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Posted: 14 years ago
haha poor maan,... i wonder what will geet do to him now 🤣
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VERY AMAZING UPDATE 👏
WONDER WHAT GEET WILL DO TO MAAN BECHARA MAAN
UPDATE SOON WAITING AND THANKS FOR PM
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omg...i hope the girls see allof them surrounded by girls...n give h
them a good beeating...lol...
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Ok simi tht was hilarious..let me think from GEET POV and list some punishmnets
1.Maan on couch on Wedding night
2. Maan gets only Pasta...imagine that..woh bhi geet ke haath ka..hehe
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved da update
do continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 45 (1)
very funny...
his bachelor's party and the selection of songs were hilarious...
waiting for the girls to gate crash this party...
cont soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing...

they all r dead...😆..in the next part...

continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey guys!

Thank you for your wonderful comments...here is part II of the bachelor party!!!!😆

Enjoy!

Part 46: Part II

Vicky got up and stopped Adi and Arjun...: ok ok guys let's stop this kidding around..now let's get the real show started...

Maan: ohh god what more do I have to endure here...("just untie my hands and I will show you fun...")

Vicky: believe me you will love it...

Maan: I don't care...I want to go home now..I have seen enough

Vicky: Maan come on don't be a spoilt sport...at least do it for me...

Maan: and why should I?

Vicky: because I never had a bachelor party..so I am fulling my wishes through you...its called killing two birds with one stone

Maan: because of you I will get in trouble...you know how Geet is

Vicky: how can I forget.she is crazy...

Arjun: Vicky what if the girls find out about this party? (kind of scared)

Vicky: Don't worry about that...they won't find out a thing..as long as this stays between the four of us...right Maan?

Maan ("enjoy as much as you can..but I will not get in trouble becuase of you..and especially with Geet...I don't know what she will do when she finds out...but then again...(thinking) I am sure she will be ok with bachelor party...she is modern right...but what if she is not ok and goes all crazy on me...she is already half crazy what will happen when she is fully crazy?...but then again I do like her when she is mad...its more attractive...what should I do? ...ok how about this...I will enjoy myself considering it is my last time..and then I will kill them later...ok yeah and then I will tell Geet that I was held captive against my will...and the whole office will be my witnesses...ohh yeah Maan Singh Khurana you are smart...") umm ok yeah...let's enjoy fellas...PARTY!!!!!

Vicky (gulps down a drink) Now that's what I am talking about...guys untie him...(he goes on top of the stage) now to help us celebrate with us..I invited a special person...ladies...(talking to the extra dancers and led the fellas to the corner of the room...different colored pillows were placed all arond the corners...they led the guys there..all took their seats on the floor leaning against the pillows...while bartenders served all of them drinks...a girl comes in the middle of the room...with a veil on her face...)


Please do read between the song lines in black😳 and imagine the girl dancing the same way as in the video 😆

Vicky gets and removes her dupatta...he caresses her face...
Saaki Se Mohabbat Hoti Hai
Har Roz, Shikaayat Hoti Hai
Peene Ko Mere Peena Na Kaho
Yunhi Toh Ibaadat Hoti Hai
(Maan and everyone claps as Vicky joins them back...)


(Woh Sharaabi Kya Sharaabi, Jo Nashe Mein Na Rahe) - 2
The waitresses serve all of them drinks except for Arjun who looks at all of them shaking his head...
Woh Sharaabi Kya Sharaabi, Aise Jo Tauba Kare
Woh Sharaabi Kya Sharaabi, Dil Mein Jiske Gham Na Ho
Loot Gaya Samjho Sharaabi Paas Jiske Ham Na Ho
Vicky starts singing again...as the girl comes close to him...while Maan looks in disbelief at him...he takes out a phone and records Vicky.."you are so dead"
( Oh Saaki Saaki Re Saaki Saaki
Aa Paas Aa, Rahe Na Jaaye Koyi Khwaahish Baaki ) - 2

The girl comes closer to Maan and pours him drink...
( Woh Sharaabi Kya'Sharaabi Paas Jiske Ham Na Ho )
Maan gets up and joines her...Vicky and everyone cheers him...Arjun mouth drops open...
( Oh Saaki' Na Jaaye Koyi Khwaahish Baaki ) - 2

