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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

whn will u update dear?

i'm sooo waiting😍

Sorry still have to write the part down lol
I have some ideas but just have to write them down now lol
so maybe by end of this weekend?
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey guys...here is the most waited Bachelor party...you guys might kill me but umm this is part one of the party...more to come in next part as soon as I write it lol..I wanted you guys to have some fun with this now...for the next part all I can say is 😳😳 (so keep guessing lol)

Chapter 45: Part 1
Vicky, Adi and Arjun came to Maan's office...Maan who was busy looking through some files looked at all of them staring at him with big smiles on their faces..."why are they looking at me like this? Maan you need to escape it looks like they are up to something..." He clears his throats...

Maan: If you guys are done staring at me...will you excuse me I have some important meeting to attend...(in his usual MSK mode... "run as soon as you get to the door..." he starts walking toward the door when Vicky blocks the door...Maan looks at him with anger..) what the hell Vicky...i have to go to a meeting...

Vicky: sorry but you are not going anywhere today...

Maan: What do you mean?

Arjun: What we mean is that we are going to kidnap you (Adi laughs...Maan looks at him with anger which makes him shut up...)

Maan: Don't forget you guys are messing with Maan Singh Khurana...I won't leave you guys...

Vicky: Ya ya you can do whatever you want after..but for now you are coming with us...guys come on...(Arjun comes from behind holds his hands, Vicky holds Maan's feet...and Adi opens the door...they all carry him out of his office..while all the staff looks on with shock...)

Maan (shouts): I WON'T LEAVE YOU GUYS FOR THIS!!! Let me go right now...Adi let me go or else you will lose your job...(Adi who was holding him from the waist lets go of him immediatley...and quietly follows Vicky and Arjun...)

Vicky: Maan what do you eat? You are so heavy...

Maan: Vicky let me go...(he was trying to move his body out of their grip) at least tell me where you guys are taking me?e

Arjun: It's a surprise...just relax bhai...you will like it...

Maan: You guys are lucky that i am getting married and I am letting you guys do this but as soon as I am done..I won't leave you guys...

Vicky (laughs): by then I will go back to America...(All puts Maan in the car...Adi goes to one side of the backside while Vicky on the other side to make sure he doesn't run away...Arjun comes and puts a blindfold on Maan...)

Maan: I take that back...I will def. KILL you guys as soon as I am free...

Adi: We will see sir...who kills whom

After a while they stop the car and gets Maan out...they carry Maan inside again...makes him sit on a chair and ties his hands... "where am I? where is everyone? I don't hear anything anymore...if Geet is behind this then I won't leave her..she does love to play pranks..." Arjun! Vicky! Adi! (he shouts...) where are you guys? (Suddenly his blindfold is removed...it took a minute for Maan's eyes to adjust...he was in some kind of a hall decorated, the lights were dimmed, there was a bar on one side of the bar...) "what the hell...where am i?" He sees Vicky and Arjun come in front of him...

Vicky: Welcome to your bachelor party...we all hope you enjoy this day before you tie yourself down with one person and suffer for the rest of your life...

Maan: Don't forget you are married as well...

Vicky (raises his hand dramatically): Don't remind me please...for tonight I am not married...I am single and ready to mingle...

Maan: Remind me to mention this to Meera when I see her...

Vicky: ha the girls don't even know about this bachelor...let's keep this between us now shall we...and by the way if we get caught then you will get caught too...so for now...enjoy...

Maan ("they got a point...just enjoy Maan..don't think so much..." smiles): how can I if I am tied up...

Vicky: now that's the Maan I know...guys (Arjun and Adi) let him go...(they untie him...) now sit back and enjoy...(Vicky signals female bartender...she comes and serves Maan a drink...Maan takes the drink) Alright then...let's get this party started!!!! (he yells...Vicky goes on top of the stage followed by Arjun and Adi...the music starts playing...some girls dressed in mini skirt and mini blouse comes out from behind...) put the song...(Maan sits back...)

Vicky starts singing while joined in my a girl dancing around him...

