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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 14 years ago

Moushi wants to match janam kundali's of abhi and naina ,what if scene turns out to be like this..😉

Pandit comes to patwardhan house...Everyone is gathered in hall

Moushi; aayi ye panditji...(after all khatirdari), Moushi shows kundalis to pundit,(I wonder if naina have her kundali?)

Pandit (sees kundali ).;Wah.. indono ki jodi ne to bhagwan nee banaya...ye dono ekdoosre ke liye bane hai..dono hamesha saath rahenge aur bahut khush rahenge..in dono ko koyi alag nahi karsakta..

Everybody is happy (MM, ayi, abhi cartoon)😃, daksh😕as usual sad.,naina 😊

MM; Panditji ,ab kundali milgaye he to koi acha sa muhurat nikaliye engagement ke liye..

Pandit; kyu nahi.. jaroor..barso ka din bahut acha rahega...naina aur daksh ke saggai keliye❤️(Guys kundalis of abhi and daksh gets mixed up and moushi gives daksh's to pundit instead of abhi👏

😲Everybody shocked

MM; What are you saying punditji? daksh aur naina??..she takes kundali and finds out they are exchanged and gets abhi kundali

MM; sorry punditji..and gives abhi's kundali

Pundit; (after keen obesrvation)..I AM SORRY..these too kundali's don't match at all..If these two get married..anarth hojayega.😆

Again MM and ayi and others😲, abhi cartoon😭, daksh😃

Just at thought from my side.. anybody wants to continue this fiction part or make any changes.. u are welcome😉.Share ur views on this..

Edited by lucky.m - 14 years ago

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Neethu

@ntsindia

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Posted: 14 years ago

I read the same story a few weeks back (yah.. it is it "matching horoscopes" by storytellerSSBN posted on 23 May 2011 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/sapnon-se-bhare-naina/1689694/matching-horoscopes )... I remember so.. anyways.. it is superb!!!!!

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mszen90

@mszen90

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Posted: 14 years ago

haha your fiction is quiet funnY AND very inresting..believe me or not i would be very happy if ur fiction come out true...! 😃 good job..!😊

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ntsindia
I read the same story a few weeks back (yah.. it is it "matching horoscopes" by storytellerSSBN posted on 23 May 2011 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/sapnon-se-bhare-naina/1689694/matching-horoscopes )... I remember so.. anyways.. it is superb!!!!!

Hey, I went through the link you gave..its similar story line given by stoyryteller ssbn, ..i didn't go through this before.. any ways no probs...its just like I added dialogues to that idea😊..hope ssbn storyteller don't mind..

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Neethu

@ntsindia

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Hey, I went through the link you gave..its similar story line given by stoyryteller ssbn, ..i didn't go through this before.. any ways no probs...its just like I added dialogues to that idea😊..hope ssbn storyteller don't mind..

Friend, don't worry, I just mentioned.. thats all. I am happy that you both think exactly similarly... very nice!!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Hey, I went through the link you gave..its similar story line given by stoyryteller ssbn, ..i didn't go through this before.. any ways no probs...its just like I added dialogues to that idea😊..hope ssbn storyteller don't mind..

i dont mind at all, gr8 minds think alike