued Maan.

Lost in gazing at his Mishti, his eyes caught sight of a rain drop as it fell on her right eye, trailing down her nose, her lips, it remained for a few precarious seconds on her lower lip before venturing further down her neck and then lost in the valley between her ******. He was becoming aroused just looking at her and he felt jealous as hell of the drop of water as he himself yearned to follow the path it had just taken. Laughing at his plight, he "The Maan Singh Khurrana" jealous of a drop of water!

Unable to reign in his desires, he moved towards Geet, who was enjoying herself totally oblivious to how her saree had become nearly see thru and was plastered to her body making it seem as if she was almost n***. Her skin gleamed through the wet material hugging her body prominently showing off all her lush curves. However, her husband was not blind to this vision of loveliness in front of his eyes. The fire n ice combination would have burned even a saint, and Mr. Maan Singh Khurrana was definitely no saint!

Reaching his wife, he grabbed her hand and pulled her towards himself. Geet landed flush against his chest with a jolt as her innocent reverie was broken. Realizing that her wet body was plastered against Maan and there wasn't even a millimeter of space between them, she tried to lever herself away from him. Maan was having none of it. He held her hands behind her back and pulled her closer if that was even possible. Get's breath locked in her throat, when she looked into his burning hot bedroom eyes and realized his intentions. She couldn't have moved even if she wanted to, not that she did! Her heart skipped a beat and breathing became well nigh impossible!

Seeing her submission in her eyes, Maan left her hands and moved his slowly up her back. His one hand touched a raindrop dancing at the end of her eyelash. He took it in his finger n tasted the essence of her skin. Geet felt a thousand fingers running down her spine looking at this innocent action!

Staring in her eyes n feeling her reaction to his proximity, Maan gently trailed his forefinger along her nose to her lips, parting them with his finger. Geet closed her eyes tightly as she felt his thumb invade the warm recesses of her mouth. His warm wet thumb evaded the warm crevices of her mouth leaving her panting for more. But before she cud close her mouth around it, he moved away and trailed his burning thumb down to her cleavage till the opening of her blouse! Geet clutched him tighter to remain upright otherwise she would have melted into a puddle right then n there! His finger inched further downwards, trailing lightly over her b***** just brushing against her n***** to teasingly play with the hook behind her back!

Geet waited to feel him undo her blouse but was surprised to feel his lips on her face, following the same path as his finger! He kissed her right eye lightly, lovingly! Giving the same treatment to the tip of her nose and her cheek.

He then raised his head to look at the flushed beauty lying in his arms waiting for him to claim her lips! On feeling his gaze on her, she opened her eyes which were molten pools of desire! Ignoring her quivering lips, he bit down hard on her neck, kissing her shoulder to soothe the marks of his teeth! Geet moaned with the bittersweet pain n pushed herself against his aroused body, wanting to feel him n soothe the restlessness she was feeling within.
He trailed the tip of his tongue from her collar bone down towards her cleavage, lining the edge of her blouse by his tongue making Geet shudder with the warmth left behind his trailing tongue! His lips moved over her b***** covered by the thin material, biting n nibbling her through the blouse.
Geet moaned in response and clutched his head to her; tighter, asking wordlessly for something even she didn't know what! Hearing her, he raised his head to look at her and met her complaining demanding eyes. He smirked knowingly and whispered huskily in her ears "What happened Geet? Dint u like your sazaa?"

Geet looked at him blankly and wondered what he is saying, as her thought processes had slowed down considerably due to Maan's fingers trailing erotic circles on her back n waist, teasing her hook again n again, threatening to tear it off but not doing anything of the sort! She blinked to clear her mind of its fogginess, and saw the mischief in his eyes, the knowing gloating look saying "It-is-payback-time!"

Thinking two can play at this game she decided to give her arrogant Pati a taste of his own medicine! "Kuch nahi Maan, I was just thinking that maybe I should return the favor!" and pulling herself on her tiptoes she cupped his face and started kissing Maan's eyes, cheeks, going towards his lips as if she is going to kiss them, at the last moment she pulled away and kissed the corner of his mouth. While her lips were working their magic on his face, her hands trailed away and were busy opening the buttons of his shirt and exploring his hard muscles, his picture perfect body! Her hands trailed over his torso, his smooth skin a pleasure to feel against her palms. His muscles rippled and contracted as her hand traced it lovingly. Not getting enough of him, she brushed her fingertips against his nipples causing him to shudder violently and moan in desire! Emboldened by her success, she laughed huskily and moved to his chest, placing kisses all over his exposed chest. "Geettt" Maan cud not stop himself from claiming her name. She looked up into his face with a seductive smile "Kya hua Maan? Don't u like me kissing you?" she asked innocently in a little baby voice, with a fake moue.
In reply, Maan pulled her up and crushed her to himself capturing her lips with his own. He kissed her deeply and thoroughly, as if he was parched for years and has finally found some sustenance. If their first kiss was loving and tender, this one was wild n hungry, releasing all their pent up emotions n feelings which they have both kept hidden for so long. Geet was equally demanding and they were finally meeting as equals. They had no sense of time or space. They had no idea how long they spent kissing n devouring each other in the rain, before they broke apart simultaneously to gulp in some much needed air.
Maan looked at Geet longingly and read the same desire in her eyes. He didn't need a second invitation. Gathering the wet n trembling figure of his wife in his arms, he started walking towards the tent without breaking the eyelock.

