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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.msk

Sorry Zeynab I didn't want to ..its just that It was in my head and it was bothering me so I had to put it down and ask you guys directily...I wasn't pointing fingers at anyone specific...yeah like you said life is not at all happy and worry free and boy do I wish that was true...we don't live in a utopian land lol...we need sad parts in order to move on with the story...
I know everyone is busy with their lives everyday such as myself and you..wow you are graduating..congratS!!!!! Hope everything goes well :) I have to catch up with you fan fic as well..btw you shld really start on another fan fic lol..hehe I will mention that again when I catch up with your parts lol
Good luck on ur exams and graduation!


i know i completely understand what you are talking about and where you are coming from.
THx yeah i am graduating. nervous but excited at the same time. June 6th is the ceremony. ahhh nerves...lol!

oh don't worry i have another fan fic in mind just need the time to sit down and put everything together. First i need to catch up on some sleep.😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 42
oh Geet's dad's diary and his life is so sad...
cont soon...

Originally posted by: MsMovielover

awesome update...
yaay glad it was a happy one...
cant wait to see how maan loosens up teji 😆

Originally posted by: sdtashin

SOOO SWEEET ONE...LOVED IT...

Originally posted by: t_areeb

sweet update,

like Rajji's way of irritating him..telling stupid jokes and copying him
and Tej, he is so protective of her sister, love Maan's excuse about the joke

Thank you guys...I want to thank each and everyone of you guys for telling me to continue on and not quit..and neither do I want too either...lol...
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Big hug for each and everyone of you guys!!!!!!
I love you guys and stay tuned on how Teji loosens up by Maan's magic lol
Love you!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zeynab111


i know i completely understand what you are talking about and where you are coming from.
THx yeah i am graduating. nervous but excited at the same time. June 6th is the ceremony. ahhh nerves...lol!

oh don't worry i have another fan fic in mind just need the time to sit down and put everything together. First i need to catch up on some sleep.😆

haha wow..don't worry you will do fine on ur graduation..I was a nervous wreck too on my graduation ceremony and I thought I would trip or fall or do soemthing stupid when I go up to get my diploma lol but thank god I saved myself from embarasement lol...hehe Good luck!!!
OoO can't wait till you start on another fan fic..it will be as great as your current one..whhile you sleep I will catch up with your parts lol
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: AmeenaForEva

Loved maaneet part
Update soon

Originally posted by: reenasv

omg loved the update.

maan ko kya kya karna padtha hai. he tried to crack jokes to make teji smile. omg.maan singh khurana is scared of Teji. . i cant believ it.
thnks for the early update.
continue soon.

Originally posted by: punjabi.princes

great parts!

glad geet has a new family and her father is back too
can;t wait for maaneet wedding
con't soon!

Originally posted by: MaansMishti

Loved it...plz cont soon!!

Originally posted by: blueopal

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! finally geet forgive her dad n accept her family as raji ,tej n dad...
maaneet ,raji n tej scenes r chooo cute...
i loved it...looking fwd...

Thank you guys!!!!
Maan isn't scared of Teji he just want everyone to like him he is msk and he iwll succeed in his mission lol...sooner or later lmao
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Hug for each and everyone of you...will update soon when i can lol...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Maaneet_Deewani

finally happy shappy update... yayyy... lovely update dear... brij the salla... hehehee... not even letting maaneet get close to each other... n rajji the bak-bak just like geet chatter box... 😆

my one request for nxt update... can we have some more maaneet "close" moments... 😳

Thank you so much!!!
Its Teji and I think maan will keep calling him salla and he doesn't mean brother-in-law either 😉
haha "close" moments..I will see what I can do and let me warn you I am not very good at it either so you guys would just ahve to use your imagination when I do put something up it won't be detailed lol
Love you!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.msk

haha wow..don't worry you will do fine on ur graduation..I was a nervous wreck too on my graduation ceremony and I thought I would trip or fall or do soemthing stupid when I go up to get my diploma lol but thank god I saved myself from embarasement lol...hehe Good luck!!!
OoO can't wait till you start on another fan fic..it will be as great as your current one..whhile you sleep I will catch up with your parts lol


u know that is what my friends are saying cuz i am going to have to wear heals since i am wearing a dress under and its very long so i will have to wear heals. but my friends tease me and say like don't trip or don't fall! lol thx though i think i need all the luck i can get.