She takes out her lengha revealing a mini skirt underneath and her top off reavaling a mini haulter...Adi's jaw fells open...she goes near Adi and dances around him...
Ishq Ki Galiyon Mein Na Jaana, Ishq Bada Badnaam Hai
Vicky pulls her closer to him...she sits on him lap...
Ishq Toh Mera Khuda Hai, Aashiq Mera Naam Hai..Ho'
Ho..I.Shq Ki Galiyon Mein Na Jaana, Ishq Bada Badnaam Hai
Ishq Toh Mera Khuda Hai, Aashiq Mera Naam Hai
She lies on top of all three guys...
Aashiqui Ke Har Qadam Pe, Husna QatlEAam Hai
Eh Aashiqui Mein Jaan Lootaana Aashiqon Ke Kaam Hai
Maan leans back on his seat while the girl dances in front of him...
( Oh Saaki'Na Jaaye Koyi Khwaahish Baaki ) - 2
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Meanwhile while the guys are enjoying themselves to the fullest...the girls arrive at the place...they were shocked to see Maan, Adi and Vicky dancing with the girl...

Meera: Geet I wish we had brought some weapons with us...I want to kill Vicky right now..look at him..how he is enjoying himself with that that...

Geet: You and me both...don't forget what we have to do...we have to teach all of them a lesson...

Pinky: You both are right...Adi..I thought he was simple..but today he opened my eyes...wait till I beat him up black and blue...

Geet: Don't worry...first thing first..we have to call Arjun here...he will help us

Meera: What if Arjun tells them...

Geet (smirks): I am sure he won't do that...(she dials Arjun's number)

Meera: what if he doesn't have his cell phone with him

Pinky: One thing about Arjun bhai is that he always has his phone with him no matter what..that's his life...

Geet: sshh he picked up...Arjun its Geet..come outside right now...yeah we are outside of the hall...ok bye...(she hangs up and smirks...) he is coming guys...

Arjun comes and is shocked to see the trio: um umm what are you guys doing here...(scared and nervous)

Geet: That's not the point...now listen to us carefully..we won't repeat ourselves..if you want to live...then I suggest you help us...(he shakes his head...after a while when Geet explains the plan...) got it?

Arjun: Yes...

Geet: good now go..and make sure you leave...we will handle all three...(all three laugh...Arjun runs inside..."god help Maan, Vicky and Adi...they are so dead today...")
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Back at the party...the girls take Maan, Vicky and Adi slowly and leads them into three rows of chairs...Vicky smiles at all of them...while Maan tries to determine what is happening...

Maan: What are you guys doing...(as the girls start tying up the guys hands behind the chair...the girl closes Maan's mouth with her finger..and shakes her head no...)

Vicky: Maan relax am sure it's part of their act...although I never told them to do this...I like it..

Maan: Saale tu toh marega aur mujhe bhi saath me lejayega

Vicky: Of course us friends stick together right...(winks at him)

Maan: Vicky have you no shame? you are married for god's sake

Vicky: Correction..I am married everyother day except for today...its my day off thanks to you..(he winks...Maan shakes his head...)

Adi (scared): Wh wh wh what are they going to do now?

Vicky: Adi...Adi..Adi relax will you..maybe they have another performance for us...(the lights go off...Arjun uses this opportunity to run out of there...)

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bV6eClc4ITc&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]

(Guys remember all of them singing at the same time and dancing like Raveena in the video)

The music starts off...they see three girls in formal pants with black jacket with their backs towards them...all of them were happy...the girls slowly start moving their hips...then slowly they turned around...all the guys were shocked...their throat went dry as they all moved in sync...
Yeh Raat Yeh Raat
Jali Ki Chipkali Raat
Yeh Raat
(All the guys looked at one another...then quickly focused their eyes back to their respective women...)
Kadi Aur Kombdi Ki Raat
(All of them seperated a little and started dancing)
Na Ugli Hi Jaye Na Nigli Hi Jaye
Yeh Kali Zehrili Raat
Pal Pal Balkhaati Pal Pal Uljaati
Palke Jhapakti Yeh Raat
Sannate Ki Sij Pe Soye
Saap Si Sarakti Raat
(The guys didn't blink once...girls smile and winks at the boys...all of them forgot how to swollow and how to blink...)
Yeh Raat Yeh Raat
Jali Ki Chipkali Raat
Yeh Raat
Kadi Aur Kombdi Ki Raat
Yeh Raat

The girls went back in stage slowly...turned with a smile..slowly they took their jackets off and threw at the guys...revealing a white shirt with ties...then they took their ties off...the other dancers...puts a partition between the guys...
Yeh Kali Zehrili Raat
Palke Jhapakti Yeh Raat
Saap Si Sarakti Raat
Kali Kali Kali Yeh Raat

(Just imagine Meera and Pinky doing the same thing as Geet...)

