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Posted: 14 years ago
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I have written a small piece on 13/05 episode and tried to show Runjhun's feelings ...hope you like it...do comment The reason behind my feelings Life is a beautiful dream Love and Trust is its cream But when I saw you Leaning on other girls I felt my world is doomed You pushed me to a trench
Where you made me think
Was it my fault
That I started trusting you
Was it my fault
That I started building a feeling
Which is still unknown to me
I accept my defeat
I admit,you can never change
I was a fool to think
That I will mend your ways
I was a fool to think
That you can ever change
Now,when I see the gift
You presented,it pains my heart
As if thousands of Hybla bees
Have stung on my heart
Your touch gives
A disgusting feeling to me
You tried to touch me
With the same hands
You touched that women
And when I showed my disgust
You said, touching me is your right
How can you get your right
When you are wrong
You put questions on my character
When you got to know
The reason behind my disgust
You blamed me
Declared me characterless
For once have you thought
How much it pained me
How can I love someone else
When my morning starts
Seeing your face
my night ends ,seeing your face
How can I think about someone else
When my life is bonded with you
But I know the real truth
I am not like the girl you want
I am not like her...
You cannot listen
A single word against her
But can blame me
For loving someone else
You left without answering
To my questions in anger
Your anger is not new to me
But your distrust is killing me
I never expected anything from you
But your empty doubts are killing me
I wish I could define
This unknown feeling
That hailed in my heart
Like a gust of wind
Then I would have known
The reason behind my feelings

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Good poem. That's exactly what rhunjhun is feeling right now.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#3

you have described Runjhun's feeling very well...keep it up

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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved. it. amazing. this shows Runjhun's feelings and thoughts. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#5
Amazing words, I was just waiting to read on runjhun. Great.
sur001 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you so much for liking...your appreciation adds beauty to my little work... Thanks a ton for liking😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very Beautiful Sur...

You put in word what Ruhnjun could not say...
Keep them coming...eager to read more...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey sur...too beautiful...i think nevidita will be very happy if she has checked it...in real life she is also an MA in english and her words are very poetic.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow, you are good! Keep them coming!

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