hahaha well we just created a great plan. I catch up on some sleep and you catch up on reading my FF.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zeynab111


u know that is what my friends are saying cuz i am going to have to wear heals since i am wearing a dress under and its very long so i will have to wear heals. but my friends tease me and say like don't trip or don't fall! lol thx though i think i need all the luck i can get.

hahaha well we just created a great plan. I catch up on some sleep and you catch up on reading my FF.

ahaha I know wht you mean with dress and heels..I hate heels and can't walk in it to save my life..hehehe but If I can do it so can you lol...
That sounds like a plan..I will def. write a comment back on ur FF...Good night...heheh (Make sure to dream of Maan 😆😆😆)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sharmake11

lovely part

love it
waiting 4 next part
thanks 4 pm

Originally posted by: rosesana

Loved it
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Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

awesome part...finally geet has found the family she had been craving for...and all thanks to maan...

loving the easy and fun relationship Maan shares with Rajji...and the not so fun with Tej...lol...maan will teach him to loosen up...soon even enough...

Originally posted by: sweet cherry

loved da update

do continue
it was amzing

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

Cute update. Maan thinks geet is childlike. He becomes a child with her as well. Tickiling his soon to be wife is his way of showing affection n he actually needs privcy for this. Cute very cute

Originally posted by: mandymore

omg anthr update,thnk u...luvly prt aftr so long I laughd while readng dis,bt sad prt wzs also ncsary 4 story to progress,continue soon,n we all luv ur ffs,so dnt think abt stopping...tc

Thank you guys!!
I really appreciate each and everyone's comments!!!
Maan will def. teach Teji how to loosen up..HOW? Time will only tell lol
hahaa Basicquestion1..Maaneet don't care who watches them when they are having fun as long as they are together...
will continue soon!
Love you guys!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zahra15

am happy for geet...due to maan she has got a complete family...n as fas as teji is concerned...maan will have to do something or the other else he will never have time for alone for geet...lol...continue soon...

Originally posted by: shah10

supreb update.

love the king tut joke.

Originally posted by: amzu32

superb part.
Love the maaneet scene .
Rajji is so sweet.
N thanx 4 pm.

Originally posted by: maanhar

Geet aur Rajji ki bonding toh badi pyari hai, even though it is annoying Maan😊

Tejji toh Maan se bhi bada khadoos nikla😉 ab isko seedha kaise kare

Thank you guys!!!
Maan will def. have to teach Teji a lessen on how to loosen up..
I am glad i could make you guys laugh lol
will contineu soon!😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey guys!

After a while I am finally updating this lol...there was a request from one of the reader to write a part about Maaneet...so here it is...it is all Maaneet...I hope you guys find it cute 😆...I just wrote this so I didn't had time to proofread..ignore any mistakes😳

Part 44

Everyone sat in the living room discussing about the upcoming marriage of Maan and Geet...Maan was upstairs in the study room trying to catch up on work while Geet sat downstairs with her laptop playing games bored to death. she didn't care how the decoration looks, what she wore as long as she gets married to Maan. Dadima was with Arjun discussing about her outfits...Pinky, Meera and Nandani Bhabi were going over decorations, Vicky and Taj bhai went over the guest list and food preparations, her dad was talking to punditji..Raji was busy playing with cookie..both were chasing eahc other around the house, while Geet relaxed herself on the sofa watching all the mayhem around her...during the middle of the game Geet received an email...

Dear NyQueen,
Will you give me the honor of joining me for a dinner date one last time before you get married?

Love,
DelhiShark


Geet smiled seeing the letter...she came up with an idea...

Dear DelhiShark,
I would love to but what if my fiance Maan Singh Khurana finds out?

From,
NyQueen


Maan smiled after reading the letter..he smirked...

Dear NyQueen,
What he doesn't know won't hurt him...am sure he wouldn't mind..plus I bet he would be busy with his work and all...so what do you say? ;-)

Love,
DelhiShark

Dear DelhiShark,
hmmm you are right...but I don't know

From,
NyQueen

Dear NyQueen,
My heart is dying to see you one last time...please give my heart a rest...You are the tranquility of my heart...I need to see you one last time...my heart will be at peace if I could see you one last time...please

Love,
DelhiShark

Dear DelhiShark,
Since you insist...when and where?