Geet goes near Maan and touches his face..she leans closer to him...and gently brushes her lips against his...Maan leans forward to kiss her but Geet smiles and pulls back...gently pulling his shirt...she opens few of her buttons slowly starting from the bottom working her way to the top...she smiles and starts walking back...
Veeraana Veeraana Hai Veeraana
Dil Ko Lakh Basa Le Yeh Deewana
Veeraana Veeraana Hai Veeraana
Dil Ko Lakh Basa Le Yeh Deewana
Ujhdi Ujhdi Rehte Hai Dil Saari
Veeraano Se Basta Hai Veeraana

(She goes few feet away from Maan..and opens up her top...slowly revealing a red top underneath...Maan almost fell back seeing the top...but he managed to balance himself...not wanting to miss anything)
San Karke Marti Hai Boom Karti Hai Kali Kodyali Raat
Yeh Raat Yeh Raat
Jali Ki Chipkali Raat
Yeh Raat
Kadi Aur Kombdi Ki Raat
Yeh Raat
She turns around and gives Maan a glimpse of her bare back...Maan gulps down hard...Geet puts her shirt back on...
Na Ugli Hi Jaye Na Nigli Hi Jaye
Yeh Kali Zehrili Raat
Pal Pal Balkhaati Pal Pal Uljaati
She takes out her shirt..completely...
Palke Jhapakti Yeh Raat
Sannate Ki Sij Pe Soye
Saap Si Sarakti Raat
Yeh Raat Yeh Raat
(She goes near Maan and wraps her shirt around his neck..she rips Maan's shirt revealing his abs...and feels his chest...as Maan tries to free his hands...she moves down and removes his shoes and socks...he looks at with confusion but at the same time getting excited.)

Abhi Abhi Raat Badi Tezaabi
Gir Na Jaye Haath Se Chand Rakabi
Abhi Abhi Raat Badi Tezaabi
Gir Na Jaye Haath Se Chand Rakabi
She slowly moves slolwy in front of him...
Doob Rahe Hai Sare Gul Kinare
Umad Umad Ke Raat Aayi Sailaabi
Geet takes out her pants..revealing a mini shorts underneat...Maan eyes pop open seeing her like this...she sits on his lap...caressing his face and giving him slow gental kisses on his face making him crazy wanting for more...she gets up after seeing her affect on Maan
Kholti Badan Par Bolti Badan Par
Jalti Ubalti Raat
Yeh Raat Yeh Raat
Jali Ki Chipkali Raat
Yeh Raat
Kadi Aur Kombdi Ki Raat
Yeh Raat

She comes back to Maan..takes out a scissor and rips his pants from the bottom...she smiles at Maan..while he looks at her shocked wanting to hold her even more...
Na Ugli Hi Jaye Na Nigli Hi Jaye
Yeh Kali Zehrili Raat
Pal Pal Balkhaati Pal Pal Uljaati
Palke Jhapakti Yeh Raat
She unties his hands...Maan instentily gets up and tries to hug Geet..but she holds his hands..she smirks...
Sannate Ki Sij Pe Soye
Saap Si Sarakti Raat
Yeh Raat Yeh Raat
Geet bends down and pulls his pants down...Maan looks at her shocked...he was now standing with boxers from the bottom...Geet stands up and takes his ripped shirt off
Yeh Kali Zehrili Raat
Palke Jhapakti Yeh Raat
Saap Si Sarakti Raat
Kali Kodyali Yeh Raat

She takes his shoes and other clothings with her as she dances few feet away from Maan...and disappears backstage...the lights go on..the partition was removed by the dancers...Vicky, Adi and Maan look at one another in similar situation and screams...

All: What happend? where are they? Geet...Meera...Pinky..(all yell at the same time of their respective girls...then one of the dancers comes up to them trying to hold her laugher and gives Maan a note and leaves from there...Vicky and Adi runs up to Maan...to see what the note said..)

