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Posted: 19 years ago
#1
Part-1
Anurag gets up from the bed.He
sees nobody on the bed.
A:Where is Prerna?she may b
in the kitchen
P busy in the kitchen.A
enters.A smiles:what r u
making?
P:u got up?anurag,2day Mukti is
coming back after studies
no.so i'm making her fav
food.poor mukti.she does'nt get
nice food in the hostel
A:she'l b missing her mom's
food
P smiles:Ur pamper is what
Mukti misses most
A smiles.
P:its the time 2 stop
pampering & find a guy
A:ya,we'll find a guy 4
her.but thats not a reason 2
P:Anurag...u r spoiling her
A:never.our daughter is the
most disciplined girl
P;since we shifted 2 a new
house,it wil b difgficult 4
her 2 find this house.Anurag,we'll
go 2 pick her up
A:sure

Anurag-prerna go 2 the bus
stop.they wait 4 mukti's bus.
The bus does'nt cum.
A asks a person:Did the bus
anupama cum?
he:it came early
A:what?mukti told us the wrong
time?
P gets tensed:without waiting 4 us,Mukti went in search
4 us?Oh!where wud've she
reached?
A consoles P:calm down
prerna.she'l b sumwhere here.we'll
find her
A-P look 4 M.but they
did'nt find.They sweat due 2
tension.Suddenly A's mobile
rings.A listens 2 what that
person told.A was shocked

WHO RANG UP HIM?WHY WAS HE
SHOCKED?WHERE IS MUKTI?WHAT
HAPPENED 2 HER?

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Posted: 19 years ago
#2
Thanx 4 dat. But I don't get it, Is AP meant to be together in it, if so why is mukti there 😕 😕 😕
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Posted: 19 years ago
#3
😉 Keep reading.lots of twists r there.
Edited by jasminerahul - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#4
r anu -prerna married and mukti their daughter?
cool fanfic jasmine u started one on kasauti!
its pretty good up till now!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#5
hey das coool plz carry on 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wooow i like it keep it up 😊 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#7
Part-2....Anurag was very serious.
Prerna:who's that om?
A:cum,we'l go home
P:no,i want 2 see my daughter
Tears on her eyes.
A:get inside the car
prerna.there is an imp matter at
hime
P:nothin is more imp than my
daughter
A:pererna,plz cum.its related
2 mukti
P:related 2 mukti?how?
A:1st u get inside the car
P gets inside the car
A drives the car.he looks P.P
was very upset.They reach
home.
A:go inside
P:anurag…mukti…...u said sumthing
is here related 2
mukti
A:ya,u go inside
A holds P's hand & go
inside.P:whats seen here?nothing.
want 2 see mukti
Sumbody closes P's eyes with
arms.
P:anurag...whats this?ur touch is
so much of like mukti's

Arms r taken off my her eyes.
P looks.Was surprised.It was
mukti. P:mukti!
P hugs P:where were u?
M:i was here.i reached here
after u all left.i told u
the wrong time of the bus,so
that u'l reach there
late.so that i can search 4
this house & reach here &
giv u all a surprise.
P:u naughty!
A smiles:let her b naughty.she
can b naughty only 2 us.
M:u r right papa.

Prerna has arranged
lunch.k:wow!my fav food.i really
missed it.
M eats it.A:whats ur next
plan?
P:has 2 get her married
M:mama,i want 2 go 4 a job.
A:gud,if its ur wish,fine.
M:thanku papa

Mukti goes 4 an
interview.While walking on the road,a
car began 2 hit her.M got
tensed & moves 2 a side.A
handsome young guy gets out of
the car.

WHO'S HE?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#8
thats a interesting ending you made!! it leaves me excited to know who that guy is maybe it can be prem who knows 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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cool part!
i think its prem!
cont soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#10
Part-3..He becomes angry:can't u see my car coming
4ward?
Mukti thinks:what does he
think of himself?its ok.i
became careless.so its not his
fault actually
M:sorry.i was going 4 an
interview.so my mind was ful of
that
He:its ok.whats ur name?
M:Mukti
He:I'm Prem
M:eventho we met thru a
fight,nice 2 meet u
P:sorry
M:its ok.if I was in ur
position,I wud've behaved like
this only.if accident happens
the blame wil b on the
driver even if the fault is
not his'
P smiles:where r u going 4 the
interview?
M takes up the newspaper &
shows:here.I'm not sure about
the places here as I'm new 2
this place
P:ok then,u get inside my
car,I'll drop u there
M:no thanku
P:don't hesitate.u'l b late.u
can trust me
M smiles:ok
M gets inside the car:what do
u do?
P:I'm running a hospital.I'm a
doctor there
M:wow!u r a dr?gud.
They reach the place. M:thanks
a lot.if u'd'nt helped
me,I wud'nt hav reached here
by time since I dunno this
place
P:Best of luck.u r smart.so
u'll get this job.
M:thanx
M turns & walks. P:mukti…..
M turns back. P gives a
card:this is my visiting
card.whenver u need my help,u
can contact me.if u need
my help 2 reach sumwhere also
contact me.but plz don't
see me as ur driver.consider
me as ur friend.
M smiles. P:bye
Mukti does go 2 the room where
interview is going 2 b
conducted.
There 1 man was sitting &
staring at her.
WHO IS HE?

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