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Posted: 14 years ago
Awww...mehak that was a Luvlyyy OS...☺️
Just Luvd it...😳👏🤗
@Bushra Happyyy B'day Dear...😳🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow Kinza, it was just too lovely... It made me blush too.. :)
I love the beauty of Arrange marriages... :)

Happy Birthday Bushra :)
may God bless you both :)
Take care
Keep smiling :)

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow it was really lovely
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW!!

Like really Wow, Kinza!! 🤗

You have a penchant for soft romance. And i lurve that about you. Its not everyday i like to read soft romance. But, I would never miss your one shots.

They are beautiful. And they have this thing. You know..What they call it..the purity and simplicity. Sigh. BEAUTIFUL!!!

and please don't forget to PM me. Please, please? :)

Love,
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Posted: 14 years ago
kinza aweosme OS loved it alottt plz do write more

thx alot for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Happy Birthday Bushra !!
and Kinza superb OS !
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Posted: 14 years ago
Happy Birthday Bushra
Really a beautiful OS dear
the way u show Mayur relation is so sweet
Thanks for Pm
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
another exclusive piece of writing 4m u...loved every bit of it to the fullest...do come up with another concept 4m magic series...another os can work 4 the timebeing..😛i m really getting mesmerized by ur writing hunny..
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Posted: 14 years ago
hello sweets!! .. thank u so much for the lovely response and thank u so much for wishing buhsra, all of your wishes mean a lot.

Ok so this is something i wanted to right from a long time, but wasn't able to put in words, even today i am not satisfied, but thought of posting, i WISH we could see this in MJHT!! ..

MAYUR OS
Third perspective - Shilpa Sharma


It was a normal Wednesday morning and switching off the alarm, and saying my morning prayers, I came out of my room, I had to make breakfast for my son, and now a new addition to my family, my daughter ' in 'law, or more appropriately my daughter, Nupur.

My son got married in such a hurry that sometimes i think maybe I am still in a dream and will wake up anytime, but it was not like that, this dream of a perfect home was going to last forever.

"Nupur!", I was surprised to see her already standing in the kitchen, with the breakfast preparations almost done.

"Good morning maa!!", she wished me in her usual joyous voice and hurried for a hug, which I reciprocated in less than a second, "morning beta, kitchen main kia kar rahi ho?"
I asked in a slight strict tone and she smiled, "kuch nahi maa, hum sab ka nastha bana rahi hon, she proudly switched off the stove, "main ne gajr ka halwa banaya hai", she said joyfully, but somewhere I could sense her nervousness, which made my heart melt.

She is so innocent, just like an angel, I thought and headed to the stove, "hmmm, khusboo tu bohat achi a arahi hai", I exaggerated the compliment and saw what I expected, - the nervous look turning into a confident glint. "sachi?, BY GOD!, main tu itna dar gayi rahi thin a k kia batao, taste kar k batiye na", she was took out a spoonful for me and fed me, and there I realized that my initial comment was not at all exaggerated, "kaisa hai maa?", she asked as I could see her huge shiny eyes filling with a slight fear as they were searching my face for the answer and as they got the answer through my smile, they relaxed.

"bohat bohta acha hai, God bless beta", this time my compliment was genuine and I kissed her forehead, her first attempt in cooking had really took my heart , "waise tumhare pati dev nahi uthey abhi tak?', I asked and immediately saw a pink color creeping up her cheeks, "nahi maa, uth gaye hain..

"utha gaye hain ..", I was amused to hear her talk like this about mayank, when once she used to address him as monkey mayank and sadu ' wedding surely changes things.

"maa!!,", she whined and controlled her smile, " main dekh k ati hon mayank ko", she rushed out of the kitchen and I could just silently bless her.

She was surely the one responsible for bringing smiles on my son's face. The vibrancy she brought with her was something I was unable to inject in mayank.

Arranging the dishes, I couldn't help comparing mayank before and after he met Nupur a huge difference I thought. This girl made life beautiful and complete for mayank, but hang on Shilpa Sharam, this is not the only reason you love her. This is an additional reason, the foremost reason that you love Nupur is NUPUR HERSELF.

YES!",

I reasserted the thing in my mind. The first day I met her, her innocence and a lot like-me nature attracted my heart. The jubilee she brought with her was something I hadn't seen in ages with anyone. She was surely a blessing. Someone with whom joy walks like a shadow.

Arranging the table for breakfast, I started waiting for both of them, obviously nibbling on the halwa on and off, but they both were taking so long.

I decided to remind them that the sun is up and they shouldn't be romancing at this time when they both are getting late for their college, but I forgot that they were MAYANK and NUPUR, as I was about to knock their door, I heard their voices.

"tumhari waja se meri notebook nahi mil rahi hai!!", mayank shouted and Nupur stamped her feet, "haan!!, sab ghalti meri waja se hi hoti hai na !!, aur tum tu ho hi perfectionist, khud chezain nahi sanbhal sakte??"

"khud hi sanbhal raha tha, per tumhain pata nahi kahan se perfect wife bane ka bhoot a gaya and u took my things saying, "main rakh deti hin", he imitated the last bit in nupur's voice which made her more furious,

"dekho mayank!!, don't imitate, mil jaye gi, asmaan sar pe uthane wali kaunsi baat hai??", she said and started searching the room, I could hear her smacking things and mumbling.

I just couldn't help smiling standing outside the door, "they'll patch up in less then 10 minutes I thought, and was about to knock their door when again my hands stopped

"Nupur..", mayank's soft voice had me in surprise, "u wrote this?",

I could barely hear him now, maybe he is talking in a whisper, and which means romance has started. I chuckled and knocked their door and heard them gasping.

" gi maa", nupur asked with a displaced breath and ofcourse my mayu smiled a bit and then sought refuge in his notebook, "hmm, this means they found the notebook and maybe Nupur has written something romantic for him on it", I thought in my head, but decided not to say this, instead reminded them, "jaldi karo beta late ho jao gey"

"gi", she barely said and mayank still had his eyes fixed on the book. I closed the door again and heard them saying.

"mayank!!"

"Nupur!!"

"SAB TUMHARI WAJA SEY!"

I just couldn't help smiling, "God bless them!!", this was all my heart said

Edited by Fantasia. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
even i so wish we could see them together. the perfect family. mayank sharma and his two women. sigh.

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