Um, and reserve whatever too.
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You know, A? I do not like to make reserves. So to speak, I am kind of useless when I have to edit them, altogether. Anyhow, I read it again. And here is my official two cent business.
First, you have to learn not to be sorry about what you write. Technically, you are not sorry. For, we discussed the parts you like in here last night. Eventually, you can get prone to a devastating syndrome of despising your skill, and not merely underestimating yourself. So, why don't you just get a life?
Mayank is a cracker and Mayank is a cracker. As I told you, I did skip the Amitabh Bacchan part which I requested you to scratch. Besides that, there was absolutely nothing that did not give me the AYNIL feel, so way to go, beta.
By the way, 'If we were to compare Mayank, I am the only thing that's actually male in you. So, it would be safer if we didn't go there.' is devastatingly hilarious. Mayank needs to man up, big time. We dun owe anything yet to his conscience's gallant, though.
And 'Man, this guy was disrespectful, impertinent and all the other synonyms.' is an innovation punch to deliver when you endeavor to cover up your scratchy vocabulary. And nothing shall be spoken further in light of who's vocabulary this may concern. Perhaps, you've got this style of penning down things, reminiscent of the way we folks talk in real. Yours have a realistic approach, even if you etch typical stories out. I appreciate it, wholesomely.
Apart from Mayank, even Samrat needs some insight. His wrap-up line launches so much chauvinism. Heck, it is not the man exclusively, women lurve alcohol too, personally. Ha! Samrat is the shielding jock in here, like a brother who does love Nupur back whilst her false belief in only Mayank's reciprocal of her feeling. It is sad, not her condition but principally, you, and that you haven't set things right with Nupur yet. You strongly need to get a life.
Enough said, give it the benefit of doubt, or try to find my harsh comments on you motivating, and figure out that you're really well at this. Doesn't mean you dun need to get a life, though. 😃
P.S. I will make the banner soon, by the way. =)
K
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