MN-AT * It's all Destiny - Ch 19, Pg 59 THE END - Page 12

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Posted: 14 years ago
Bidz, another wonderful update by you dear ... I am really loving the pace of the story - Taani and Mayank feeling something and their thoughts were just amazing - I am really looking forward to what exam is she going to take - it seems very interesting and Mayank and Nupur's last scene was beautiful ... Taani noticing Mayank's changes was again very cute ...

Sorry for being late, I just have one exam left then I'll be regular ...

God bless you,
Jaee D. Rathore
Edited by JaeeDevRathore - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice one yaar...
Bichsare Taani & mayank in confusion...
Hope u update the next one soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey nautanki
lovely part...i m sure u r nt 17..
Update sun..
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Posted: 14 years ago
nic part dear .thanks for pm dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome part!!! Loved it!!! Taani n Mayank fallen in love with Anu n Nupur!!!! So cute!!! Update asap!!!
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awesome update!! loved it, cant wait for the nest update! thnx for the PM
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🤗AMAZING update dear!!!🤗 😆Taani knows her brother very good😆 Taani going to ''test'' Anurag reminded me of MJHT when Suhani ''tests'' Adhiraj..😊 Plzzz update ASAP dear😳 and thanks for the PM dearEmbarrassed
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lovely part
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey guys,

Thanks a lot friends for your lovely comments. Well, I am extremely sorry for being so late in updating. School really makes me exhausted a lot, plus, I am not well these days. Gonna have a surgery on 30th of this month. Don't worry, its just a minor surgery for the tumour inside my neck. Please pray for me friends. 😊
But not to worry at all guys, update will be available tomorrow morning (for people in North America) / today at night (for people in Asia). 😃😃
Just have a little more patience. 😉
Take care and love you all. 😳
Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago
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Chapter 6 - Pyaar Mein Twist

Mayank was speechless and Nupur was so scared that she didn't even realize what she was doing. Slowly Mayank's hands went up to Nupur's arms and he hugged her back, too. The moment was epic. Both were so lost in hugging each other. The moment had stopped right at that moment. They forgot that they just met the previous day. Both were so comfortable in the arms of each other that no one could tell that they are just friends. He moved his hands on Nupur's head and consoled her. He tried his best to make her feel better.

"Nupur, kuch nahin hua! Bura sapna tha. Sab theek hai. Main hoon naa tere saath. Shaanth ho jaa." Mayank said.

Nupur realized about her act. She broke the hug quickly. She felt embarrassed thinking what she did. She rubbed her finger on her forehead and lowered her eyes. Mayank understood Nupur's situation.

"Tu soja, main chalta hoon. Chal good night." Mayank said hesitantly.

Nupur nodded positively and said, "Good night."

Mayank left. Nupur seemed confused.

"Maine toh Onu Da soch kar gale lagaya tha. Mujhe kaise nahin pata chala ke woh Mayank the. Unke baaho mein mujhe itna sukun kyun mila? Humesha toh aisa tab hi lagta hai jab main Onu Da ko gale lagaati hoon. Par aaj aisa kyun hua? Akhir meri destiny mujhse kya kehena chahta hai?" Nupur thought in mind.

She said, "Yeh kya soch rahi hoon main? Kal subha audition hai aur main abhi tak jagi huyi hoon? I better need to sleep now."

She turned off the lamp and slept.


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Next morning, Nupur got ready for the audition. She went to Onu Da's room and shocked to see him still sleeping.

"Humesha toh Onu Da 9 am baje uth jaate hai, abhi 10 am baj gaye aur yeh abhi tak so rahe hai?" Nupur thought confusingly.

"I hope inki tabiyat theek hai." Nupur thought and got worried.

She rushed to Anurag and touched Anurag's forehead.

"Bukhar toh nahin hai. Phir yeh abhi tak so kyun rahe hai?" Nupur said to herself.

Anurag woke up and smiled seeing Nupur.

"Arey Nupur, tu aise ready hokar kaha jaa rahi hai?" Anurag inquired.

"Dada, bataaya tha naa 11 am baje audition hai. Waise aap itni der tak so kyun rahe the? I mean aap toh jaldi uth jaate hai." Nupur asked Anurag confusingly.

Anurag touched his forehead and squeezed his eyes.

