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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 4

Omg...she is here...still in my car...i thought she left but no. She sat in the passenger seat...I m still trying to see her face as it is still dark...and suddenly...WHAT!!!!!...SHE HUGGED ME!!!!!!!...

Girl: thank u thank u thank u thanku thank u sooo much..

She broke the hug and then I saw her face cleary...WOW...she looks so beautiful in the moon light...her brown eyes...very deep as ocean...filled with unknown happiness...her lips...just like rose petals...when speaking moving up and down giving me the entertainment of my life...her soft skin...feels to touch it...omg what am I thinking.

Girl:oh hello why are you not responding?

She is waving her hand before my eyes...still I m staring at her...

Maan: wow

Girl(surprised): what???

Maan: na...nothing...

Girl:hmm...well..this is geet...geet handa.

She extended her hand I took it and shook.

Maan:oh..hi...i am maan...MAAN SINGH KHURANA.

Geet:oh...hi maan I m really sooo pleased to meet u...I was never pleased this much before for meeting anyone as I m pleased to meet u today...(courtesy : jab we met)

(plz don't mind frns I just love this dialoge so I kept it for geet...hope u don't mind)

before:Part 3

after:part 5

Edited by teju2292 - 14 years ago
tonyahk thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thank God! maan has changed his way of story telling from horror one to romantice one.
She broke the hug and then I saw her face cleary…….WOW….she looks so beautiful in the moon light…her brown eyes….very deep as ocean…filled with unknown happiness…..her lips…..just like rose petals…..when speaking moving up and down giving me the entertainment of my life…..her soft skin…..feels to touch it…..omg what am I thinking.
hi teja! is this the same MSK who was upset that a woman sat in his car a few minutes before? i can't believe this. now he is admiring her as if he has never seen a woman in his entire life. chalo...MSK never hates women during night (courtesy:...no..no... i won't tell who said this)🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
nice update dear.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
wowww teju
n yaa it was just my guess tht it was geet
n im righttt
n i also like d dialogue tht dialogue vry muchhh
n awesomeee
maan already imagining things abt geettt
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
Nice part
but short update...
update soon
teju2292 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: tonyahk

thank God! maan has changed his way of story telling from horror one to romantice one.

She broke the hug and then I saw her face cleary''.WOW'.she looks so beautiful in the moon light'her brown eyes'.very deep as ocean'filled with unknown happiness'..her lips'..just like rose petals'..when speaking moving up and down giving me the entertainment of my life'..her soft skin'..feels to touch it'..omg what am I thinking.
hi teja! is this the same MSK who was upset that a woman sat in his car a few minutes before? i can't believe this. now he is admiring her as if he has never seen a woman in his entire life. chalo...MSK never hates women during night (courtesy:...no..no... i won't tell who said this)🤣
nice update dear.
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hey tonya...
ROMANTIC SINGH KHURANAis really romantic na..ha ha😆🤣🤣🤣🤣
yeah yeah msk never hate woman at night...
🤣🤣
u dont say but i know who told that...
🤣🤣
🤣
he he...

Edited by teju2292 - 14 years ago
maaneetsangel thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow maan was impressed with her beauty at first sight it self...
eager to know from whom is she running though
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
awesome part
msk ...drooling over a girl & allowed her to hug him
...
amazing
thnx 4 d pm
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ok PM me... itz quite interesting...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 5

Maan:umm??

Geet:oh maaann...today u saved me...I am so happy...thank u very much...if u are not present today I dunno what would have happened to me..

Maan is still lost in her...staring into her eyes. She poked him on his sholder and that is when he came to the world.

Maan: get out

Geet: what?

Maan: get out of my car.

Geet: maan we are still in the same town, they will come back. So please now move the car from here.

Maan: tumhe suna nai maine kya kaha get out of my car NOW

Geet: achaa...what do u think of urself king or what ha!!..i m not getting out of ur car and it will be better if u start the car before anyone come.

Maan: yes I m king and I don't care who ever come. U should be thankful to me for not telling them that u r here but I don't think u have any such kind of things.

Geet: maan do u have short term memory loss or what?

Maan:what?

Geet: ha...I think u forgot...the first word came out of my mouth is thank u.

Maan:hmm

Geet: what hmm..now start the car and move from here.

Maan: no...I told to get out of my car.

Geet: even I told u that I m not going to get down.

Maan: geeettt

Geet: wow...u memory seems recovering quit quickly...u remember my name yaar.

Maan: geet don't irritate me and get down.

Geet: ok then let me explain u...u r in danger...

Maan: what?how? and no.

before:Part 4

after:part 6

Edited by teju2292 - 14 years ago

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