FF i need you now update 2/8 pg 8

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hi all this is my first FF on arjun and arohi and I am not very good at writing and I hope you like it. pressure like butene and what you think about this FF and if I should are continuing



thanks Naz


arohi

arohi wanted answers after all these years, she had both expected and was scared at that moment. she had missed him and could still feel her broken heart. at that moment she was meeting his eyes got all memory back. the memory that she had tried to forget and move on during these three years. then came the memory of how he had broken her heart and left her. so I smile with the smile that everyone has learned to be afraid because I didnt whant him to see how he has hurt me and how this meeting has affected me. when I turn to go without saying anything for our eyes have spoken enough, as they always did.

and then he takes my wrist and says "arohi" without thinking, I give him a slap and say "arjun how dare you touch me or say my name, you lost that rights four three years ago " and turn around and go from there.

when I was returning my friend Jay who I have known each other since 3 years to come. I looked one last time back to arjun before I turned to Jay and gave him a big smile and said let's go back to the others. Jay looked at me questioningly and said what have you done you had that smile on you face and then he ask me how was that guy and is it howI think it is and I said yes and then train me his arm and we walked back to the others.



arjun

as soon as my eyes meet her, I lost myself in the. First I saw the surprise in the eyes then love that I have longed for in the past three years and then I saw hatred in the eyes how in past glitrade each time the meeting my eyes. and that made pains my heart to see the hatred in them and I knew that the hatred that I saw in her eyes was my own fel. then sudden I see a smile on her face, it was a tradition different smile and I do not know why but I got a bad feeling of this smile and then she turned to go without thinking I took her ankle and said arohi and then I got slapped. Her words did more hurt than that slapp and hate in her voice. after she turned around and went and then some guy came up to her and they hugged. I just stood there and watched as she go from my sight




index

intro pg 1

capitel 1 pg 2

note pg 5

chapther 2 pg 7

chapther 3 pg 8

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its gud naz dun wry yaar

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