I hope you all three enjoy the rest of the nights with no clothes on...Get home safely...I wonder how you guys will get home without a car, a phone and most importantly with no clothes...Don't even bother calling any of the drivers for a ride..they are under strict orders of Dadima...

P.S. Vicky for two weeks enjoy sleeping on the sofa and try not to talk to me as much as you can..it will be better for you...believe me...(Vicky gulps down hard hearing that...Maan smirks)

Adi tujhe to main khud mill kar dekh loon gi (he looks at them with fear)

Aur Maan...shaadi hone do...toh main tujhe mazza chakati hoon (he looks at Vicky with anger)

Have fun boys!

Maan (looks at Vicky): I TOLD YOU THIS IS A BAD IDEA...NOW SEE WHAT YOU DID!!

Vicky: how would I know they would find out...

Adi: now what..I am scared...

Maan: shut up adi...this is all your guys fault...you guys wanted bachelor party right..now there you go...we have it...I got in trouble for no reason

Vicky: ohh please like you didn't enjoy it...we all saw you dancing with a girl...

Maan: who would believe you? I have proof of you...I have you recorded (he smirks)

Vicky: ohh and you think I don't? I knew you were gonna do something liek this...so I made sure to record you too when you were dancing...(Maan looks at him with anger)

Adi: he he he (he laughs)

Both: You too Adi...

Meanwhile the girls were enjoying their fights...they were trying so hard to control their laughters...

Meera: let's make a bet who will punch whom first

Geet: I think Maan will start first..this should be interesting to watch...Pinky you have a camera ready?

Pinky: Of course...this will stay with them forever...

Both Meera and Geet: you have no idea...(all three watches the entertainment in front of them)

Maan: give me the phone...and delete it...

Vicky: No why should I? So that you can show Meera my video? I don't think so

Maan: Vicky do as I say..we are in this situation because of you...give it to me or else

Vicky: or else what? what are you going to do? (comes closer to Maan...Maan punches him on the face..Vicky stubbles back and falls on the floor.while Adi goes behind a chair to hide from them...Vicky gets up and punches Maan...both held each other and started fighting...like wrestlng...Adi gets up and decides to stop the two but ends up getting punched by accident on the face...Adi gets mad and jumps on the guys as well to fight...the girls were laughing and recording all of this...after a while all three of them lay on the floor tired with brusies on their face and body...Maan gets up

Maan: we can continue this later..we need to decide how to get home now

Vicky: I am not leaving in my boxers...

Adi: me either...(Maan looks around trying to find something...he sees curtains..he gets an idea and rips the curtains up...and brings back to Vicky and Adi)

Maan: here..tie this like a dhoti...that way we can go

Vicky: I don't know how to tie a dhoti

Maan: how hard can it be...(he picks up a curtain) here just tie it around your waist like a saree and just tie the knots at the end...(he does it...but Maan couldn't move as he wrapped it too tight...Vicky and Adi laugh at him...Maan takes it out and ties it around him again loosly..Vicky and Adi follow the same...)

Vicky: there...ok now we can go home...

Adi (scared): what will I tell my parents when they see me like this...

Vicky: tell them you had a little accident at work (laughs...)

Maan: guys enough of the jokes..lets go before something else happens...(when they were leaving...) guys wait a minute..where is Arjun? (all of them realzied Arjun wasn't there..they looked around...)

Vicky: he was here when we were getting tied up and after that I didn't see him

Adi: Do you think..

Maan: he was the one..

Vicky: that informed the girls? (completed each other's sentences...realizationg dawned upon them...)

All three: YOU ARE DEAD ARJUN!! (they all left with whatever dignity they had left...)

P.S. I hope you guys got some maaneet moment..as well as some laughter of the day

Precap: Haldi Ceremony...

One question: does the wedding happen the same day as Haldi? Sorry I don't know much about weddings...😆
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Link to: Chapter 47
Edited by mrs.msk - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yayy me first
Awesome update::
Haha loved the girls revenge🤣🤣laughing all the way through
Geet was quite a seducer,,poor boys wat a huge price they have to pay for having a bachelor party
LOL wen the boys wer fighting amongst themselves😆😆
Love the personal messages each boy got from ther partner
Ooh now arjun is in trouble...
I fink the haldi is held on the day of the wedding aswell
cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM
Edited by MaaneetLuverr - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
both the parts were good...
hilarious...
continue soon

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