Abhay-Piya Poem.

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..Armaania..

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Hey friends, I have written poem on Abhay-Piya.

It is from Abhay dedicated to Piya.😳

aap se door reh paenge kaise,
do pal ki zindagi hain kat paenge kaise.
Meri sanson mein teri hi mohabbat,
Teri dhadkon mein, meri hi chahat.
Tujhe chor diya, tu mar jaonga.
Tujhe rok diya tu mit jaonga.
Tujhe panaah diya tu jal jaonga.
Mein ho teri arzoo, mein ho teri justajoo.
Tu hi meri manzil, tu hi mera sapna.
Magar tumse bithaye huve pal ki wajah se, mein khudko rok na pao, na mar na pao, na mit na jao tu sambhal jaon.

Do Comment.🤗

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Neetz

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Posted: 14 years ago

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😔.😔.😔

I miss Abhay 😲

As far as the poem goes, it is soo apt! You captured perfectly how Abhay's existence is incomplete without Pia! Specially the last line! Aww! It reminds me of their last moment together 😳

My poor Abhay 🥺

Beautifully written poem, Mahi 🤗

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Dark-Hues

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Awww sO muCh enChantin' .. Loved It ..
You've portrayed it very harmoniously 🤗

Misssin' my Abhay BunChes .. 🥺

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Originally posted by: Cute.Sadaf
Awww sO muCh enChantin' .. Loved It ..
You've portrayed it very harmoniously 🤗

Misssin' my Abhay BunChes .. 🥺

Aww thanks Sadaf.🤗 I miss abhay too.

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rashika aggarwal

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Posted: 14 years ago

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its really very touching ...

u have clearly showed the painful feelings of abhay 🥺

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Originally posted by: rashika27.1997
its really very touching ...

u have clearly showed the painful feelings of abhay 🥺

Thank You.😃

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natasha

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Posted: 14 years ago

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hey lovely,...thnx 4 sharng

i loved it to the core

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Originally posted by: natasha_mirani
hey lovely,...thnx 4 sharng
i loved it to the core

Thank you.😃

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Nidz

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Posted: 14 years ago

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wowww.Mahi..!!

This is superb ,..It describes Abhay n Pia's Situation..so perfectly ..!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

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very nice and very touching😕

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