"Nupur, woh sar mein bohot dard kar raha hai. Raat ko theek se so bhi nahin paya. Sorry behena! Kaha tha ke tere saath chalunga par yeh sar dard hai ki peecha nahin chod rahi. Sorry yaar! Tu akeli chali jaa naa." Anurag told Nupur sadly.

"Aap ki tabiyat kharab hai aur main audition dene jaayu? Bilkul nahin. Main yehi apne dada ke paas rahekar unka khayaal rakhungi." Nupur said to Anurag with a determined look.

Anurag smiled and touched Nupur's cheeks.

"Tu audition dene jaayegi." Anurag said with a determined look.

"Par dada?!?!?!" Nupur said worriedly.

Anurag smiled and said, "Arey itna tension kyun leti hai? Itni bhi tabiyat kharab nahin huya hai. Sirf sar dard hi hai. Dawaai lunga toh theek ho jaayunga. Dekh, main nahin chahta ke meri vajah se tu yeh golden opportunity miss karde. Tu jaa aur apna sapna pura kar. Main theek hoon, meri fikar mat kar."

Nupur smiled and nodded positively.

"Aur haan! Mayank ko bhi saath le jaa. Woh toh Mumbai ke baade mein sab kuch jaanta hai. Tujhe jaldi auditorium mein pohocha degaa." Anurag said.

Nupur's smiling face turned to nervousness.

"Par dada, main akeli jaa sakti hoon." She said annoyingly.

Anurag put his finger on Nupur's lips and said, "Ek dum chup! Mayank tere saath jaayega, bas maine kehe diya."

"Par unhe agar koi kaam hua toh?" Nupur said.

Mayank entered and said, "Mere ko koi kaam nahin hai Nupur. Main tere ko auditorium pohocha dunga. Aur waise bhi mere ko Mumbai ka sab kuch pata hai, tu jaldi pohoch jayegi."

Anurag smiled and said, "Thanks Mayank!"

"Dosto ke liye koi thanks nahin! Tu tension mat le. Main teri behen ko sahi salamat apni jagaah pohocha dunga." Mayank smilingly replied.

Anurag smiled, hugged Nupur and wished her all the very best. Nupur thanked her bro smilingly and went out of the room with Mayank. On their way, they met Taani in the kitchen.

"Taani, main kuch kaam se bahar jaa raha hoon. Jaldi aa jayunga." Mayank informed Taani.

Taani smirked and whispered teasingly, "Haan haan bhai! Dekh rahi hoon kya kaam hai. Bohot acchi tarah se jaanti hoon tere dimaag mein chal kya raha hai."

Mayank playfully hit Taani on her shoulder and said, "Chup kar!"

Nupur, who was standing at a corner, walked to Taani and said with a concerned look, "Taani, Onu da ka khayal rakhna please. Unki sar mein bohot dard hai. Please unhe dawaai de dena. Aur woh agar bahar jaana chahe toh please unhe kahi mat jaane dena."

Taani smiled mischievously and thought, "Anurag Chatterjee ghar pe rahenge aaj. Koi baat nahin! Plan ka venue change karna padega."

"Tu tension mat le. Anurag ka khayal main rakhungi. Tu bas araam se apni audition dekar aaja. All the best." Taani smilingly said and hugged Nupur.

Nupur smilingly hugged her back and said, "Thanks yaar!"

Taani bid bye to Mayank and Nupur and went to Anurag's room with a glass of milk and tablets for headache.

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Mayank stopped his bike in front of an auditorium.

"Yeh le, tera auditorium aa gaya." Mayank smilingly said to Nupur.

Nupur slightly smiled and said, "Thanks!"

Nupur was walking toward the entrance. Mayank stretched out his hand and said, "Nupur, ek baat sun!"

Nupur turned back and said, "Haan?"

Mayank showed Nupur a thumbs up sign and said with a smile, "All the best!"

Nupur smiled broadly and said, "Thank you!"

Nupur went inside the auditorium.

"Jab aa jayegi toh kal raat ke liye maafi mang lunga. I just hope ke Nupur mujhe maaf karde." Mayank said with a worried look.