Love,
NyQueen

Dear NyQueen,
I will text you the time and place...see you soon..mere dil ke chaen :-)

Love,
DelhiShark

Geet closed her laptop feeling happy...just then Maan came down from the study room...he looked at Geet and winked at her...she smiled and joined the others while Maan left to do some preparations of his own...a while later Geet receives a text from Maan...she smiles when she reads where she has to go...she looks at the time..."I have two hours to get ready" she quickly got up and headed toward her room to get ready...
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Geet goes to the outhouse which lit by candles all around...then she hears Maan...she smiles and starts looking around for him...


Pleae listen to this song!
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=heXQRxM2Gro&feature=fvwrel[/YOUTUBE]

He comes in front of her...she blushes and looks down
O Mere Dil Ke Chain
Chaen Aaye Mere Dil Ko Dua Kijiye
he takes her hand and places it on his heart...
O Mere Dil Ke Chain
she puts her head on his chest and listens to his heart beats...Maan holds her by her waist tightly and pulls her face up until he could see her eyes...he bends down to kiss her...after a while she loosens his grip and runs to another area of the house...

Before she could go anywhere else..he holds her sari pallu in his hand...he slowly walks toward her and places his one arm around her waist and hugs her from the back...he turns her around...and kisses her neck...slowly moving up to her ears, eyes and finally to her lips...both kiss each other passionately while Maan's hand explore her body...

Apna Hi Saaya Dekh Ke Tum
Jaane Jahan Sharma Gaye
Abhi To Yeh Pehli Manzil Hai
Tum To Abhi Se Ghabra Gaye
Mera Kya Hoga Socho To Zara
Haay Aise Na Aanhe Bhara Kijiye

Geet looks into Maan's eyes with love after their kiss...she starts moving back until she hits the wall and looks down...Maan comes in front and places both hands on either side of the wall trapping her...she ducks down as Maan was getting closer and walks away looking at Maan from behind...
O Mere Dil Ke Chain
Chaen Aaye Mere Dil Ko Dua Kijiye
O Mere Dil Ke Chain

Suddenly, it becomes dark she looks around...until Maan comes from behind with a match stick...Geet follows his hand movement in the dark...Maan smiles and lights a candle...he looks at her...he holds her one hand and places her other hand around his waist...both start dancing while looking into each other's eyes...she wraps her arms around his neck...while she puts her head on his shoulder and listens to Maan...

Aap Ka Armaan
Aap Ka Naam
Mera Taranna Aur Nahin
Inn Jhukti Palkon Ke Siva
Dil Thikana Aur Nahin
Jachta Hi Nahin
Aankhon Mein Koi
Dil Tumko Hi Chahe To Kya Kijiye

He takes hold of her hands and twirls her around...Maan smiles and starts walking looking back at Geet...
O Mere Dil Ke Chain
Chaen Aaye Mere Dil Ko Dua Kijiye
O Mere Dil Ke Chain

Geet starts following Maan lost in his voice and his eyes like a magnet...he stops midway and looks at Geet...he starts walking again..while Geet follows again...
Yun To Akela Hi Aksar
Gir Ke Sambhal Sakta Hoon Main
Maan almost trips but Geet runs to him and holds him...he looks at her
Tum Jo Pakad Lo Haath Mera
He holds her hand and kisses it....
Duniya Badal Sakta Hoon Main
Maanga Hain Tumhe Duniye Ke Liye
Ab Khud Hi Sanam Faisla Kijiye
He leads Geet through another pathway...Geet just looks at him and follows smiling...
O Mere Dil Ke Chain
Chaen Aaye Mere Dil Ko Dua Kijiye
O Mere Dil Ke Chain

She looks in awe when he takes her to the courtyard of the outhouse...it was decorated with flowers...Maan leads her to a swing...she sits down while Maan puts his head on her lap..both look at one another...

"So NyQueen how was your surprise?"

"I loved it...my khadus fiance never did something like this for me before..." (Maan sits up)

"Then I have an idea..." (she looks at him confused) "how about you runaway with me and leave that fiance of yours...I am not khadus like him..." (he holds her hand and looks into her eyes)

"hmm I would love to but I actually like that khadus..." (she smiles) "sorry you might need to find another NyQueen..DelhisShark"

"hmm theres only one Queen for me that rules my heart...no one else can replace her.." (both look at one another and laughs)

"I love you Maan..and I loved this surprise...promise me you will give me these kind of surprises after marriage"

"I promise...there's still a lot more to see of me..." (he winks at her..she playfully hits him on his chest..both hug one another and looks at the full moon above them...)

Precap: bachelor party...
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(So what do you guys want to see during the bachelor party? Any ideas?)
Edited by mrs.msk - 14 years ago

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