Zor ka jhatka haye zoron se laga, haan laga
shaadi ban gayi umrqaid ki saza, haan saza
(Maan spits out his drink when he hears the song...and looks at Vicky who was into the song)
ye hai udasi, jaan ki pyaasi,
shaadi se achcha tum le lo faansi
laakhon dukhon ki hoti hai ye wajah, haan wajah
Zor ka jhatka haye zoron se laga, haan laga
shaadi ban gayi umrqaid ki saza, haan saza..

jiski shaadi par jaana usko itna samjhana
na kar shaadi, ye barbadi, phir na pachhtana
haan mauka hai pagle, shaadi se bachle,
samjha le dil jo ye ko machle
shaadi ke mandap se khud ko tu bhaga
("yeh kaisi bachelor party hai? Dara raha hai ya sumja raha hai?" Iss Vicky toh main maar doon ga...")
Zor ka jhatka haye zoron se laga, haan laga
shaadi ban gayi umar kaid ki saza, haan saza..
(Maan gets up angry and holds Vicky's collor...)

Vicky (puts his hands up while laughing): relax I thought I should give it a try to see if you would listen...you should be happy being a married man I am advising you...(he gets out of his hold...) ok now that you are calm now...guys (AA) go ahead...(Vicky makes Maan sit down and ties his hands...)

Maan: what are you doing?

Vicky: in case if you want to kill one of us again...we can't trust you anymore

Maan: what about my drink?

Vicky: Don't worry I got that covered...(he signals one of the girls over...who gives Maan his drink..Vicky sits right next to Maan...and smiles...when AA starts dancing...)

Ek kunwaara, phir gaya maara
Phas gaya dekho, ye bechaara
(Maan again spits out his drink and looks at Vicky and AA with deadly eyes)
Do din ki hai ye chaandni
Phir kaari kaari raat hai
Tu maan jaa dulhe raaja
(Adi comes and pleads in front of him...Vicky gets up and starts dancing...)

Aaj hasle tu kal rona padega
Sukh chain tujhe sab khona padega
(Vicky acts the with a girl...)
Jab woh kahegi uthh jaayega tu
Jab woh kahegi tujhe sona padega
Karni hongi ghulaamiyaan
(he presses one of the girls legs...)
Teri hongi salaamiyaan
Aa laut ke bandhu aaja

(Maan laughed at the guys...but deep inside he wanted to kill them... "pretend Maan so that they open your hands...you can kill them later...")
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Nandani comes with confused expression on her face and sits with Meera, Gee, Pinky and Dadima...all notice her face

Geet: what happened Bhabi...you look confused?

Nandani: what is Bachelor party? (All were shocked hearing this)

Meera: why are you asking Bhabi?

Nandani: woh Tejji was telling me that Vicky asked him to come to some kind of bachelor party...

Geet: bachelor party? for what?

Dadima: You forgot? The boys must've thrown Maan a bachelor party

Meera: That is weird...Vicky didn't tell me anything about a party

Pinky: yeah Adi didn't tell me either...

Dadima: You guys are impossible...why would they say it...obviously they are going to have some kind of dancers there...that's why they hid it from you guys...

Geet: so that means Maan must've known about this as well...

Meera: ohh Vicky he is in so much trouble...I know he has to be the mastermind behind this...

Pinky: Aur Adi..he is so dead

Dadima: what will I do with you girls...over there your guys are dancing with random girls and you guys are worried about a petty thing...this is the time to show them who you guys really are so that they dont' forget ever again

All: What should we do?

Dadima: come around me and I will tell you what to do...
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Edited by mrs.msk - 14 years ago
Krishnaluv94 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Haha. Waiting for the dhamaka!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Maan ain't gonna survive Geet's wrath is he 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Gr8 update::
Lol at the song choices of songs they are singing
Haha maan is just acting sweetly so he can get his hands untied
Ooh they all better watch out now cuz the girls are in action
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lolzzz...this is so funny...loving the party already...
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
i think the guys r going to b in trouble especially maan...
probably when geet comes he will b dancing with a gal and geet is gonna kill him then and there...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice prt.guys r so dead,msk nahi chodega
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Posted: 14 years ago
wat??????????????????? maan was kidnapped for bachelor party😆...nice...
looking fwd...

rsroopali thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowww awesomeee
luved ittt
wonder wt the girls will do

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