Suddenly he smiled thinking of Nupur and went inside the auditorium. He was looking at Nupur very lovingly with the cutest smile from a corner without letting Nupur know. Nupur was called inside the auditorium. Mayank came inside and stood behind the wall of the auditorium. He had his arms folded and his back leaned against the wall. Nupur started to sing the song -

Kisi ko sapna lagey tu, kisi ko behti hawaa [Mayank smiled and blushed continuously]
Kisi ko bas baaton mein, kare pal mein yahaan wahaan
Kisi ke sau jhoot sun le, kisi ka sacch bhi gunaah
Kisi ka bas yaadon mein, kare hulchul saara jahaan
Te amo me te amo [He remembered the smiley and angelic Nupur and smiled]
Tu chhaanv hai, tu dhoop hai
Te amo me te amo
Tere hazaron roop hai
Koi samjha nahin, jo bhi hai bas khoob hai
Falling so crazy in love
Te amo me te amo
Tu chhaanv hai, tu dhoop hai
Te amo me te amo
Tere hazaaron roop hai

Kabhi lagey raaton mein main khwaabon se baatien karoon subah unhi [He remembered their first conversation]
Khwaabon ko main kaabu karoon
Kabhi lagey taaron se bhi, unche udaane bharoon
Kabhi lagey baadalon se jaibein bharoon

Te amo me te amo [He remembered the moment when Nupur looked at him and her eyes were gorgeous]
Taare ginu tere liye
Te amo me te amo
Saare chunu tere liye
Khwaab saare bunu tere hi tere liye
Falling so crazy in love
Te amo me te amo
Taare ginu tere liye
Te amo me te amo

Kabhi lagey mili nahin, tumse main khwaabon mein bhi [He remembered the moment of their first hug]
Kabhi lagey kahin toh hai ristha koi
Kabhi lagey chhu tumhe, yunhi khayalon mein hi
Kabhi lagey nahin nahin chori nahin

Te amo me te amo
Tu paas hai par door hai
Te amo me te amo [He remembered Nupur's angelic face once again]
Jaata nahin yeh noor hai
Teri chori bhi yeh manzoor manzoor hai
Falling so crazy in love
Te amo me te amo

Te amo me te amo
Jaata nahin yeh noor hai

"Teri awaaz ne mere ko tere sapne mein le hi gaya Nupur. Duniya ki sabse pyaari awaaz hai yeh. Ek nasha sa chaa gaya yaaar! Goddd! I love her! I know I just love her! Yeh peheli nazar ka pyaar hota hai ke nahin yeh mere ko nahin pata. I just know one thing that I love her. Aaj hi usse sab kuch kehe dunga. Aur yeh bhi bol dunga ke main kya karta hoon. Sab kuch bol dunga. Phir jo hoga, dekha jayega. Agar destiny ne mera aur Nupur ka naam ek saath likha hai toh hum zaroor milenge chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye." Mayank thought in mind excitedly and smiled broadly.

He saw Nupur talking with the judges and left from there. He went near his bike and his phone rang. He picked up the call and after hearing what the caller said, he replied with a serious expression, "Plan change nahi hoga. Aaj raat hi buddhe ki saari maal harap lenge. Sun, mere ko sab Mumbai ka perfect chor bolte hai. Main inn police-volice se darne waala nahin. Chahe jitni bhi security ho, aaj raat hi sab kuch hona chahiye. Sab taiyaar rahena. Main 10pm baje aa jaayunga." Saying that, he cut the call and turned back.

Nupur was standing right there with numb and shocked expressions. Mayank saw her and is shocked. He forwarded his hand and said, "Nupur.. woh.." Nupur left from there like a storm. She was burning with anger.

"Nupur, meri baat toh sun." Mayank said worriedly and ran after her.


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Precap:

A girl came in Mayank-Taani's house.. Taani saw her and smiled mischievously..

Mayank was trying hard to make Nupur understand..

Anurag noticed Nupur's frown expressions and questioned her if everything was alright.. Nupur looked at Mayank with serious expressions..

Will Nupur understand the fact that situations forced Mayank to become a thief or will she tell Anurag the truth?

Stay tuned with "It's all Destiny" to know that.


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Well this was a MaYurilicious chapter.. Promise to update a TaAnulicious chapter next time.. 😃

Don't forget to press LIKE.. 😉

Waiting for your comments.. 😊

I hope this update could meet to all of your expectations.. 😳

Love... Bidz 😃
Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago

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