Their eyes saying all that needed saying. Their journey together flashed before their eyes, each remembering their first meeting, their fights, their forbidden feelings, their acceptance, their misunderstandings, their saath pheras, their baby, their pain n loneliness, their happiness n love''a shadow of pain crossed over their faces on remembering their Baby, but they accepted it as Babaji's will and smiled through their pain to walk forward and embrace this new life together that they had been blessed with!
As he entered the tent, he lowered her to the floor and zipped it up to lock away the outside world and cocoon them in their love and themselves. Geet looked around and stared in awe at the beautifully decorated tent. Roses were scattered on every available surface, some white n some red. There was a king size round bed laid out in the middle of the room, petals covered the entire bed and it had red and white pillows scattered everywhere. A multitude of jazzy silver ribbons engulfed it from all around shining in the light of the candles twinkling softly, adding their own glamorous allure to the setting. But what really caught her attention was the ceiling! Her eyes widened as she stared at the see-through transparent ceiling! She gazed at the night sky leaving her with the illusion that she is out in the open, under the sky gazing at the millions of stars who are present just to witness n grace their love! She blushed beet red at the thought of the heavens looking down on their union. The whole setting looked right out of an Arabian Night Storybook. Geet looked enquiringly at Maan who looked away nervously, waiting for Geet's reaction.
She again looked in awe at her surroundings and then at her husband who was not meeting her eyes. She smiled at her husband's uneasiness n asked softly "Ye sab aapne kiya?" A nod "Mere liye?" he looked at her trying to gauge her mood giving another nod. Geet looked at him lovingly and said in a tremulous voice "Maan aaj tak mere liye kisi ne itna nahi socha. Aur aap humesha mujhe ek shehzadi ki tarah treat karte ho. I feel like I am living a fairy tale. Aap meri ek khushi ke liye itna kuch karte hai, aur mai hu ke aapke liye'."

Maan gently interrupts "Geet tumhe maine pehle bhi kaha hai. Maan Singh Khurrana kisi aur ke liye kuch nahi karta. Ye sab mai apne liye kar raha hu. Because my happiness lies in your happiness Geet. Your one smile is like a balm to my soul, taking away all my troubles, all my old pains, all my emptiness. Your laughter is enough to make my world spin and my day to become brighter. Tumhare aankhon ki kashish se meri poori duniya roshni se bhar jaati hai. When you are in my arms, I feel as if I have engulfed the whole world within them! Tumhare aanchal me mere liye saathon zameen aur aasman samaye hai. Aur kuch dhoond ne ki ya pane ki chah hi nahi jab tak tum mere saath ho'.u complete me totally''I can't comprehend my life without u Geet! I just can't!"

The love in his words and the intense look on his face gave her a courage she didn't knew she had. Unknowingly her hands made their way towards his shoulders and slipped the open buttoned shirt down his arms. Her hands leaving a trail of fire on Maan's skin. She wasn't even aware what she was doing until she met his hot gaze. She saw the mischief, a hint of surprise and passion. Suddenly she was conscious of her actions and she turned around embarrassed at her bold move. She knew she wanted him like nobody else had wanted anybody. Her whole body shook with anticipation of her actions, for she knew what was to come next.

Maan noticed her quivering form and misinterpreting the reason for her shivers he suddenly became angry, "Geet tum meri baat kyu nahi sunti!! Maine kaha tha barsaat me mat bheego tumhe thand lag jayegi. Abhi jaldi se in geele kapdo ko badlo." He softly pushed Geet towards the fire burning in one corner.

Geet walked towards the fire which Maan indicated in a daze, blushing at her forwardness! Turning around, she sneaked a look at him trying to gauge his mood but his face was showing only worry for her well being. Taking a decision, she drew in a deep breath for courage, muttered "Madat karna Babaji!" and spoke softly "Suniye"

He turned to look at her on hearing her low huskily voiced word. It was his own guilty secret, how much he adored that word on Geet's lips! It reminded him of the first time she had publicly accepted their unknown-even-if-it-was-fake relationship.

Lost in his private reminiscing, he didn't notice Geet moving towards him till she was right in front of him. Clearing the catch in her throat, she added "Mujhe thand nahi lag rahi hai" while peeking at him from beneath her eyelashes, her desire visible in her eyes. Maan was startled at first and started to protest but then his eyes caught those of his wife's, they were telling him a different story. Her innocent eyes were shining with unquenched desire and love. They were baring her soul for him to read. Seeing Maan just gawking at her, Geet murmured a "Mai kya karu inka Babaji!! Inhe koi baat samajh kyu nahi aati. Aur ye daave karte rahte hai ke, Geet mai tumhare aakhen padh sakta hoon!" she ends in a shrill voice, looking up and complaining to her babaji, causing Maan to smile at her.

Gathering all the courage she could summon up, she turned to him and slid her hands over his body to entwine her hands at his nape and moved towards his lips.

Phew that's done!! I hope I met with your expectations this time!😳😳😳

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Edited by aashluvsmaan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: esha143


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😡😡😡😡 hasi aa rahi badi tujhe..
waise i finaaly saw jijz photo
hot hot hai jee😳😳😳

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